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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ayesha.khan
awesome update

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: premap
you seem to be a very committed writer. I am glad. Give your best ,to your satisfaction, we will appreciate it. Thanks for this 'sad' update. Feel Kalpi's pain and hurt. For a 13 yr old kid , she has leant tolerance of pain.

ThanX for the support yaar. Yes, I love writing and I spend more time editing than actually writing. COz the story is already in my head. now its more about arranging my thoughts.

ThanX again😊

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: ssna
Loved it dear
Fab update.
Y no ragna talk?
Hope in next part we get dat.

Do give sometime for the characterization. And then the story will begin.

ThanQ 😊

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Beautifully written chapter
Kalpi is trying her best to please her mother but no matter what she does Kamla also put her down
I like that atleast Kalpi dad is there for her...
Hope someday Kalpi get all the happiness she deserve

Hi Natasha,

I hope you love the story even if it will remain on the sad side for a long time to come.

ThanQ🤗

Edited by _Mini_ - 10 years ago

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: akshara82
A very good start fr a wonderful story..
woulf love to read more..
i cried fr kalpi..
She s bearing everything just to get love frm evryone.
i hope she finds it soon..
Kanna will give her d love soon rite???

ThanQ Akshara for the vote of confidence...

Kalpi and I will both will need it for this story. 😊