The Lion and the Panther (RagNa ff) 2nd Thread REMOVED - Page 6

Originally posted by: Sukchandu

Yayyy [:D/] ... Update again 😆



Urghhh 😡 ... How low can this disgusting man can go to. Actually my apologies he isn't a man either 😡 🤢

A nail biting update again... I was like what would happen now, how would it go on now 😲 but u killed it the way they secured Lord and the Lady

Oh yes... I know he would chop off that head which held knife to kalpi's neck. Death dance required 😡 🤪

Vidya... Is there a chance where we would see Thomas or the Lions (sorry, forgot the names) chewing off his hands or legs, ofcourse not kill him but give him the utmost pain before he dies. His vile disgusting head should only be chopped of by The LORD. I'm super duper happy to see Fear in those eyes 😆
(P.S - my emotions could have the impact of GOT too :P Hehehhehe)


Raghav and his ways of showing affection 😆 😳 , silly boy 😛 !! I'm so glad they both are finally safe and together. Hope Pakhya can get his revenge too 😡

And is that lady still alive ? (U know who, didnt want to say her name) I thought we got rid of her 😆

Soo soo looking forward for the war to start and to see him dead.

A marvellous update again from you... U know what i should look up for new words to describe ur work
👏 . My vocabulary gives up on me when i had to give credit to u 😛 . Thank youuu 🤗

And are you thinking about publishing or not ? You should seriously go for it 😉 👏
😆

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Awesome and an extremely heart breaking update. I could visualise the pain and the torture of Kalpi by the so called friend cum womanizer Prem. Good that she didn't fear and budge to the nasty demands of that rogue and spat him on his face.the way she had stood like a rock towards her husband and put forward her point of views were just awesome. I just loved the way she had fought for the honour of her husband. Gosh and Omg!! The lord of the South had arrived with his battalion on that nick of time to save them. Poor rAgs had to bear the barbaric torture of his king but their strong bond of love supplied him the much needed strength to continue the fighting and rescue his lady wife. And that innocent n self assuring kiss of RAGHAv before his army was just an apt one to ease the stress and the pain.but the healer is really bothersome abt the progress of his lord and wants the night to happily embrace the bright shining rays of the morning sun. Let rags regains his consciousness soon.

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

Wow ragna marvelous

god that disgusting pig really hateful

thanks kalpi spit on this face youuuhuuu

very good

poor kalpi sad due t the death of her parents

hmm kalpi immense pain seeing rag bind

rag fear hearing the punishment t kill his beloved wife

their love clearly show the people their truth though the people unable t say anything in their favour due t pig

hmmm rag run t his wife

thank t lord of south they worst was prevented

hmm rag style t declare the war

i could visualise each single scene

hmm ragna love showing make the warrior of north smile😳

god they really strong my lady n lord of north

n ythank you sweet heart for such a mind blowing update

oscar award for you

Originally posted by: mattieram

I can't seem to get enough of this story!! Amazing!!!! Please continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Love u vidya can expect an update plz

Puppy face

Originally posted by: premap

Fab update. Rags is fortunate , help came on time ,. But Prem is a snake ,which left alive will be revengeful. Prem's head should be on a spike !!! That should be the punishment of all Rapists !! [ If I have the choice , it should b brought into practice at present times ! '

Originally posted by: redpetal

Wow super good update. Just words are not comming to appreciate the update. .kalpi split in his mouth when she is caged? After all She is the lady of the North😊. I just can't believe that Raghav withstood all the beatings. Your hero is seriously a HERO👏. Kalpana showed her love for her Lord husband very boldly. I love this Red haired lord of South😉, the way he released every one was amazing. I wish I could see the arrows flying😲. Raghav dismounted the arms of the man who held he dragged on kalpi's neck, wow. Raghav is always having a style while is with a sword😊. The kiss, I can understand there feelings at that stage😊. So atlast the war have started and the Lord has enough reason for the Ear and I admire how he has a nurtured relationship with the other Lords😃. A king in progress. Men are smiling to see them kissing with Us😊. You have given a soul to these characters👏. Do your family members read your updates? If so then they will very proud of you👏