The Lion and the Panther- (Ragna ff) REMOVED - Page 67

Originally posted by: redpetal

I big🤗. My love for your story can't be described. I fear you will end it soon😕. More than kalpi I felt Raghav's happiness after the declaration of the pregnancy news. Sammy fooling around raghav and with all the men around was a treat. Raghav is blessed to have Sammy as his friend. Oh man Prem the KING, Watch out. You are having all the possibility of getting killed by Raghav's hand. THE STERN LOOK😡. Raghav has 1000 mens in th border in case of emergency? Wow😊.

Vids I'm speechless!! Fab update 👏 Raghav n kalpana are going to be parents [:D/] unke saath saath I'm also happy 😛 Raghv's happiness has no bounds this s the frst time m seeing him so happy!! Lol Samar easily made Raghav believe that he shouldn't make love to his wife until baby born 😆 😆 Aww there desire overcome n they became one again 😳 Prem s looking at kalpi with full f lust 😡 beware prem Raghav gonna strangle you 😡 I loved this part when approached to kalpi to greet her Raghav's anger n the way he said "Do Not touch my wife " I'm wondering how will Prem react when he get to know that kalpi n Raghav are both madly in love with each other n soon going to b parents!! He'll die with rage boiling in his body Lol 😆 Sry fr not commenting from few chappys now I'm back!!! 🤗 I enjoyed this update thoroughly

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Edited by riaka - 10 June 2015 at 8:38pm

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Two things I enjoy the most about your updates!
1. Back to back and regular updates...👏
2. Long Updates..!!!👍🏼


And I simply loved each and every bit of the latest update for it's gripping story lines...
I just had read somewhere, maybe in Writer's Interviews, that writing war, and fight scenes are something you can easily detail it out and good at, but writing romantic and passionate part of updates maybe difficult, but I honestly don't feel so, I simply love to read romantic and intimate parts of your update with wide eyes as well... Loved the whole scene where Kalpana tells him he had joked around till the time he beats Sammy up...

Waiting to read more about Prem's attempts... which would fail over and out again, **Hopefully** ...
Loved how Raghav told him to not to touch his wife, So possessively..

But now am wondering on one thing, when Raghav was injured, Vitthal and even Northern greyland people knew about the accident, and yet Prem do not know about pregnancy of Kalpana? How did messages reach across in case of Raghav's accident causing him to temporary lose his sights...

Nevertheless am waiting for Prem to find out...
which will be like adding fuel to fire..

Beautiful update .wow kalpi pregnant ..

Hi vidya Congo for centuary 😛 👏 brilliant update ragnas first child and ye shameless Sammy again 😆 😆 ogod posessive rags don't touch my wife 😳 😉ye poo 😡 but ye prem is dangerous hope ragna ke beech kuch problem nahi hogi

🥳 WORD'S MAGICIAN congrats dear
perfect update i have read it 3 times
Journey started with priceless news
wow wow wow how beautifully u present
joy happiness of ragna and their subject
like kalpi i m also eagerly waiting for raghav's reaction
when baby born 😛
sammy sir superb stroke poor raghav
and his self control 😆
😡 prem he saw kalpi lustfully eyes jerk
what to hug kalpi but dont know she is raghav's wife
he will kill u if he ever try to touch kalpi, she is his lady and no one dare to touch her
i m love this raghav i always like this side of raghav
Waiting for next dose give us an update as a treat
what u think

superb update
kalpi id preg. ...the North going to hv their heir... 😃
raghav is so happy...
Sammy teases raghav ...& raghav worried abt to control his desire... 😆 😉
hope prem wont hurt kalpi or ragna child...& that pakhi 😡 ...raghav will teach them lesion...

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

Vids I'm speechless!! Fab update 👏 Raghav n kalpana are going to be parents [:D/] unke saath saath I'm also happy 😛 Raghv's happiness has no bounds this s the frst time m seeing him so happy!! Lol Samar easily made Raghav believe that he shouldn't make love to his wife until baby born 😆 😆 Aww there desire overcome n they became one again 😳 Prem s looking at kalpi with full f lust 😡 beware prem Raghav gonna strangle you 😡 I loved this part when approached to kalpi to greet her Raghav's anger n the way he said "Do Not touch my wife " I'm wondering how will Prem react when he get to know that kalpi n Raghav are both madly in love with each other n soon going to b parents!! He'll die with rage boiling in his body Lol 😆 Sry fr not commenting from few chappys now I'm back!!! 🤗 I enjoyed this update thoroughly