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Swara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Very nice update smriti

Kalpi was in affect of his electric touch from the first meet... Lol and raghav he is very much seducter as he closed her in his charm with her boss

By the way who is she??

He convinced her parents to take her aboard... But why??

What is the intentions of this man?

Flashback was nice...

Update soon

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Nandinisai
Nice update

thank you beautiful😳😉⭐️

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: kinnapatel
😉hey why u said its boring .its beautifuly written thnak you lets see what come next ,soon please

heya kinna😳

I knew you will like the chapter. 😃 its only because of you I drop my thought of discontinuing the story. Since from the last chapter I was thinking, I m not satisfing the story line.

but your messages motivated me alot

hehehehehe😃😃

so kinna, I assure you from next chapter onwards you will see more of romance and more of suspense but with a pinch of laughter

love

smriti😳

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

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Originally posted by: ayesha.khan
Awesome updatee

heya 😊

you liked it????? thank you so much

😃 if you feel some points should be rectified in story . please feel free to tell, I will love to improve

thanks

love

smriti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: riaka
Awesome update. Electric shock 😆.
still nothing clear.
Waiting for next chapter 👏

heya😊

yahh I will try to update soon

what is not clear??? is there something that I should focus more on.

please feel free to suggest. THat will help me alot

thanks

love riaka😉

smriti

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Awesome update
Hmm kalpi get such a treatment nice opening of door for her hayy
Hmm kalpi in FBI
Wow she got a KOB n met him
He give electric shock t kalpi MDR
Kalpi in agreement with him
Update. Soon

heheehehehehehhe

sweet 1308

You did the same torture to me , what I do to you all.

you confused me with your code language( KOB, MDR)

HEHEHEHE😆

I will try to update soon

love sweet 1308

please tell your name😳

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
awesome chappy dear... Nd thnx for PM... Plz update nxt chappy soon.. Waiting..

heya

ur welcome

infact I should thank you, that you are responding positively for my story😃

I will update soon

love u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: deepu_kutty
Nice update.

thanks 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: swara2504
Very nice update smriti
Kalpi was in affect of his electric touch from the first meet... Lol and raghav he is very much seducter as he closed her in his charm with her boss
By the way who is she??
He convinced her parents to take her aboard... But why??
What is the intentions of this man?
Flashback was nice...
Update soon

hey swara 😃

the fact of why he was so curious of taking her with him will be unfold in my next to next to next to next

chapter and the suspense of lady will be out soon,.

but now I desperately want to show some of their under same roof scene.

then that lady will appear.

thank you so much for liking the story. you are supporting it from starting

love

smriti