ragna ff My Revenge ch 13 pg 36 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb update. ...
Both part was awesome. ...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wohoo.. Double update... Waah waah.. Very good..
And the fact i like the most is here Sahil and Neetu have brain in them.. Otherwise cvs have shown them as the dumbest villains on earth.. Ofcourse less dumb than Kamla and Pakhi...
Hehe.. Raghav got fooled.. What can you expect of a kid.. Oops, a big kid..
Thanks for the PM yaar.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updates
So neetu n saahil plotted against kamla n vitthal n wanted to made rags believe dey r responsible for his parents sep 😡
Rags found kamla also hiding sumthing n aftr hearing vitthal n kamla incomp convo he decided to believe neetu's wrds n was all set to to take revenge using kalpi as he found out kalpi is der life
Eager to read further cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late updat n thnx for ur lovly comment

Part 8

From up strait one pair of eyes looking them n hold tightly balcony relling n mumble angrily smile n enjoy ur life kamla bai n vithal today I m leaving it doesn't meant that I forget waht u did with my parent n with me n my sibligs I will destroy ur famaly also like u destroy my family,
I will snactu ur all happiness kamla bai or vithal u both will die slowly sowly . He turn his face n tear roll down from his eyea he quciky wipe hi tear looking them came near him

After an hour

Everyone move to drop raghav to taxi stand

Kamla n vithal hug n kiss raghav forehead , pakya also hug raghav

Kalpi become sad seeing raghav is going leaving them, tear formed in her eyes but she control n ask raghav

Kalpi: raghav ur going US so, u will not forget us na

Raghav smrik n say I will nerev forgive u all kalpi

Kalpi smile n bid him

Raghav took his sit in taxi n left from their

Jadav came back home but after raghav left kalpi feel side n sleep without saying n everyone alos sleep

On other side

In kapoor hosue

Phone is ringing continueously which disturp sleep someone

Nitu in sleep shaking sahil shoulder sahil pick up the phone

Sahil reply n sleep plz nitu let me sleep u recive say this he cover his ear with pilow n sleep

Nitu recive the call halfheartly but hearing other side person she wake up widening his eyes

Nutu shake sahil shoulder n try to wake him

Nitu : sahil get up ...!!! Sahil get up...!!!

Sahil wake up in jerk n say what nitu??

Nitu start shouting on him I told u but u r not ready to belive me n u allow him n now see, it's all happen buc of u if u listen me na it not happen

Sahil irritate buc of nitu. she is continuously accused him but didn't say what he did?? So shail shouted on nitu n ask, ''what I did ha???''can u say directly

Nitu say angrily don't shout on me sahil today buc of u wo raghav ka bucha india se furr hogaya hai

Sahil in shock n say what ru saying nitu ru out of ur mind he is kamla place

Nitu hiss n say n that kamlabai help him to escap from us

Sahil : how can u say this ha ???

Nitu : abhi jo call tha na , that person informe me ki raghav kahi bhag raha hai

Sahil sit their in shock

Nitu : yr u sitting like this ,get up he have to catch him before he left from that bahi place

Sahil: yes ur right befire its late we have to reach their

But got ready n left from their

On other side airport

After funishing call raghav smile evily n say no u r bad time start kamlabai n vithal

Now this kapoor findout that ur behind to escape me from their home n now they will give u troble for escaoing me till I'm not come how u can live happily

N after sometime raghav's filghf take off

Other side nitu n sahil reach chawl n start shouting their name

Jadav family came out hearing loud noise n they shock seeing nitu n sahil r shouting their nama

They run downstairs

Kamla ask what happen nitu mam y ur shouting ha

Nitu angrily what u did ?? U cheatus ha ur working our place n u cheat us

Kamla ask confusingly what we did mam??

Shail : ohh plz kamla bai stop ur dram u r helping raghav for escaping from her where is raghav ha , we trust u n send him here but what ur doing ha??

Vithal: sahil sahab or madam raghav baba left from here or may be he reac at ur place

Nitu: what u think ha we r stupid that we came her n asking about raghav n don't be over smart , we now that ur trying to help raghav from eacaping

Kalpi mumble in low voice which only pakya hear there is no dought that ur bevkuf n both giggle

Kamla said in fake care what do u mean mam where is raghav baba he left from here time ago where he is ?? She turn toward vithal n say vithal I think we have to complent police let go we have to find out whefe is raghav baba n she start fake cry

Vithal : yes kamla let go

Nitu : oh stop ur dram we know u both behind this nitu turn toward sahil say let go sahil before he leave from mumbai he have to catch him

Sahil node his head n both to move but sahil stop n turn n say from tommorow there is no need to come for work kamlabai n both left from there ,but its already late

Kamla n vithal hug knowing that now raghav can live his life n no one harm him n his property

After raghav left kamla stop working kapoor house days pass like that

Prem n pakhi also came back from their nani place n they about kamla n raghav

Pakhi n prem demand that she want to meet kamla n she want to live with him but sahil didn't allow them to meet

N buc of that pakhi stop eating n she fall ill ,
she even didn't took her medicen n which sahil can't bear so he went to cha wl n request her to join again her job n knowing pakhi health she get ready n she start her job

Pakhi also recover her health n days pass like this

On day asusual kalpi , pakhi n prem is doing their home in pakhi room n kamla is doing her work


Kalpi went toward kitchen for water n nitu saw her

Nitu : ye kalpi listen come here kalpi went near her n say yes nitu aunty

Nitu say angrily ho many time I told u don't call me aunty , call me mam

Kalpi : sorry mam

Nitu: ok...she say tiwsting her lips listen km having headach go n took bam for me n came n my room

Kalpi nod his head but before she went kamla come n say kalpi u go beat n do ur study I will give bam to mamad

Kalpi node his head n left from there

Kamla took bam n start giving massag nitu head

After some time shw left from their to do her work

Manda came nitu room n start laugh

Sorry for mistake n free for comment n don't forget to hit like button n ur lovly comments
riaka thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear. Raghav misunderstood everything.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
But rag misconception will destroyed everything
Kalpi n pakhi n prem was cute
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊awesome update .didnt remember last part coz update .after so long .raghav and his ange destory everthing lets see what comes next .

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear.. Nice.. So raghav left India... Nd Kamla again working for Kapoors... Dear plz update nxt chappy... Nd plz in nxt chappy i want adult RagNa... Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Raghav's Gonna Take Revenge!!! 😲 And He's Misunderstanding Kamla and Vitthal...
great Update sweetie.
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thnx dear 😊

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