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Hello!!!
Firstly Thank you so much guys...🤗the response to this story is much better to what I got in Love and Mystery...and I am loving it and would expect the flow to remain same or may be more...greedy me😉

Okie coming to the present t situation I know our home is at risk so regarding updates I have sent PM to all in my buddy list regarding the probable solution.

I am sorry for not commenting on any of the posts but its a promise I'll as and when I get time...pakka gentleman promise😛

And yes lastly hats off to you all I have seen some good amount of posts in these two days which is commendable👏

Now without any further delay here's an update😊

Part-2

Raghav chose some exclusive dresses for her which matched with the occassion. She was surprised to see him having such good taste but then laughed at her own thinking "He must have pampered Pakhi a lot." On seeing her similing for no reason he asked "Kalpi..." She looked at him, embarrasment flushed on her face for being caught like this. "On what or to be appropriate on whom were you smiling." "No...nothing as such is there." "Liar I have seen you." With mischievious grin he asked "Thinking about boy friend" Her eyes went wide on hearing the word boyfriend.Impulsively she said "No...I don't have any Boyfriend. Surprised at her revelation he thought of further questionning her but given her nature he dropped the idea.

"So we are almost done with your clothes...did you like it, if you have any sort of problem you can take whatever you are comfortable in." "Na...na...these are really nice. I am thankful to you for choosing such nice pieces for me." "Oh C'mon Kalpi we are friends so don't bring these heavy formalities." She smiled and turned but stopped "Excuse me...what about my clothes...You were suppose to pick it up for me. Isn't it." "Well Rags...i cannot keep these clothes in my hand choose something for you...I was going to counter to give them for billing. And honestly tell me will you like my choice." "Well for that you have to select first." He winked and took few of the dresses from her hand to decrease the load.

Few minutes later they were standing before Men's Apparel. Kalpi chose some great outfits leaving three-piece suit aside.It was a big NO since it gave a formal look and he didn't want to appear like a Businessman. Trusting the woman in company to the core he tried on the stuff she asked him too. Much to his surprise he found them classy and proper for friends wedding. None of them were suits. He was highly impressed with her choice and there was no way he would say no to any of her chosen stuff. "She definitely has a better choice than me" He thought when he saw her asking the helper exactly what she wants for him. By late evening they were done and were content well they have to since they didn't have time to wander around and choose dresses from different shops. The shop that they had visited was best in the market and kept everything under one roof.

"Hushh (Neha this word reminded me your name coz at the end of your update you don't forget to write this word) we are done. It was so tiring I tell you shopping is the last thing I keep in my list. I get bored. Only when I am in dire need to buy something I get up" He looked at her dumbfoundedly. "Girls go crazy for shopping and here she is getting relaxed that she is done. Different!!! but cute and simple...rare of its kind."

"He is different...I speak so less yet my nature didn't decrease his enthu and he helped so cheerfully. After Sammy he is the first guy who didn't pin point flaws in my nature. He is good...different and grounded."

"Rags I guess we should call it a day. I should leave for my hotel." Saying so she moved ahead but stopped when he tugged her hand. "Can I ask for a dinner...I guess you won't mind...will you." "With me...some one who speaks so less." "Oh C'mon Kalpi...if I don't have any problem with your nature...why do you have a problem...to be honest some girls realy look beautiful when they speak less and honestly speaking silent girls are mystery and I...like mystery. She looked at him. Their eyes met and a different feeling for the first time entered her heart. He didn't take his eyes away from her. Her big doe shaped eyes had something in them...innocense and simplicity a magnificient combo and again rare too. Their brief eye-lock was broken when his car came to a halt.

"Heres my car so we can keep these bags here safely and can go for a dinner. What say..." "Okay" They went to a posh hotel to have their dinner.

"So Kalpi...tell me about yourself. You know we have not interacted that much as friends tend too and after spending time with you I believe people including me have misunderstood your nature to a great extent. We took your reserved nature as a conservative one. But in real you are a fun to be with." "And what made you come to this conlusion?" "I agree I am a failure in love but that taught me to recognise people and differentiate between simplicity and pretence. Now will you answer my question."

"Raghav don't say that you are a failure in love, love is a feeling its not an exam or competition. You know our heart carries a rough pic of our partner sometimes heart gives an exact face to that rough sketch while sometimes we give a face to it and chamces of not giving a proper face from our side is high reason heart is connected with soul and soul is a part of God...who knows everything..so don't say that you are a failure in love...this feeling is too strong to be kept for success or failure."

He was dumbstruck on listening to her views about love...all this while his Bhabhi tried to convince him in the same manner. She used to say that his heart has given him a chance to fall in love with someone whom he likes but he couldn't find the right person...Pakhi was definitely not the one his heart wanted...somewhere deep down he used to convince his heart that she is the one but they were always on the opposite side...his heart never agreed on Pakhi and soon he started feeling suffocated...his Bhabhi told him tonow give a chance to his heart to choose its rightful owner on its own. Heart can never go wrong.

Though differently but Kalpi also said the same thing and he understood it...pakhi was not that face which suited the rough sketch his heart has created for his partner.

"Kalpi...you are amazing...the burden of being a failure in love was not allowing me to lead my life but today you lifet it off my shoulder with such simplicity...You are awesome and I am really thankful to you..." "Don't be...coz you are friend...and remember the simple ground rules of friendship..hmmm" She smiled at him and after a good amount of time a genuine smile came in his face...the one which showed how much peaceful he is in heart.

Life is amazing sometimes you near and dear ones fail to explain you an outsider or a disnt friend does it as if it was the most simple thing to do. Love is pure and purity cannot be counted for failure or success...it is way above all these things. If you don't get your love you are a beartbroken person but definitely not a failure. Love knows how to heal and heart knows how to get healed. They don't go by the factors of success or failure they just need a heart that has pure love and reciproctes equally...thats it.


Thanks and Enjoy Reading. Guys give likes and comments dil kholke and yes one thing more criticism is welcomed in case you don't like the story so feel free.😛
Edited by b.baheti - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Very nice start for writing the story😉 Do continue, soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Barkha, nice incomplete update. I really love your FFs. 😃 Do complete soon. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Lovely update..
Loved d way both getting close aftr years 😳 😳
Looking frward fr their dinner date..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmm kalpi got caught they both can select clothes for each other n dinner hmm nice
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res. unres. superb update. Lovely dinner date of ragna yar.
Edited by ovee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update Berkha di.. Nice.. But plzz cumplt ur update... Waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
awsome update
and a beautiful description about love
thought we never able to define love in words
as it's a feeling which we understand only when we feel for something
but still u definevit amazingly
god i can't stop laughing when i read my name first
sunny now u caught me using this words
but i'm glad that u rememner me
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update berkha di... Plzz pplzzz update nxt chappy soon.. Waiting ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh my bharka what are you girl u just explained the most complicated thing in the world(as everyone feel it is) Heartbreak in the simplest way 👏👏👏 claps would be less if u were infront of me i would have hugged you tight 😃
I can say this is one of your best update i have read 😉

ab un sare majnu aur devdas ko samjana asan hoga 😛 😆

wonderful update this is what attracts me to ur stories simplicity in showing utmost complex emotions of life fan hogae aaj tho nahi phele hee thi aaj fedha hogae thumhari writing pe 😆😳

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