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darkloveriam thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

Stones name itself sounds different 😃

what did Raghav do to her 4 years before that she is in such a bad state and she last her power of voice

story seems interesting Nehaa😆

glad u like story name it's most difficult task for me.
😆
here stones refer to hurbles she face but stones doesn't only refer to a simple harshness of her life but refer to a stone diamond . How she stood hard like diamond in all phase of her life. A shining diamond whose light & pride never fade even in darkest phase:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ...neha

glad u like story name it's most difficult task for me.

😆
here stones refer to hurbles she face but stones doesn't only refer to a simple harshness of her life but refer to a stone diamond . How she stood hard like diamond in all phase of her life. A shining diamond whose light & pride never fade even in darkest phase:)

wow ur explaination increased my curiosity😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Nice update dear. Seriously wanted to onow what happened in dere past n how kalpi lost her voice. Plzz keep updating with beautiful parts...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
nice update...
feel bad for kalpi...
what happened in past????
why raghav abused her????
& waiting to know kalpis struggle...update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
I read the last two chapters. they were so beautifully written and the concept was very nice.
Eagerly waiting to read more.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
A really nice upadate dear...
thanx for glimps of their past...

but i think pakhi is not like to how she is behave... i think she dont like kalpi...

please dont make Kalpi easily forget Raghav...
but also dont seprate them dear...

Raghav trully love her n make him realised how Kalpi sffered because of him...

Then he understand her pain also...

upadate soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Oh god kalpi has lost her voice..but it seems that gauri love her very much n Raghav too..pakhi is her step sister..but i'm confused she is happy or not...but what happened 4 yrs ago that our kalpu is in this condition???plzz updat soon neha plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
it's dissapointing that forum activities are slow
Chapter 5
Mumma
and kalpi look here & there but she saw no one
Mumma
Kalpi again look but no one is here . She was standing alone when she take some steps forward she hear a child crying voice on the edge of a cliff .she panicked seeing that at any moment that child was about to fall.
Kalpi run toward that child but before she reach that small child slip from edge
K- no
( kalpi shout)
She was stunned their is no trace of that child and tear start brimming in her eyes.
K- no
U u c .. a..n't l le ... a ve me
( she say while sobbing hard)
But only she left alone on that cliff and below only a deep forest .
When the same lady put hand on her shoulder .
L- go kalpi
He was waiting for u
L- go
He was waiting
Kalpi stand up
K- kalpi took a step toward edge uncoinsiously .
K- i i'm c ..o m i ...n g
and was about to go
R- kalpi
( raghav shout)
As he enter in his room
He saw kalpi . She was uncoinsious and sweating despite of the fact that ac is on .
Tears was flowing from her eyes and her hands trying to hold someone .
Her lips were moving but words refuse to leave from her throught .
He was her slowly her moments died but before she stop murming completey he call her.

He was panicked and scared seeing her in this state
R- kalpi get up
But her eyes still not opening
He take some water and spark on her face still she was not getting coinsiousness her moments dying slowly.
At last he take water from jug and throw on her face.
Causing her open her eyes .
She gasp as she open her eyes.
Images of her dream a child falling from edge still flashes in front of her eyes.
She hold him tightly
Raghav look toward confused he saw a fear in her eyes a darkness , an emptiness in those eyes.
She was trying to say but words are not leaving .
She was trying to get up catch that child
When raghav stop her but of no use
R- nurse
( raghav shout )
R- nurse
And a nurse rush to his room as soon as possible

Kalpi was still pointing fingure to save that child
But nobody understand as her fingure is pointed toward open window.
N- i think she was scared bcoz of some reason or dreamt something bad
Sir we need to calm mam down otherwise it become risky for her
R- then do something for whom are u waiting
Nurse immidatly give her injection
Gauri immidatly rush toward kalpi side
G- relax beta we are here
Say something
What happen

But before she say soon everything get blur and she get uncoinsious .

Raghav sit on bed place her head in his lap and start stroking her hairs.

Nurse leave from room .
G- raghav what was that?
R- i don't know mom .
G- why she was not speaking?
Raghav lower his head feeling tears brimming in his eyes .
G- raghav
Will u take her here forcefully ?
G- raghav answer me
R- mom i want to be alone for some time with kalpi plz leave .
G- but
R- sammy answer ur all question how we find her but for now leave plz .
Gauri & pakhi moves out from their room leaving behind kalpi & raghav .
..
Some time later
Sammy & maya enter in singhania mantion as gauri want to know what just happen.
S- good evening mam
Gauri nodded in responce
G- sammy i want to ask from u something and i want honest answers .
Sammy nodded in yes in responce
G- how raghav meet kalpana ?
Where he found her , i want to know everything that happen in delhi.

Sammy then tell her what happen how kalpi get uncoisiousnes in front of their car , how she try to escape and what doctors say about her .
S- mam kalpana mam can't speak and raghav sir doesn't want her to run again that why he ask nurse to give her unconsiousness injections so that we able to take her here .

Gauri drop herself on couch after listning all this . She was dissapointed and angry with her son when he left her alone but now she want to hate him bcoz of his doings kalpi is in this condition.
She have tears in her eyes when she come to know she unable to talk again .
She close her eyes and remember the day when she first met kalpi pain was always part of her life but never she let her smile fade away.
Gauri was in temple as it was raghav 22nd birthday so she come their for praying for her son .
After completing her pooja she was going back when she notice kalpi helping an old lady who was in her 80's and it's difficult for her to step stairs.

Kalpi help her in steping stairs and then went to take important matiral for pooja
Gauri think that she was her grand daughter.
Gauri come beside that old lady and say
G- u are lucky that u have a caring grand daughter .
L- no she is not my grand daughter .
But yes i know her . She is a soft person by heart and visit here everyday .
She is like my daughter .
G- her parents must be proud on her.
L- she don't have parents .
But she used to live with those people who adopt her.

Gauri nodded in responce and feel a dissapoitment after listing this .
...
Hush finish
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Superb update
Omg kalpi see nightmare. ...what see want to say. ...
gauri disappointed by her son ...He leaves her. ...
FB was nice. ..gauri impressed by kalpis kind nature. ..
Update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
nice update...
waiting to know past

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