RagNa (AshNa) TS: Poison and Elixir (Completed) last part pg 7

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Arpita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: rani214
Fabulous concept ...m fan of fiction story n u have written dis stry brilliantly 👏
Loved d ending ...how kalpi ended d curse n saved rags life too 😳
Thnks for giving dis beautiful story ❤️ 🤗

Aww.. thank you so much trupti😃😃

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Arpita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
👏 nice story dear..

Thanks a lot😃

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Arpita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Awesome ending 👏
Loved this TS ❤️

Thanks a lot ushoshi😃

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IThinkALot

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Read a Ragna story after a long time. I'm not a fan of fantasy, nevertheless I liked this work of yours! 😊

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Arpita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: ban18
Read a Ragna story after a long time. I'm not a fan of fantasy, nevertheless I liked this work of yours! 😊

Thank you so much rishu😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

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Shall read it soon ...hope u keep getting such ideas 😆

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Wow..fabulous update and its ending too.

the way you have shown flashbacks connected to each other was fantastic..thats really unique how you connected both the flashbacks.

i was thrilled when kalpi had killed raghav...for once she had fulfilled her duty for which she has taken rebirth. But on other side of coin, she had fulfilled her duty as a lover by sacrificing her powers Giving a new life to raghav..

loved the ending.

song dedication..

tu jo hai toh main hoon..

Teri saanson ki saans mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon
Tere khwabon ki aanch mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon

Bin tere mera kya hai
Jisko sunu jisko kahoon
Bin tere mujh mein kya hai
Jisko jiyun jis mein rahun
Tujh mein hi duniya meri hai
Tere ik pal mein sadiyan meri
Bin tere main sehra saa hoon
Bin tere main qatra bhi nahi

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon