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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Nice update neha 😭 kalpi can't speak kaisai 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sumasridhar

relax she is my kalpi and everyone know i'm biased toward her
raghav need to go on his feets to get her.
but yes it's true for now that she lost her voice.
she is a wounded soul and no hope as i said it's story is about her pain in past.
hey which movie are u referring i actually don't know telgu
is it dubbed in hindi???
i love to watch it as i watch many nagarjun's movie but those are dubbed in hindi
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Neha it's mai balawan (2006) asin as heroine it's a story on msg in bottle

i think suma i watched that movie
in which nagaarjun is a police officer and fall in love with a don daighter/sister i can't remember that properly.
and story start with a journilist who found a msg in a bottle beside a beach:)
i think it's same movie
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
I never loved dark story
But after reading ur storys I m fall in love with ur dark storys
I really love you hard work plz update next part soon
u really work hard 4 ur lovely reader love u and ur story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Its very terrible to see she lost her voice
Raghav regreting for his deed
Wonderful update
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update. ..
Omg kalpi not to spike. .😲...what shoke she have...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
awesome story neha..i read full 3 chappy and i loved it..plz continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Aru18

awesome story neha..i read full 3 chappy and i loved it..plz continue

i'm glad u like it
but i'm waiting for ur story
i think u tell me to post it as i update mine:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

chapter 4


everything was arranged kalpi was uncoinsious in raghav arms he didn't leave her for a single second he holding her close to himself and sammy and maya both
a bit surprised by seeing possesive side of raghav in past 3 years . they work for him from past 3 years they know he will gwt what he want at any cost but
not in their wildest dream they thought raghav was so possesive about a normal girl who now was not able to talk.

( life is funny isn't it when someone love us we hurt them but when fate take them away we carve for their love and care but sometimes it's too late . when she
was carving for his love he treated her like a slave and now after 4 years when her condition is not better than a slave he want to give her all happiness of
this world . but it is that easy?? we say sorry and that's it from our side we desrve a second chance by saying a simple word . but what about that person who
face hell bcoz of our some stupidity . sometimes sorry isn't enough !!!)


Raghav was with his friends when his friends eye fall on a girl a dusky beauty outside an orpahne hepling some kids.

when one of his friend say

F- Raghv look at her just perfect isn't he looking beautiful ?

when raghav eyes fell on her he stand their still trapped by her innocence .

kalpi was unaware of all this spending a beautiful time with small childrens chatting . all were bidding her by hugging their favorate di


uncoinsiously he start walking toward her and collide with her .

without looking toward him she mutter a sorry and left .

raghav just remain spotted on his place .


when one of his friend say

dude don't u think she is best for me for once i want to taste her

and on nxt moment he gain a punch from raghav on his face .


R- don't u ever try to think like that she is mine .

when his second friend intruppt

chill raghav and u even don't know her

R- it's not ur head ache i'll get what i want at any cost .

she is mine and if anyone of u try to go close of her if she ever meet u then i'll kill that person got it.

he yell on his friends

his friend only able to nod in responce aware from his anger and stubborn behaviour no one want to get in fight with raghav singhania .

raghav eyes open as his car stop with a jerk and immidatly he hold her tightly who was uncoinsious due to meditation effect lying on his lap .


a glimpse of his past when he first time see her and hear he laughing voice .


he cup her cheeks


R- we are at home finally ur new home .

after leaving u i settle in this mantion with mom , sid ( his brother) & pakhi ( sid wife and kalpana step sister daughter of vitthal & kamala).


R- we will stay here now onward . last time i leave u but i promise i remain by ur side always . no one dare to hurt u now.

we will consult to doctor and i'm sure u'll get ur voice back soon .


holding her hand in his he say .


now onward no sorrow only happiness and a tear fell from his eyes and he immidatly wipe it as he heard sammy voice .

sammy open gate so that raghav step out with kalpi

raghav come outside with kalpi in his arms and walk toward entrnce of his house .


AS sammy press bell button gauri immidatly open door with a bright smile .

singhania mantion was decorated beautifully with flowers with combination of red roses amd marrygold . roses define raghav a person whom it's possible to
get hurt at any instance and marrygold represnt kalpi a faith , a trust .


pakhi froze as she she kalpi comimg back in her life and that too in raghav arms . she never expect that someday she will see her again .

pakhi immidatly rush toward kalpi

P- kalpi my sister u are back kalpi
kalpi get up

looking toward raghav with questioning eyes


when maya rply


M- mam kalpana mam is unconsious due to meditation effect .


after that no words get exchanged and gauri singhania again welcome her daughter in law thaking her god for sending her in their life again .

bcoz only she was the light who hold power to bright singhania mantion with her laughter .


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hush finish

hope it's not too boring

i want some long comments and 45 likes to keep updating

don't forgot to keep forum active make a new topic daily atleast
special requet to silant members .

i hope u get varity update today

thanx di feeling much better.

Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
res
unres
wow lovely update
rag was so possessive without knowing kalpi
he threatened his friends
i wonder y he left her
hope nothing bad happened with kalpi like someone bad eyed her
hope its not like that plz
though i know she faced the poverty n hardship
hmm makhi shocked n pretented t speak with kalpi
gauri sincerely happy for her bahu t come home
how she would feel knowing kalpi can't talk she be heart broken
update soon

Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Awesome update. .
So raghav always like this. ...his friends r disgusting🤢..
He first saw her...n fall 4 her...
Sid n pakhi r husband n wife. ...n step sister of kalpi. ...
Y raghav leave her. ...omg what kalpi suffering. ..😭..
gauri is nice. ..she welcome ragna. ...
but sammy n maya r confused n shoked see raghav in this state. .
u writer very well. ...šŸ‘ plzz give long update. ..
Update soon next part

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