Ragna ss :left alone ( discontinued)

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Somewhere deep In your heart , you know you are pretending.with the passing days you increased the rythm of your torture. Creating the vaccum and hole. Making me a mortal with unshead tears.
You were suppose to be the pillars of my streangth but ended making me a RUN AWAY BRIDE...

In the family of 5 you decreased it to 3. Building the blank rooms of empty emotions and null feeling you left me all alone!!! So as to mesmerise the beauty ...to memorise those torture of mine nd ur mistress in the same room.
I remember the warmth of yours.. I admit my desires for you... My ache for you... My needs for you !! Opening such new different world for me... Later you choose to stay with her!!
I ask you why?WHY? WhAt IS my NEED !!!
Having the mistress in your bed . Why have you tied me with you. Why don't you leave me!! WHY DON'T. you. Let me go !!!!
Anyways... I m not week! I need you but I will not let you command me.. To taste me when you want!! Instead I want you to feel how lonely you have made me.. I love you nd will let you love me.. But in my ways
chapter 1- page 4
chapter 2- page 8
chapter 3- page 12
chapter 4- page 16
chapter 5- page 22
chapter 6- page 30
chapter 7- page 36
chapter 8- page 47
chapter 9- page 56



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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is my life time first topic... I m not a writer!! My English is way too poor.still I feel like writing 😊
So I just want to use this platform to know... Whether I can build such quality in me.
I wrote just to entertain myself !!
Hope no one will offence 😊


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Smriti 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was soo good interesting dear 👏 I loved it
Pls continue soon na 😉
BTW wats ur name??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow interesting concept good update soon
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I don't know how to reply individually !!!! My name is smriti
@appu lover 😊
I m on the cloud... I m really feeling good.. That you responded
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Originally posted by: sweet1308

Wow interesting concept good update soon


Thanks 😊 😊
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Originally posted by: sweet1308

Wow interesting concept good update soon



Thanks 😊
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Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

It was soo good interesting dear 👏 I loved it
Pls continue soon na 😉
BTW wats ur name??


Hey... My name is smriti 😊
ND I suppose urs is aparna 😊
Actually I got it when I was reading lion and panthers
This is my first time hand on writng.. 😛
ND moreover I don't know how to use this forum... Anyways will learn fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dragonok

I don't know how to reply individually !!!! My name is smriti
@appu lover 😊
I m on the cloud... I m really feeling good.. That you responded


Aww smriti nice name 😉 even I started writing recently so can understand ur feelings completely 😃 Go on babes update soon don't delay I'm very eager to read 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dragonok


Hey... My name is smriti 😊
ND I suppose urs is aparna 😊
Actually I got it when I was reading lion and panthers
This is my first time hand on writng.. 😛
ND moreover I don't know how to use this forum... Anyways will learn fast


Yes I'm Aparna Arsenio 's soon to be wifey 😳
Hahaha jokes apart yup I understood this is ur frsr time.. Well it's always a frst time glad that u decided to post ur update 😃

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