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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Excellent update neha who is the child in kalpi's dream?
Is that ragna's baby
I love gauri she loves kalpi so much
Impatiently waiting for next update
u r fabulous writer u poured eavh n every emotion in ur each words very beautifully 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Oxh god who is this child whom kalpi dreamt..is he her child???? I have doubt on it which she may have lost...plzz update soon n reveal why Raghav left her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Awesome update
That child kalpi lose her baby
Gauri angry on her son
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Emotional. Did kalpi lost her child wat rags did with her
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Neha kalpi pregnant dha or miscarraige hua kya.awesome update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Chapter 6


It's 9pm

Raghav went downstairs for taking her lunch .

Gauri , pakhi , sid all for first time see raghav worried for kalpi .
Gauri want to talk to him but the enviourment is now not light in singhania mantion and the main reason is gauri doesn't want to lose her daughter - in - law after she come to know her condition after that she can't allow kalpi to away at any cost may be she was called selfish but she doesn't want that poor soul to suffer more . That girl who always lose something precious may be that's why kalpi never rise her voice in front of raghav after his harsh behaviour bcoz she never want to lose her last relation and a loving mother whose love she get only bcoz of that she was binded to raghav .

Gauri understand kalpi in a very short span of time . She always polite toward everyone but her fate never polite toward her .

She was a girl who always carved only to be loved but never get it from anyone .
That's the reason after arranged or say marrige done on basis of deal she put her soul in it .

and he just crush her every dream one by one .

She cried daily but never raise her voice in front of him .

Gauri was wondering how thing changed .

That Raghav who never let her speak in front of him today sad only bcoz he want to hear words from her mouth .

Vitthal & kamala never adopt kalpi if it's not about vitthal's elder brother property .

When kalpi was 5 years old her father & mother died and for his brother house vitthal & kamala adopt kalpi but the princess of her parents is nothing more than a slave in her uncle aunty house.

and that child who want only to be loved slowly changed into a unsecured person who ready to bear anything only to her a few words of love from her new parents but all she get was immanse pain and tears.
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Ragna room


Kalpi open her eyes slowly

Her head was aching very badly but slowly slowly she try to ragister her surrounding .

Last she remember she was in hospital where doctor was examinng her .


And the place was totally new to her .

She try to remember but last she remember was how raghav take her to hospital and after doctor give her injection.


She was examing her surrounding when raghav open door with dinner in his hand


As he saw her awake he goes by her side putting dinner on side table
R- kalpi u are awake ?

He sit beside her
R- are u fine ?
He raise his hand to touch her cheeks but before he touch she jerk his hand .

He was dissapointed for once but composes herself .

R - kalpi do u know it's our new home

Kalpi look at him schoked

R- we are in mumbai

He say while answering her questions bcoz he know she was restless after coming in new place


Kalpi look toward him with pure hatered & anger .

She try to get up
R- kalpi what are u doing
He saw while holding her waist to support her but she jerked him .

Kalpi went toward door but before she open it. He turned her around .
He tightly holding her from waist

She was strrugling and hitting his chest with her fist but he was too strong to her.

R- kalpi relax
She don't listen him
Continuisly holding her from waist .


R- look i'm sorry
But she continue to struggle

R- kalpi listen to me
U are not going away now we are at our home .


When she hear his words her anger raise
Gathring her all power she push him as forcefully as she able to push causing him to take some step back to balance himself .

She run toward door but of no use bcoz lock was automatic which only open from password which only he know .

She bang door but nothing then she start throwing things here & their


She was sobbing want to scream to let her go but nothing then she start throwing all things .

R- kalpi stop u'll hurt urself.

She throw with more speed .

She throw glass wase on ground and was about to step on his piece but before she hurt herself raghav take her in his arms .

R- kalpi u'll hurt urself

She was sterugling to step down but no use.
She was only sobbing trying to shout to not touch her no word left from her mouth.

For the first time in his life he was feeling helpless when she was in pain it's evident in her scream.
But she was hyper now and it's important to calm her otherwise she will make her health worse.

To silance her he put his lips on hers to silance her .
Which shows his emotions his care
For a moment she was stunned but soon she start pushing him

As he broke kiss it leave her breathless and he make her stand .

R- kalpi
Listen

Byt before he complete he feel a pain on his cheek

She slap him hard too hard.
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Hush finish

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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
awesome update wow
kalpi suffered too much cruel world his aunt n uncle damn it
raghav kiss kalpi t calm her n get slaped
poor kalpi in so pain
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Poor kalpi suffering so much. ...😭...kamala n vitthal r disgusting. .😡 n raghav how he treat her badly😡...Thank god gauri support her. .n love her. ...
Raghav was now feeling guilty. ...but kalpi not ready to forgive him..n salp him👏...but y he treat her like that
Update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Nice update. Poor kalpi suffered a lot. Ragna marriage is deal?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Wondeeful update neha.
Loved it.
U rock.

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