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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
how r u shona baby.?

m ok darling, nt gud dat much😒

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

m ok darling, nt gud dat much😒

get well soon shona baby, i m missing u and our partnership in crime 😆

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
get well soon shona baby, i m missing u and our partnership in crime 😆

me too mising bt cnt do anything, ab toh pc b ni milta.
Chal gn8 darling❤️

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

me too mising bt cnt do anything, ab toh pc b ni milta.
Chal gn8 darling❤️

gn dear

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Emotional os...loved it

Song was beautiful

Brilliant work maru...Loved dis different style of writing too

❤️ 🤗

PS- Good to see u back...atta lavkar shots update kar...w8ng😉😛

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ssna

@ssna

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Hey mariee plz update 1 more

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sweet_aditi

@sweet_aditi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: mariee

Unres ka koi iraada ??😉

unres 😆

hamesha ki tarah first sry for late unres😆

nw abt story.. super se bhi upar os Mariee.. i loved hw u portrayed raghav's emotions for kalpi 😳
Raghav was jerk who couldn't understand kalpi's lov , her support n her sacrifices 😡

kisine such hi bola hai.. we doesn't understand value of smthing until u loose it..😳
all is well when end is well.. while reading dis os i thought its end might be sad but na u gave happy ending 😃

I lov dis story concept.. new, passionate n emotional concept..

n ha thanx for resuming ur writing ka tadka😃

P.S. u kno mariee i lov dis os but u kno dis concept would hav been more suitable for short story (SS)... 😳 nw shots update kar de 😃

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aparna

@Appuu_AshLover

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: mariee

I am extremely overwhelmed by this comment of urs ..
I know it sounds weird...but glad to make u cry😃
Tysm for the comment🤗

Haha u made me cry by ur update matlab ur the Best 👍🏼 I've connected With ur characters Ur The "Creator" 😉
Thanks to u fr making my day with ur beautiful yet emotional update 😛

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
unres...😊😃
as i said...i loved reading it.😛
you r underestimating urself for no reasons...it was indeed ur one of best creations...👏...

fantastic os yar marsh...frm the beginning to the end.,
what i loved the most is raghav recalling their past conversation before their sepration in amidst of every paragraph in the first half update..it was superbly writter nd expressed.
nd the second half was the cherry on cake to read.
loved raghav as rockstar nd his way to bring back kalpi in his life.

now i m hoping to read more os by ur side nd ur other ongoing creations as well.
nd trust me its my honest reply.😃

One of my best creations ...hahahaha. I remember saying something similar on your holi wala os...mere hi words mujhi pe meon ??😛😛

Lol , just kidding zindgi ...tysm for this lovely lovely comment.

Glad to hear that u liked the transitions ...meko dar usi baat ka tha...ppl shouldn't be confused with the past-present switches ...ur comment relieved me !

More os ? Hehehe...na re baba ! Yehi maine itne mushkil se likha ...abhi ke liye I'm enjoying my spa time in ur clique by reading other's works which were lined up in my to-do list since a long tym.

Ty for this comment again zindgi 😃