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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
I like that Kalpi is having a positive influence in Raghav life...
He is actually working and not whine about it
Something is going on with Kalpi, I can't really figure it out yet but whatever it is it's scaring her a lot
RagNa enjoying their time together at the carnival just having fun was awesome
Kalpi actually enjoy herself :)
Kalpi is sleeping in Raghav bed, now how that happened???
I'm curious to know
All the chapters were fabulous. I can't wait for you to continue:)

Natashaa ...so so so glad to hear that u liked the update 😃

Why was Kalpana sleeping on Raghav's bed ...what was she even doing there ...

Get all of ur questions answered in the next update 😉

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive
And what an amazing cliffhanger !!!!!!!! Kamaal kar ditta tussi !!!!!!!!👏😃

First time I'm seeing somebody complimenting me for giving a cliffhanger ...lol...warna hamesha toh gaaliyan hi padi hai 😛😛

Just kidding !!

Tysm for the comment😃

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#393

A long ..very long gap I know ! But no worries...here on the story would be from kalpi's point of view so even if u don't remember much of the past its OK as those were the parts that provided an insight to Raghav's character only.

Chapter 8

Kalpana was running, running with all that she got..she had to. The voice was getting closer & closer & she didn't want to be caught again. In order to protect herself from the cold as also to acquire some comfort she wrapped her arms around her body but winced ...the marks of the rope were still there & they hurted very very bad.

"Kalpana... Kalpana wait !"

"The voice is coming closer , I hve to run ...I have to run !"

"Ms Jadhav..."

That confused her as she stopped abruptly & turned around. There was nobody. Trying to remember that voice ...the one that called her Ms Jadhav But then she again heard THE voice , the one that she feared

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: shahsb_26
Me first ever??

😆😆

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riaka

@riaka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: maarushkaa

Tysm for the comment riaka ...
Glad to hear that u liked the update ...gosh the way I can interprete thic comment I can say that u really like fairs 😉
Ur questions wud be answered in the next update 😃

Yeah I do like fairs. I live in California and here fairs are all the time😆

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TheLifeDiaries

@TheLifeDiaries

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Posted: 9 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: maarushkaa

Tenthieee... Glad to hear that u liked the updates 😃
Chap 7 was meant to be suspence ke liye .. All of it will be cleared in the next chappy .. Well almost all of it !! 😉

Will wait for it di...😃

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-Maggi-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#397

ok thats me for being super late

I have become to lazy these days

1st-ly aesa kya hua use rath ko 😛

wonderful update marie loved it but still its like incomplete puzzle we need to get more for a better picture 😆

Poor Raghav he couldn't enjoy his trip for lack of money n kalpi she must have been very different from him n his life style, may be that might have attracted him towards her to know how others enjoy their life without doing stuff he do, n the time they spent in english mela 😛 might have given him a glimpse of that asli kalpi hidden under those panda pjs 😆

kalpi is like a mystery girl for me till now i could get an idea of what or how she is, except that slave n lord wala impression she gave to Raghav as u said, but again Raghav's dad might have had a fair reason to choose her for this mission to babysit a Completely growup Raghav 😆 she gave an idea of her wity by the question she asked Raghav n stomped him 🤣

waiting for next

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#398

Finally read d update...all three parts were fabulous

Kalpi ke sanghat me rags working hard day night on project n den getting shabhashi frm dad was nice😃

Hmmm so miss clumsy boring n not his type girl is having influence rags well a postive one ...so Mr. flirt is changing unknown to himself 😉

Awww poor rags was getting bored n can't even njoy his day off uske style me paise kam hone ki wajah se lol 😆

Rags asking kalpi gng to carnival n kalpi accepting was nice

Loved ragna having fun in carnival dem behaving lik kids n playing all games n rides was awesome...got to see new fun side of Kalpi ...maru beautifully written 😳

Can't w8 to knw wat happ to kalpi...may b sumthing related to call she recd I guess...eager to knw d reason...jaldi upd kar 😉😛

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: riaka

Yeah I do like fairs. I live in California and here fairs are all the time😆

Really ?? OK ...so now I know exactly which person to contact if I wanna know something about that place 😉

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: _Santhi_
ok thats me for being super late

I have become to lazy these days

1st-ly aesa kya hua use rath ko 😛

wonderful update marie loved it but still its like incomplete puzzle we need to get more for a better picture 😆

Poor Raghav he couldn't enjoy his trip for lack of money n kalpi she must have been very different from him n his life style, may be that might have attracted him towards her to know how others enjoy their life without doing stuff he do, n the time they spent in english mela 😛 might have given him a glimpse of that asli kalpi hidden under those panda pjs 😆

kalpi is like a mystery girl for me till now i could get an idea of what or how she is, except that slave n lord wala impression she gave to Raghav as u said, but again Raghav's dad might have had a fair reason to choose her for this mission to babysit a Completely growup Raghav 😆 she gave an idea of her wity by the question she asked Raghav n stomped him 🤣

waiting for next

Hahahaha...then what shud I be doing for a super late reply 😆

Kya hua tha uss raat ko ...yeh pata chalega aaj/ya kal raat issi thread pe 😉

Im super glad to know that u liked the uodate santhi

Kalpi is meant to be mysterious ...but soon tables are gonna turn when i start writing things from kalpi's pov

Shall update soon 😃