RagNa OS:Much better than me.. Note added 13/03/15

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aparna

@Appuu_AshLover

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome OS appy right from The start while m reading I felt emotional ragna yaad aagayi 😭
Loved Ur Update 😊

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Awesome OS Arpi! It was nice the way you blended the past with the present ... The song was endearing. ...perfect for ragna. ...their plight...

Lovely moments. ...made me relieve the ema days... you have showed another way to write the revenge story... It was nice to see Sammy vocal about his disagreement rather than in the show where he kept silent... But I was confused with the ending... Raghav said his attempts to trace her failed... But still she came to him... Does that means she came on her own will or was it planned by Sammy?

Fabulous attempt. ... Hats off to you...👏

Edited by Kiaraah - 10 years ago

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Thank you everyone for likes and comments.. and kiara thanks .. I've edited that part..

Please guys do check how Kalpi comes to Raghav..

Sorry if its not sensible..

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Now it's perfect ! 😃

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Nisha VS

@redpetal

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Dear apply it's one of the finest OS I have read

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Beautiful os appy...banner was awesome

Loved d way past n present was blended

Ragna moments were lovely...Flshbk of beach memory was beautiful😳😳

Rags emotions was well potrayed n ending was fabulous

Brilliant work dear...loved it 👏👏👏

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arya

@aryagr

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome os. W8ing 4 updates of ur ff.

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Waapas exams aa gaye hai kya ?? 😛😛

Kyunki aise fatte wale os' tabhi sujhte hai 😆😆

Arpita ...it was simply marvellous !

Impecabble

Not a word was misplaced ...every single emotion making me crave for breath ...yeah ..so involved was i in it !!

Hehehe..though i expected the end to be dramatic , u kept it short & sweet

I liked ..no no ...i looved it !!

Aisehi likhte rahiyo ...

MARUSHKAA

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riaka

@riaka

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Wow what a beautiful OS. Loved it very much. Can You make it in two shots. Ragna were separated for 2 long years.I want to see how rag pacify kalpi, how he apologize and after that there KISS 😆😆...and there. ...just fill in the blank yarr.

Love you 🤗 for this lovely OS. Keep writing 👏