Broken wings ff - ch4 - 25/09 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay another Chappy thanks Neha🤗😳Ohh poor Kalpi she's feeling shame😭she just needs to fight it off and be strong!!!😉 How rude can they be poor kalpi😭 she realised they know,😭ohh how rude vitthal is😭 it's werid seeing him like that but Fathers behave like that..it's a shame!! Waiting to see a strong indepentant Kalpi taking down these stupid stupif people and they words!! Lovely update sweetie!!😳👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very emotional, I really hope Kalpi becomes strong and make sure Prem pays for what he has done, he did not think twice that he has a sister the could have happened to her, and where sahil would have put his face, it seems it has alot to do money and power, I fail to understand Gauri is she blind from which angle does prem looks like an angel. hopefully Raghav father believes that Kalpi is innocent so that indirectly he helps them get justice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update 👍🏼 Kalpi should be strong
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg guardian angel rags. He is following her and keeping an eye on her so sweet. 😳 I m so loving this rags 😛 he is getting job for vithal and Kamla. But I don't want him to feel guilty or pity for her I want him to love her for who she is and the strong and beautiful person she is.
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunyy

Omg guardian angel rags. He is following her and keeping an eye on her so sweet. 😳 I m so loving this rags 😛 he is getting job for vithal and Kamla. But I don't want him to feel guilty or pity for her I want him to love her for who she is and the strong and beautiful person she is.


The love will come slowly... There will come a time he will think it is guilt and then realise it is love.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: santhisreem

I like the concept you have chosen for this this FF n that gesture of ur's dedicating it to her 👏


it made me comment 1st time on ur story so now that its 1st I wanted to say that i love all of ur stories each one of them, they had something in them which make me instantly connect to them n they carry an underlying pain n intensity in them that i can literally feel it n especially hate me n Raghav in it is the most complicated character i have ever read n emotions u put in ur words just touches my heart and i love ur writing 👍🏼

ok have a complain before i finish ab aur kitne stories start karo gee yar cholo kar bhi diya tho but baki sab bhi update karonaaa special hate me n Graudian i love these two alot Graudian is just 2 r 3 chapters but don't know y i like it so much n it been ages u updated it k stopping es story pe bakiyoke tarif nahi😆


Thank you for the kind words and enjoying my stories... I will try and make more time to update all... All I can ask is for patience from your end.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: erikalui

Even I have a concept coming up and which is dealing with rape and so I would love to read your story as well. I love your heartbeat story as well and no matter that you changed the concept. If you had to stick to the original one as well, it would be a good read surely 😊


Oh bless that is wonderful... Looking fwd to read it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutu

Just read it and d 1st feeling is of respect..for u.i connected to d story completely..I felt kalpi's pain which means ur a superb writer. I dont know ur name but I feel like I know u.ur a great human being to explain some1s pain that way bt anyways mine is shruti im glad I read it.. 👏 👏


Thank you for the warm words... Call me fuzz.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Angel I m mad at u . U never Asked me to call u fuzz 😡 😉 but I wouldn't have any way because to me Angel is the perfect name for u 😛 muah for all ur stories especially this one ... This one will hold a special place in my heart because of the issue it covers and the way u have shown it 🥺 ❤️ the reason u didn't ask me to call u fuzz is it because I m chipkoo and follow u to all ur ffs 😉
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: GUYCAN

Thank you for writing this FF ...
Lemme share a bit ...hope I don't bore you 😊😊
My friend is one tuff & strong cookie ...Yet meek inside but she doesn't show it ...
her parents had a bitter divorce ...her mom remarried that's when the rape took place at a tender age ...at first my friend didn't know what was going on because that monster would bribe her with candy & threaten her...yrs pass by yet she didn't share it with any one because she was afraid no one will believe her ...after a while thing got really bad at school she would get into fights & start drinking & smoking...her family start accusing her that she 's a disgrace to her family ...that's when the truth came out ...no one in her family believe her ...worst part her own family kick her out she was living at the shelter for a while & start working at age 14 ...finally she found a family who accept her ...
oh she learn the bitter truth about life ...she did stuff that she 's not proud of but she did what she had to do to survive ...
she 's one of the strongest person I know & i'm so glad I met her ...how did I met her ?about 3 yrs ago we did this programme & every one thinks she was weird & start gossiping abt her ...I would listen to them ...I'm so thankful for my mom who thought me don't judge a book by its cover ...so I look at her & feel something abt this girl ...she wouldn't talk to any one but me being a chatter box kept talking to her finally she start talking to me until this day ...there's soo much more to share let me stop ...
I'm so happy for her because the guy she 's dating accept her for who she is & doesn't care about her past ...
Her character remind me of Kalpi ...


The girl is really strong and it's really tough to deal with situations that happen in your own home. That's why it is said that girls aren't safe within their house.

I too know a woman who went through this trauma and she was my mom's friend. She was raped by her real dad and brother when she was young and that too everyday where her mom was a witness to it and her mom could not say anything. Don't know where she is today but I hope she is safe and happy away from her family. They aren't worth to be called as parents.

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