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Charactersketch - below
chapter1- below
chapter2- click here
chapter3- click here
ps- initially chappy are going to be boring
till Raghav meet Kalpana . So u need to
keep patince if u read it...
character sketch
This story start from his obession but what about end??
Where this journey going to where he going to lead her!!
She is not his love only !!! She is his obession !! She is not his FIRST LOVE !!
She is his OBESSION!!!
...
CHARACTER SKETCH
Gauri Singhania - Mother of Raghav singhania. 50 years old loved her son a lot!!
Samar Raizada( Sammy)- Biggest support of Raghav & his best friend ! He care for Raghav a lot .. Ready to even die for him. 30 years old.
Akruti singhania- Raghav first love . His first wife . He used to love her a lot !! Infact he still love her a lot but he lost her in an accident !! Akruti - a 26 years old girl sweet & bubbly but now died !!

Raghav Singhania - a 31 years old businesss tycoon. Known for his work & charm !! He do anything to for what he want !! Still finding his Akruti !! A dark personality since he lost his akruti.

Kalpana - An orpan a 24 year old girl . A scholar and most bright student . Sweet & caring but use to carved for love .

More character as story follows
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter1

She was locked behind doors in a dark apartment . His apartment like a prisnor. She love him still he is insecured .

Tears roll down from her eyes as her eyes fell on her husband her Raghav who was slepping peacefully holding her after claming her his . Their bodies tangled with each other .
Thing is not that she hate him , neither she want to run from him . She want to live a normal life with him like all other couples do . She herself agreed to be in his cage . She love him to no extent . Just want him to be happy , he love her , he take care of all small things related to her . She love him .

Then what???

Still she is caged in his apartment from 15 days .
Neither allowed to go outside not even allowed to talk to anyone . Neither allowed to see anyone .
She is caged in his love!!

Story is continued in flashback as i've given u all part where kalpana was prisoned in a flat !!

Some months before..

He open his eyes as sun rays start disturbing his sleep .

R- Akruti close windows na let me sleep .
A- mr. Singhania time to wake up don't be lazy ..
Saying so she place a kiss on his cheeks ..
A smile play on his lips and he grab her by her waist pulling her close to him . So that now she was beneth him..

He place a kiss in crook of her neck

A- hww that's cheating Raghav leave me .
R- i nvr gonna leave u . Saying so he was about to place his lips on her when he disturbed by a knock on door!!

He fumed
R- who is it??
G- beta open the door .

He irritaningly fall on arkruti
A- leave me now and go look mom is calling ..
R- i'll see u later ..
Saying so he went toward door and open it come to face with to face with Gauri smiling face ..

G- finally u wake up !! U know na Raghav u need to go to office ? U are getting late !!

R- i'm not going office mom!!
I gonna spend time with my Akruti ..

Gauri went pale after listning Akruti ...
G- Raghav
She say while carresing his face
G- beta Akruti is no more

She say while hesitating ..

Raghav clenctch his fist stopping her hand to touch him..
R- HOW DARE U TO SAY THIS?? SHE IS WITH ME SOME MOMENTS BEFORE !! MOM IF U AGAIN SAY THAT BAD TO MY AKRUTI I'LL FORGOT THAT U ARE MY MOM.
He say while jerking gauri hand away

G- Raghav try to understand months pasess sinc..
R- u can't believe me na??? U can't
I'll show u !!

He took her inside to his room

R- Akruti Akruti
He yell but none came ...

R- she was here

He went to bathroom but none here . He yell & checked whole house but their was not a single clue of her ...

He was panicked ..
G- Raghav !!
But now neither he is calling her nor showing any emotions...

R- I need to go office . I have an important meeting to attend .

Saying so he went ..
Gauri knew very well that his son again realize akruti is not here ...

Once on her demand thry consult phycatrist but doctor conformed that he is fine but just it's her love that he unable to accept that he lost her...


She wipe her tears which start forming in her eyes and went to his room when her eyes fell on his room...

6 months 6 long months passes since she left & still every corner of his room is in her accordance . Their was not even a single place where her memories are not present!!!


Praying her god to give him his life back Gauri went to her room. Unable to bear her son in pain..
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Okz do tell me u like it or not HONESTLY ..
I took Rachana previous serial name & image as i unable to give second hand to Kalpana and moreever i can't think anyone with Raghav except her

Edited by darkloveriam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi neha nice concept dear u took rachana previous serial name interesting as iwas thinking the same without kalpi it wont be interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update its so heart touching t see rag in pain
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ip 👏 superb raghav lost his wife
and he still thinks his wife alive
there re lots of questions
So neha start answers i mean updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fantastic...
pls continue dear...
🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanx for likes & cmnts
Chapter 2 ( his obession)

Singhania Construction

Sammy greeted Raghav with a warm hug . To which he rply formally as he don't want to listen anyone ..
Raghav know what he going to say that akruti is his imagination but no he know his love can't leave he like that alone...
How could she ?? She promised him she stay with him foreever till her last breath till his last breath . Then how could she do that with him??
Raghav pick up her pic that was on his table while carresing it he say
R- i'm angrgy on u ? Do u know that ?? They think i'm gone mad . They say u left . U don't i know !! U still here .
But then why are u not coming back don't u miss me?
Come back plz i need u !!!
When he felt someone wrapped her arms around his waist back hugging him!
A- how u beleive that i leave u??
and a smile play on his lips
A- i'll never leave u . U know that na?
He nodded in a yes
But while turning toward her he say
R- don't talk to me mrs singhania !!
Akruti eyes widen at this sudden change
Resting her hands on his heart she say
A- may i know the Reason??
Resting his head on her he say
R- bcoz u don't love me . That's why u left me ! In mrng i was serching u in whole house . But u went ...
Come back na i want to show all i'm alright mom, sammy & doctor who say u left !!
A- oh so u need me to proof them only
She say in a teasing tone while stepping back
Before she went to far he immidatly wrapped his hand around her waist blocking her to go anywhere.
R- damn they . ..
I don't care about them . I don't care about ANYONE. I need u , i can't leave without u !!!!
Saying so he move close to her face feeling her breaths
When he hear his PA voice
PA- sir u need to go to visit site sammy sir calling u
Raghav immidly turn toward hwr fuming for disturbing him
R- don't u know i don't like disturbance when i'm with my wife ! How dare u ??
U are fired . I don't want to see ur face again in office .
PA look behind him his office was empty but she can't point out this she know that
PA- si sir . I i'm sorry
R-i said go
Out of his cabin many employess gathered listning him yelling ..
When sammy went inside his cabin
S- what happen Raghav ??
R- what kind of staff is in office sammy ?? Don't they know i don't like disturbance when i'm with my wife .
Sammy say pA to go he will handle him.
S- Raghav Akruti is not here !!
R- don't start again look here she is
He say while turning but none was their ..
R- where she went ?
Without streaching topic sammy say him that they need to visit a site and drag Raghav with him..
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Nxt - Akruti or Kalpana
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hush finish:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome getting intrigue t know more
Rag loves akruti t no extent
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update Neha
Raghav facing hallucination
Is akruti has the face of kalpi
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WAITING...PLEZ UPDATE..😃

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