My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03

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Nisha VS

@redpetal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Angel, It was a warm update. Thank you. Complete it soon with a long one. I loved the way raghav caressing her, it shows his undying love for her. . Then kalpi saying that the couples bedroom is a heaven was true and beautiful. I just wonder how raghav thought kalpi was in love with someone else and pregnant with someone else baby. Why she will marry him if that's true so... and here he is not even ready to talk, why?Anyway this makes the story so interesting..

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premap

@premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Short and real sweet chap ! Thanks. Loved them for leaving their egos and loving each other. Hope Rags MU will be cleared soon.

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#403

Angel,this ff has got the depth and the pain .a surrogate mother

undergoes during those 10 months and has to handover her child to another,though for the sake

of money,a mother is unique and can't be compared with anyone.

Here,the situation is far more complicated,Kalpi is in madly love with a married man and carrying his child ,still worrying for his wife.

OMG,so much of pain and struggles !!!!!!!!!!! Our hearts are paining seeing her tears and helpless ness!!!!!!!

Though the update is small.still it has the much needed warmth in it.I like the way,Kalpi is handling

Rags,though in love,she isn't dumb and spineless.

WAITING FOR SUCH COZINESS IN THE NEXT UPDATE.

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lovelybubbly

@lovelybubbly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#404

Angel ...when will you update next part?????

Cant wait 4 long... don't delay it further. plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz.

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Saumya

@SamBricka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Dear plzz update nxt chappy waiting

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#406

Very nice story angel! 😃

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#407

Angel ,

Some cute moments related to Kalp's pregnancy :: Like having weirdest food cravings and making Rags to get it at odd time.Something like that!!!!!!!!

As such,the environment is very disturbed over there.Hence,some light belly dance is much needed at this moment.

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Please update Angel . Waiting for an extension to last teeny weeny chapter. 😛

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Read all parts in one go...awesome story...thnxs for changing ur original story n getting ragna married earlier...its just dat cannot bear d name pakhi Singhaniya🤢 jus cannot connect wit pakhi's character jus coz of stupid cvs n der twists n bad acting of actress

Both ragna love eachothr so much dat dey r willing to sacrifice der love n happiness to make other happy

So neetu trapped kalpi in her plan n poor girl was emotionally blacmailed by her n accepted to carry a child of the man she is madly in love with

Loved dat paakhi moved out of raghav's life as she figured out raghav loves kalpi n kalpi is not bearing der child... like the convo Raghav and Pakhi had

So big big confusion here raghav thinks she loves sum1 else n carrying his baby n kalpi thinks its raghav n pakhi's

Finally ragna got married😳

Kalpi is so mischievous ...her teasing him was soo cute

doc n kalpi scene was funny

Loved dat Raghav culd sense Kalpi saddness even with his eyes close

wow loved dis bold Kalpi asking her hubby to kiss her 😉😳

So raghav is hurt coz he thinks she is lying n unknowing hurt kalpi

Hope dis mu gets cleared soon n we get ragna romance 😉😛