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ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Angel A big wala. 👍🏼

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premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Superb ! 3 Cheers for Kalpi ! I loved her guts for standing up boldly against the rapists, without the usual weeping of our Indian heroines ! Love the concept. Hope you keep it real interesting ,like the start !

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vyshuu..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Woww angel.. another ss.. 😃
And this plot seems so real n intrestnggg.. the way tryng to give clear glance of d characters was good.. I lykd it!!
Lookng forward to read more..

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Omg poor kalpi now everyone is going to ridicule her in society. It is such a horrifying truth in india. Sahil probably bought the judge and police. 😭 😡 so will rags stand up for kalpi will he friend her? How will he help her and fall for her?

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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Aria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Hi Hi sweetie gonna read this FF it's kinda like my symbol of love SS with Rape and women standing for themselves!!! So I'm going to enjoy reading your writing😃😃

Woah sweetie chapter 1 is so sad and It's true Kamla's reactions I've seen it alot with Mothers😭 Raghav saw Kalpi like that it's so sad😭😭 He's right to leave the country women need to fight for their rights😭👍🏼 what kalpi said was right "

"God did not plan for me to get raped. Don't bring fate into it!" It's true😉

Chapter 2 no one believes Kalpi and it was my chocopie prem 😡😡 hate him in the FF😡 no one believes Kalpi!! It does happen to women all around why does the women get the blame when the man does everything and gets away!! Angel This FF is beauitfully wriiten and so realistic I would love to see how Kalpi stands and Fight!!! Go for it 👍🏼 It's Like My SS but you're showing the Deep Parts which is great!!

Waiting also PM me don't want to miss your Chapters

Edited by ariarai - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Omg I m loving rags father Angel. I love the way he is explaining things to rags and thinking of kalpi. 😛 so curious how will rags and kalpi meet now.

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: akshara82
Awsome start Angel..
Kalpi s a strong woman battling with life aftr being a victim of rape..
A very apt concept Angel as der r still so many rape victims who hv just remain
silent coz of tis society tdy wic is literally ruled by richie richs
Though ter r a few strong women who hv emerged frm tis battle n nw living happy life..
I would love to read ur writing about kalpi n her struggle n how she battles with it n
bocome strong..
And Raghav being her support system..
Update soon Angel..

I hope I am able to do justice to this story and the trauma women suffer.

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sunyy
Mph I m loving rags father Angel. I love the way he is explaining things to rags and thinking of kalpi. 😛 so curious how will rags and kalpi meet now.

Actually Ragav's dad is a lot like my dad. Having lived in the west for over a decade... My father has to constantly remind me that life is different... That here in Africa, right and wrong does not exist... Only money does... A similar situation in India... In fact I think a similar situation in all developing countries.

Sadly!

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ariarai
Hi Hi sweetie gonna read this FF it's kinda like my symbol of love SS with Rape and women standing for themselves!!! So I'm going to enjoy reading your writing😃😃
Woah sweetie chapter 1 is so sad and It's true Kamla's reactions I've seen it alot with Mothers😭 Raghav saw Kalpi like that it's so sad😭😭 He's right to leave the country women need to fight for their rights😭👍🏼 what kalpi said was right "
"God did not plan for me to get raped. Don't bring fate into it!" It's true😉
Chapter 2 no one believes Kalpi and it was my chocopie prem 😡😡 hate him in the FF😡 no one believes Kalpi!! It does happen to women all around why does the women get the blame when the man does everything and gets away!! Angel This FF is beauitfully wriiten and so realistic I would love to see how Kalpi stands and Fight!!! Go for it 👍🏼 It's Like My SS but you're showing the Deep Parts which is great!!
Waiting also PM me don't want to miss your Chapters

Thank you. I hope I am able to do justice to the story. I would love to read your ss. Please post the link.😊