Broken wings ff - ch4 - 25/09

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My dear dear readers,
I am going to write an ff where Ragna's journey will be different. I have recently realised thatyou are possessive of Ragna being together. This is commendable.

My story is changing... As a writer I am at the mercy of my imagination.
For now... Not sure... Ragav and Pakhi might be married or engaged or dating.
I think I will tackle sexual assault/ rape and the stigma and trauma around it. Obviously Kalpi will face this and Ragav will give his protection and support and eventually fall in love with her through her strength and belief in herself.

I am not going to change the concept of my story, because I am writing this story for myself and the few who would like something different.

I understand that many of you would not want to read it and I respect you choice. I want to explore the complexities of human emotions in situations. I want there to be a realism and depth in my stories and character. I like writing intense stories where there is heartache and sacrifice and self belief.

Pakhi will always play a role in my stories, because I love her character. I respect and understand that her character leaves a sour after taste, but please keep in mind my Pakhi is different from the show.

Which is why I am choosing to still go ahead and write this. I don't promise the story will turn out well, but I want to give it a try.

I love you guys and appreciate you love and support, but the writer in me needs to write this story.

Lots of love

Fuzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Content
Prologue - page 1
Character sketch - page 2
Chapter 1 - page 3
Chapter 2 - page 3
Chapter 3 - page 9
Chapter4 - page 15
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Prologue
Ragav restlessly turns from side to side in his sleep... Perspiring as his subconcious submerges deeper into his dream. He sees himself running around heedlessly as he searches for someone, muttering, "you promised... You promised to never leave me."

Exhausted, but never giving up... Until finally he sees a glimpse of her... She is several yards away... Her back towards him... Without seeing her face... He knows it is her... He could never forget her hair... Her long silky beautiful black hair... He feels a sense of peace as he walks up to her.

Suddenly the image changes... She is in a car... Driving away... Panicking over losing her once again he runs after the car, drops onto his knees in the middle of the road as the car disappears, yelling "come back... Don't leave me."

Sensing someone caress his arm, he looks up... He looks into eyes that are jet black... Beautiful black doe shaped eyes. His heart starts beating again... He smiles as she complains, "why did you take so long to come for me? I have been waiting and waiting."

He wakes up from his dream smiling... Looks anxiously to his left. Relief seeps in as he watches her sleep by his side. Seconds become minutes as he watches her sleep... His eyes drinking in her presence. He places his arms around her womb... Smiling as he feels the baby kick... And drifts off back to sleep.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Even though I m not a pakhi fan and can't digest her. I love ur writing so for u I will even digest that Angel 😕 but I request u atleast finish my heartbeat first. And I also notice u are determined to have kalpi have a used house fly laden wee wee 😆
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunyy

Even though I m not a pakhi fan and can't digest her. I love ur writing so for u I will even digest that Angel 😕 but I request u atleast finish my heartbeat first. And I also notice u are determined to have kalpi have a used house fly laden wee wee 😆


Thank you. I will finish heartbeat.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Stalkers at your service !!!😆😆


Angel your name is Fuzz...Unique name for an awesome person😳😃

Lol...I will tried to behave properly😳...No promises😛

From the time I join IF I love your style of writing... Whatever you throw on the table I will read...


PS!!
I only go crazy for certain writers & your one of them😳😉😳...
I can't help it 😆😆


Edited by GUYCAN - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: GUYCAN

Stalkers at your service !!!😆😆



Angel your name is Fuzz...Unique name for an awesome person😳😃

Lol...I will tried to behave properly😳...No promises😛

From the time I join IF I love your style of writing... Whatever you throw on the table I will read...


PS!!
I only go crazy for certain writers & your one of them😳😉😳


My story is changing... I think I am going to explore sexual assault and or rape in Ragna's journey.

Thanks for the love... Mwah.
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Originally posted by: angelpureness


My story is changing... I think I am going to explore sexual assault and or rape in Ragna's journey.

Thanks for the love... Mwah.



Interesting topic !!
Broken Wing not bad .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting so will this rape be before or after marriage and is it going to be kalpi? By prologue rags is very afraid of losing her. Could u write chap 1
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting story concept😉

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