MOONLIT THORN (Supernatural Ragna ff)- AUTHOR'S NOTE PG 13 - Page 7

Hi hi vid...😳
i knw i'm super late..sry..😔
i had read both chapters alrdy,both are awsm...umm...supernatural...i realy lyk fantasys,vry fond of it bcz of grand mthr...😳

chapter 1:
raghav was a lil joyful boy...pure innocnt..😊
Her mothr lukd tensd abt woods...and her fear come true...
Was his mother nt a vampire?
The way u discribd abt his fathr was fab...u write everythng in such detail that look lyk scene is unfolding infrnt of us.superb
👏
nw raghav is a warewolf...26 years leap...
I was wondrng what more bad hpnd that raghav lost his smile😔
so he is here for job that too kalpana's husbnd house...
I love the last scene where his eyes met wid kalpana's eyes...beautifuly discribed😳

chapter 2:
Alexndr is a ruthless n disgusting persn 😡
when i read prolog,i expct that kalpana's hubby wil be bad but he is worst...
For outsiders it luks lyk he lovd her so much,admirng her but reality is totaly opposite...😭

raghav felt attract 2wards kalpana...bt stoppng himslf to think abt it😔

omg! What hpn to raghav's parent? How they died?
And why raghav changd his name?

Alexndr is a jerk,he forcd himslf on kalpi...poor kalpi,she has lost her child n cnt be a mthr nw😭
Alexndr has an affair...kalpi is too much hurt.

Ending was beautiful whn raghav complets her sentence...beautiful update.😳

Finaly my due cmnt is postd...i'm so happy that u start this story...its fabuls...continue soon dear😊

Kalpi so call husband is a monster
He hide his devious ways infront of people well
Raghav is so humble and he already can tell that Kalpi words are more sincere than her husband
Aww Raghav was admiring Kalpi in her purple dress even for a split second and then feel guilty lol
That monster abusing Kalpi physically and emotionally was very emotional...
Kalpi advicing Georgiana was awesome. No woman should ever accept such treatments from men
Superb update. I love it

Originally posted by: gargdia

Hi hi vid...😳
i knw i'm super late..sry..😔
i had read both chapters alrdy,both are awsm...umm...supernatural...i realy lyk fantasys,vry fond of it bcz of grand mthr...😳

chapter 1:
raghav was a lil joyful boy...pure innocnt..😊
Her mothr lukd tensd abt woods...and her fear come true...
Was his mother nt a vampire?
The way u discribd abt his fathr was fab...u write everythng in such detail that look lyk scene is unfolding infrnt of us.superb
👏
nw raghav is a warewolf...26 years leap...
I was wondrng what more bad hpnd that raghav lost his smile😔
so he is here for job that too kalpana's husbnd house...
I love the last scene where his eyes met wid kalpana's eyes...beautifuly discribed😳

chapter 2:
Alexndr is a ruthless n disgusting persn 😡
when i read prolog,i expct that kalpana's hubby wil be bad but he is worst...
For outsiders it luks lyk he lovd her so much,admirng her but reality is totaly opposite...😭

raghav felt attract 2wards kalpana...bt stoppng himslf to think abt it😔

omg! What hpn to raghav's parent? How they died?
And why raghav changd his name?

Alexndr is a jerk,he forcd himslf on kalpi...poor kalpi,she has lost her child n cnt be a mthr nw😭
Alexndr has an affair...kalpi is too much hurt.

Ending was beautiful whn raghav complets her sentence...beautiful update.😳

Finaly my due cmnt is postd...i'm so happy that u start this story...its fabuls...continue soon dear😊

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Kalpi so call husband is a monster
He hide his devious ways infront of people well
Raghav is so humble and he already can tell that Kalpi words are more sincere than her husband
Aww Raghav was admiring Kalpi in her purple dress even for a split second and then feel guilty lol
That monster abusing Kalpi physically and emotionally was very emotional...
Kalpi advicing Georgiana was awesome. No woman should ever accept such treatments from men
Superb update. I love it

Oh my 😕 🤢 😭

When will she get rid of that brutal person yaa . I feel so terrible for her, from now i'll be waiting for the moment where she kicks his ass 😡 . I hope he gets it back completely like he is treating her now 😡 . Such a waste 🤢

Would Raghav be the "hero" for her ? Or would she get the courage to face that Count herself... To know more keep reading Asgard's "Moonlit Thorn" 😆 😛

I'm soo soo waiting for her to be safe and away from that beast

Thank you again for a wonderful story Vids Darling 👏 . You are marvellous as always 🤗

RagNa is two of a kind
Both so disturb and is facing their own demons
While Raghav is dreading the up coming Full moon, Kalpi is dealing with a monster
RagNa encounter are so sweet and pleasant
They respected each other as humans and not by title...
Kalpi taking care of Raghav wounds was amazing
Oh wow! Kalpi is Raghav soulmate 😉
I'm so excited for that
Omg! That monster again rape Kalpi and this time it's worst
Gosh! How much more Kalpi has to take from him
Raghav hearing and witnessing the monster cruelty on Kalpi was awful
Kalpi saw Raghav 😲 now I can't wait to know what will happen next
Outstanding update. Beautifully written, I love it

Awesome update

Nice update. Feeling bad for kalpi

Oh my hod, I got goosebumps while reading the torture given to the countess by her husband. So Mr.Whie will not be having any Vampire qualities. I just wonder what happened to Raghav's father after that fight. I thought his parents were rich but why he ended up as a labour.This story is even more interesting than your previous story "The lion and the Panther". What amazes me in your every update is how you use some situations or informations for the next forthcoming updates. It's a wonderful story and a wonderful update😊