FF : EMA - Ek Naye Andaaz (Part 5 on Page 20) 12 April (NO PMs) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tks for givs wonderful naya awtar...loveddd:)
And yes pls. Introduce sammy sis...u remember na? I told u...waiting for nxt prt..
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DISCLAIMER : I do not own the characters of Ek Mutthi Aasmaan.. And sadly I do not own even Sammy who happens to be my very sweet hubby and the father of our twins πŸ˜› , Chittiz and Arisha 😳 And yeah.. I can definitely say this that my story is definitely better than that of those CVs 🀒




So off went Kalpi to Pune on her search for Raghav Singhania.. She had decided that she will bring him back at any cost. Meanwhile, the chawl members were facing a lot of problem since the Kapoors came back with a lawyer that said that the property was rightfully the Kapoor's so they will have to vacate it. Sahil Kapoor offered them money and new houses in return but Kamla wouldn't budge saying that they had been here since the start and that they won't vacate. Meanwhile in Pune, Kalpi entered the five-star hotel that was supposedly where Raghav was staying according to Sammy. She was thirsty as well as hungry. She hadn't eaten anything and was feeling very hungry. As she was rounding a corner, she dashed into a waiter who was carrying a tray of glasses filled with some liquid. One of the glasses fell on her and her dress got stained. She said,"Shit !!!" She looked accusingly at the waiter. The waiter mouthed,"Sorry Mam.." Kalpi said,"Its ok.. Plz tell me where the waashroom is." The waiter pointed to the washroom and Kalpi went inside and started to clean herself. Unknown to her, a man entered and saw her cleaning herself with wide eyes. Kalpi saw him and shouted,"Ahh... What are you doing here ?" The man turned behind as to see someone else there.. Kalpi said,"Am talking abt u only.. What are you doing in a girl's washroom ?" The man gave her a confused look and rolled his eyes,"This is not a girl's washroom, Young Lady.. This is a men's washroom." Kalpi said," No.. This is a ladies washroom.. I am not blind,." He said,'Well then. I think its time u change ur statement.. Look around.." Kalpi looked around." He pointed out to the stand toilets and asked,"Do you find toilets like these in the ladies washroom ??" Realization dawned on Kalpi's face and blood rushed to her cheeks.. She mumbled and went towards the door only to find out that it was locked..
She sweared loudly,"Shittt !!!!" The man said,"You know.. U really shouldn't swear out loud. It doesen't sound good." Kalpi glared at the man and started shouting,"Help !! Anybody there ?? We've been locked here.. Help please.." A man came and asked,"Mam.. What are you doing inside a Men's Washroom ??' Kalpi said,"Oh me ?? Well, I am brewing the polyjuice potion for myself and a gentleman over here.." The outsider asked,"What ??" Kalpi asked,"Cant you see am stuck ?? Get someone please. Or try to open it.." The outsider tried and said,"Sorry Mam.. But its not opening.. Looks like a carpenter has to be called.. You wait here please..' The outsider went away leaving Kalpi and the man inside. The man chuckled and said,"So polyjuice potion huh ?? But what I can't believe is that Moaning Myrtle herself is the one that is brewing the potion.." Kalpi asked,"What do you mean ?" The man said,"Nothing.." Kalpi glared at him and looked at the door.. She sat at the opposite wash basin and sighed,"I am definitely gonna miss meeting Raghav Singhania if I am stuck up like this ?" The man asked,"Does Raghav Singhania know you are here ?" Kalpi thought,"No he doesen't.. I need to tell him but then my battery is dead." She looked at him to find him staring at her with amused eyes. She started pacing around the floor again.. The man took out a chocolate bar from his coat and started happily munching on it. Kalpi looked at him and asked,"What are you doing ?" He stared at her and said," I didn't knew u were blind too.. Can't u see, am eating.." Kalpi said incredulously,"Yes.. But this is a washroom." The man asked,"So ?? " Kalpi looked him and said,'You are impossible.." Kalpi started pacing again. The man had finished his chocolate and was now ordering,"LEFT RIGHT.. LEFT RIGHT.. GROUP AND HALT.." Kalpi glared at him and asked,"Cnt u stay quiet ?" The man said,"The question should be directed at you.. You're the one that's pacing around the washroom, not me..And if you are thinking that pacing around like this will make the door open the door by itself, then you are wrong." Kalpi had come to stand beside him. She saw that behins his head, there was a telephone. She smiled and slowly reached for the phone. The man gave her a bewildered look as she took the phone in her hands and gave him a childish smile...
She called the manager but he was in a confused state as to in which room she was in. The man took the phone from her and spoke to the manager,"This is Raghav Singhania and I have been locked in the washroom with some girl who had accidently come in. T he ground floor washroom." Kalpi just stared at him. She couldn't believe that she had been spending time with Raghav Singhania until now. Raghav looked at her and asked,"What ?? Does my face have something on it ?" Kalpi asked,"You are Raghav Singhania ??" Raghav said,"Yes, I am.." Kalpi said,"And you didn't tell anything when I was blabbering about you." Raghav said,"Haha.. Surprise !! :P" The manager came and unlocked the door scolding Kalpi in process.. By that time, Kalpi was feeling very thirsty and so she asked the waiter for a glass of water. As she took the glass in her hand, she could feel the throbbing sensation in her head. Her head was starting to spin. She dropped the glass of water and held her head. Raghav and the manager turned towards her, Raghav's face full of concern for her. She couldn't handle it anymore and fainted on to the ground. Raghav rushed towards her and held her head. He shook her but there was no answer. He carried her in his arms in bridal style to his room where he laid her down on the soft bed and called for a doctor. The doctor arrived shortly and he checked her pulse. Raghav asked,"Doctor.. Will she be alright ?"The doctor said,"She is weak but she will be alright.. Just give her something to eat. She will be alright. She needs rest so let her rest." The doctor went away and Raghav sat on the chair beside the bed playing his favourite game - Candy Crush. He thought,"I wonder how many levels my Chutki would have completed. Never been able to beat her." Half an hour later, Kalpi stirred slowly earning Raghav's attention.
Kalpi slowly opened her eyes. Raghav moved closer to her. Kalpi asked,"Where am I ??" Raghav bluntly replied,"In mu hotel room." Kalpi shouted,"What ??! What am I doing in your room ??" Raghav snorted,"Ur welcome.." Kalpi asked,"What ??" Raghav said,"Nothing.. You fainted down. So I brought ypu here.. The doctor said you were weak so you need to eat something." He called the restuarant and ordered some food.. He walked back beside Kalpi and started playing his game. He lost a life and he sighed,"Damn this game !! Now I will have to wait for 15 minutes for the lives to fill up." Kalpi asked."Candy Crush huh ??" Raghav said,"Yeah.. Now I will have to wait for 15 damn minutes for the lives to fill up again.." Kalpi said,"U don't need to wait for the lives to fill up if you know the trick." Raghav asked,'What trick ??" Kalpi said,"Well, you just go to ur phone settings and change the date and time. Ur lives will automatically fill up." Raghav thought,"So this is how Deepika has been completing all her levels very fastly.. And she says she plays it without loosing any life. Hmph !! Am definitely gonna deal with her later.."

TADA !!!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ Am back after exams πŸ˜ƒ And am back to updating.. I personally love this part very much because it had RagNa and I pictured it to happen this way 😳 Now scroll down πŸ˜‰
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The doorbell sounded and Raghav broke out of his thoughts. He went to open the door and let in a waiter who was carrying a few number of dishes. He placed them on the bedroom table and went away after Raghav paid him the money. He went to the bedroom. He exclaimed,"Let's eat !! What would you like to have ?" Kalpi said,"I am not hungry. No thanx." Raghav said,"You have to eat. The doctor said you should eat." Kalpi whined,"I am not hungry." Raghav said,"I dnt you fainted just because you wanted to. Now stop whining and eat." He shoved two slices of pizza and asked her to eat. Kalpi looked at them with a face and looked at Raghav. He took a bite of his pizza and asked,"What ??" Kalpi asked,"Don't you eat anything healthy ??" Raghav shrugged and said,"Listen.. You eat.." Kalpi just ate her pizza in silence." After the quiet snack, Raghav went back to playing Candy Crush and lost after a few levels. He threw the phone into the sofa and ran a hand through his hair. He took out his office files and started going through it. Kalpi felt bored and so she came to him and asked,"Can I ask you something ?" Raghav said without looking at her,"Go ahead." Kalpi said,"The chawl is in danger.. Please you have to come and stop the people from destroying it." Raghav asked,"Why should I ?" Kalpi said,"Because, only you can stop it." Raghav asked,'What will I get in return ?" Kalpi looked at him shocked. She was at a loss at what to do.. Knowing Raghav, she knew that he was very stubborn and hot-headed. She looked at the files in his hand and said,"I will complete these files for you.." Raghav said,"That's impossible. I need these by tomorrow. Its impossible." Kalpi said,"I will do it.,. I will complete it and give you by tomorrow." Raghav shrugged and said,"Ok. Here you go." He threw the files on her and went away to the bedroom.. Kalpi fumed,"Thick-head !!!"
At night, Raghav was having his pizza again with Coke as he watched Kalpi do her work. Kalpi was busy making sketches and was too busy to notice him. Raghav stood up after his supper and said,"If you get hungry, I've left two pizza slices on the table. You can have them. Oh.. And there is a coke tin also left. You can have that too." Saying this, he picked up his phone and went to the bedroom closing it SHUT.. Kalpi groaned,"Right.. Another plate of pizza and coke.. Yikes !! And this thick-head doesen't know its impolite to slam a door on someone's face." Kalpi stayed up the whole night finishing the sketches and going through the files.. Meanwhile at the chawl, things weren't going well.. The chawl people had brought a laywer and he had managed to get some time for the chawl people to have Raghav Singhania come back.. The problem was that someone had told about this to the Kapoors. So they had planned a fake man to act as Raghav Singhania and make him call Kamla. Kamla unknowingly signed the papers that said the chawl could be destroyed and so the lawyer was very angry with this. One of the chawl ladies slapped Kamla for this while Vitthal supported her saying that Kamla would never do such a thing as to let go of the chawl for money as she was an active part in this Revolution. Pakhya also stood up for Kamla and Pakhi who had decided to stay with Kamla in the chawl until the porblem got solved stood up for Kamla much to the irritation of Neetu and Prem. Prem shouted,"This chawl will be destroyed tomorrow.. If you care for ur lives, then vacate and leave. Else, perish along with ur chawl. But nothing can change the fact or the decision that this chawl is going to be destroyed tomorrow."
Morning came and Kalpi was finished with the files at last. She knocked at Raghav's bedroom hoping that he wasn't sleeping his butt of. Raghav opened the door fully dressed. He was wearing a poka-dot button-up shirt, a navy blue overcoar and dark blue jeans. He looked handsome. Kalpi turned away blushing. Raghav noticed this and smiled lightly looking at his phone and staring at her. He asked,"Shall we leave ?" Kalpi handed over the files over to him and said,"Yes.. We shall leave." They got into the car and left..

PHEW !!! That's it for today.. Now I need ur comments for this 😳 So please LIKE and COMMENT 😳

Edited by veeranu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update as usually lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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deepi deepi its awesome u write so well love u made kalpi faint in arms of rag 😳
lovely just too awesome
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Candy crush trick πŸ˜ƒ
RagNa scene was awesome and welcome πŸ˜†

awesome update and some slapped our beloved Kamla 🀣 i wanted this to happen for that stupid Mahan πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update. ..so u n raghav play candy crushπŸ˜†
Kitne level pe deepuπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†...loved it. .raghav cary kalpi in his arm. .I so want this scene in ema. .but cv's😑..u fullfill my wish. .Thanks deepika. ..vese teri or teri hone wali bhabi (kalpi) kab mulakat hogi. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oo la la Deepika as always am in love with your disclaimer !!!!πŸ˜‰ Fabulous update n you do have a very sexy n hot brother 😳 Wish you were the writer of EMA then all of us wud have had a wonderful story !!!! Par yeh ho na saka aur ab hum aapke updates enjoy kar Rahe hain !!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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god deepi congo for the twins
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update Deepu di.. Nice... I luvd Ragna washroom scene... Nd Kalpi in Raghav's room... Awww... Plz update nxt chappy..

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