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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: riaka
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Awesome update dear. Lady of the north with child 😛😛. Raghav is very very happy 😃. Kalpi some where afraid from her curse but Raghav assured her that she will be cured soon. Samar 's joke was awesome 😆😆 and Raghav thought it's true. Ragna moments was lovely. Love Raghav 's dialog "Is this the wish of my lady wife, mother to my heir and commander of my heart"👏. Kalpi's dress is awesome. Loved when Raghav told prem "Don't tuch my wife"👏👏👏.
Thank you for the lovely story 👏👏🤗

Edited by riaka - 10 June 2015 at 8:38pm

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😆 You are the second person who said they liked those dialogues. I didn't know those lines were going to be so well received. Lol Glad you enjoyed the update Riaka.

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: shahsb_26
Two things I enjoy the most about your updates!
1. Back to back and regular updates...👏
2. Long Updates..!!!👍🏼

And I simply loved each and every bit of the latest update for it's gripping story lines...
I just had read somewhere, maybe in Writer's Interviews, that writing war, and fight scenes are something you can easily detail it out and good at, but writing romantic and passionate part of updates maybe difficult, but I honestly don't feel so, I simply love to read romantic and intimate parts of your update with wide eyes as well... Loved the whole scene where Kalpana tells him he had joked around till the time he beats Sammy up...

Waiting to read more about Prem's attempts... which would fail over and out again, **Hopefully** ...
Loved how Raghav told him to not to touch his wife, So possessively..

But now am wondering on one thing, when Raghav was injured, Vitthal and even Northern greyland people knew about the accident, and yet Prem do not know about pregnancy of Kalpana? How did messages reach across in case of Raghav's accident causing him to temporary lose his sights...

Nevertheless am waiting for Prem to find out...
which will be like adding fuel to fire..

Thanks peep. Glad you enjoyed the update, 😊 Messages are sent using Ravens, Eagles, owls or people on horseback. In the case of Raghav's injury, messages would have been sent informing the North and Vitthal about his injury. The reason why Prem does not know about Kalpi pregnancy is because they haven't informed anyone as yet, not even Kalpi's parents. This is a news they want to deliver personally since they are in the East.

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: ekta7yadav
Beautiful update .wow kalpi pregnant ..

Thank you 😊

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: switymango

Awesome update...
Sammy😆😆 intimate rules🤣...All r laughing on raghav. ..poor raghav ...joke ko sach man gaya😆
Prem jerk😡..."don't tuch my wife"...Wow raghav👏👏
loved it. ...Update soon next part

Glad you enjoyed it 😊

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: abxetz
Hi vidya Congo for centuary 😛 👏 brilliant update ragnas first child and ye shameless Sammy again 😆 😆 ogod posessive rags don't touch my wife 😳 😉ye poo 😡 but ye prem is dangerous hope ragna ke beech kuch problem nahi hogi

Thank you and glad you are enjoying possessive Raghav. 😆

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: Nandinisai
Wonderful update

Thank you 😊

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: rachufan
🥳 WORD'S MAGICIAN congrats dear
perfect update i have read it 3 times
Journey started with priceless news
wow wow wow how beautifully u present
joy happiness of ragna and their subject
like kalpi i m also eagerly waiting for raghav's reaction
when baby born 😛
sammy sir superb stroke poor raghav
and his self control 😆
😡 prem he saw kalpi lustfully eyes jerk
what to hug kalpi but dont know she is raghav's wife
he will kill u if he ever try to touch kalpi, she is his lady and no one dare to touch her
i m love this raghav i always like this side of raghav
Waiting for next dose give us an update as a treat
what u think

😆 Thanks Rachu. Glad you enjoyed the update. But I gave the update last night as a treat right? 😛

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: lolor
superb update
kalpi id preg. ...the North going to hv their heir... 😃
raghav is so happy...
Sammy teases raghav ...& raghav worried abt to control his desire... 😆 😉
hope prem wont hurt kalpi or ragna child...& that pakhi 😡 ...raghav will teach them lesion...

Thank you. Sammy loves to tease Raghav 😆

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: Taniyagoel
Superb update...

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#680

Heyyllooo vidya!! 😉

god i already missed commenting on the previous update!

but anyways i read the two parts in one go!!😃 and as always it was

superrr duperrr amazng! ⭐️⭐️ as the story is moving forward its becumng more n more interesting! 😉 im soo njyng it by reading.. 😳

i loved the friendship bond btw the north n west lords.. no matter with whom they are gonna fight against with (king), they still support each other!! so good one! 😉 and lady galina has told an interesting matter to kalpi where she felt jealous 😆 but it was too good when she confrnted it with raghav! 😛 and the climax of that update left me like 😲 like whats gonna happen next.. thank god that i dint need to stress myself more abt that as i read those updates back to back 😆

And here comes the great news that lady grimmir is gonna give a heir to the north!!! 😃 aww.. both were sooo happieee especially raghav and his simple gestures of how happiee he was and the small n simple romantic scenes u give us.. was soo beautiful❤️ but i wonder is the track gonna flow so smoothly w/o any obstacles?! And sammy 🤣 he s never gonna change!! 🤣😆 his teasngs reminds me of myself, where i so love teasing my friends no matter how scoldngs or angry glares i receives frm them 🤪😆

the best part was where raghav stopped prem frm touchng kalpi.. i was like there u go hero! 😆 that was too damn good! 😉

now track will be more n more n more n more.. interesting!! 😳.. i dunno wanna guess anythng, i'll be jus waitng fr it!!