The Inevitable Beginning: RagNa SS,EPILOGUE, Pg-132,21/1/17

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#751

Beautiful ending
I like that Kalpi is the one to initiate their lovemaking for once and it was smoking hot 😳
RagNa relationship had only grow stronger with time and patience
Love the happy ending
Congrats to RagNa on their baby :)
Charu thanks for sharing this awesome story with us

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#752

Now I'm jelous of kalpi after this update 😛 Coz she have Raghav 😆

lovely ending for this beautiful story Completely enjoyed their journey 😃

wonderfully written 👏

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Vishaka

@Vishakha..

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#753

really awesome update!!!!

kalpi finally overcame her inhibitions and moved on with raghav ,,,,yay!!

gauri really did a good job sending them away alone to spend time because of which everything got fine between them...

really loved the update...

waiting for epilogue...

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shoonya9

@shoonya9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: b.baheti
Inevitable beginning comes to a beautiful end. It says good things come in small packages and this story fits the saying perfectly.

It has been one of my favourite stories for many reasons. The writing, character sketch, grip and most importantly the maturity and wisdom you inculcated in each character. Maturity and wisdom is the most awesomest combination! Rare of its kind! People tend to forget either of the two in many instances. But in your story I found it till the end, not just in the main characters but all involved in the story. The inhibitions in Kalpi's charcater to adjust in and adapt Raghav's lifestyle & world and Raghav's inner battle to accept that he has fallen in love with Kalpi because of the sour taste he felt in the first instance of love with Dona was well written and in the apt amount. Also the undertsanding they shared in between them to give each other the space to grow more familiar was amazingly shown.

Gauri and Kalpi's parents rather than waiting for their shy childern to take any move understood the visible confusion they were having for this relationship and the fear of loss they were going through. Parents are best friends and nobody can undertstand a childs silence better than them. I really liked this too.

All in all I liked everything about this story, the gradual progression of the two central characters from being colleagues to friends to something more to lovers and finally becoming one for which they were distined for.

Hats off to you Charu you deserve a big applause for this work👏 I kinda liked this idea of OS on Raghav's and Kalpi's instances in their beautiful inevitable journey. I'm already looking forward for it.😛

And finally a big sorry for not commenting earlier on my favourite story.😊

PS:- Please include RagNa's experience on parenthood in either epilogue or one of your OS.

Superb summarization Barkha! Nice to see you active again. We all have committments in our lives, and yet we cater to this creative aspects of us, because it enriches part of us, it keeps novelty in us, it stops the monotony of life in us, and something new blooms in us.

You too are a fabulous author, who rightly caught up the precious role that parents play in the lives of children, and how lucky are those children whose parents understand unspoken words of them, and teach them silently to acknowlege and accept their feelings and take steps towards a bright and fulfilling future.

One of my friend once told me she sees your style of shadow in my comments, take a bow girl for that. And yeah do remember there is someone always waiting for your stories whenever you feel like and have a time to update.

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shoonya9

@shoonya9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#755

Hey Charu, A very very special thanks to you too for beautifully acknowleging me.

though i have not commented regularly, you gave me my space nd acknowleged me, now that is what i call a true spirit.

I have always liked this about you, you are able to feel the pinch of others too, and you actually never expect anything from your readers. Those who dont comment too are welcome and those who comment do get beautiful replies from you. That is what called giving true space and freedom.

All are saying its beautiful ENDING. I call is still INEVITABLE BEGINNING. In the journey of lives even death is just a temporary PAUSE, then its the life of RAGNA has begun as couple. one stage is crossed and another beautiful stage of PARENTING is about to start...SO IT IS INEVITABLE BEGINNING. And yeah you too have BEGAN OS Thread, so its CONTINEUATION.

And loved this Bold Avataar of Kalpi with role reversal. You have and are exploring a different aspect of female part taking initiative which is important in any healthy relation to keep freshness and charm going on in relation. Beautifully penned down. And also the after effect of mini honeymoon where they became truely one. The wise and loving mother and parents can make the life of their children smooth and Silky.

Barkha said RAGNA are matured and wise, i add they are combination of maturity, wisdom and innocence.

Yes shoe their parenting experiences in Epilogue, and whatever runs in your IMAGINATION. It will be ROMANTIC and BEAUTIFUL just as you- QUEEN OF SEPROMANCE.

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b.baheti

@b.baheti

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: shoonya9

Superb summarization Barkha! Nice to see you active again. We all have committments in our lives, and yet we cater to this creative aspects of us, because it enriches part of us, it keeps novelty in us, it stops the monotony of life in us, and something new blooms in us.
You too are a fabulous author, who rightly caught up the precious role that parents play in the lives of children, and how lucky are those children whose parents understand unspoken words of them, and teach them silently to acknowlege and accept their feelings and take steps towards a bright and fulfilling future.

One of my friend once told me she sees your style of shadow in my comments, take a bow girl for that. And yeah do remember there is someone always waiting for your stories whenever you feel like and have a time to update.

Firstly I am speechless because of your comment. Thank you so very much dear you don't know or may be you know how much it means to me😊

Those lines just made my day and you know what I am actually feeling apologetic right now for even thinking of discontinuing my works for that few moments. I am sorry and trust me post May 25th I'll revive all my stories.😊

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: b.baheti

Firstly I am speechless because of your comment. Thank you so very much dear you don't know or may be you know how much it means to me😊

Those lines just made my day and you know what I am actually feeling apologetic right now for even thinking of discontinuing my works for that few moments. I am sorry and trust me post May 25th I'll revive all my stories.😊

I don't like to pick and choose generally; or reply out of turn. But it would be so so unfair if I do not reply to Shoonya and Barkha, both of you right now. 😃 Your both comments made my day 😃 😳 Thank you so so much.

@Barkha: I read your comment before I came on line and I was grinning ear to ear. 😃 To receive such praiseworthy words by one of the best writers on forum and certainly one of my most favourite writers, I think I was glad for writing this story just for this reason. 😃 It made all the updates of this story successful. 😃 You know I love your stories so-so much; because they are perfectly balanced always. they have perfect balance of each emotion and genre; tears, happiness, drama, emotions, joy, fun, everything. Plus they always carry a message & a meaning in them. I missed your stories and now, after so many days I read something by you. your comment on a story of mine. I am on top of the world. I will surely try to reply individually to that specific comment by you when I start replying. But I wanted you to know how happy I am by these words Barkha 😃 Love you 😃 🤗 Thanks for commenting and praising; mostly for staying with this story 😃

@Shoonya: 😃 See what I said, you always post most awesome comments whenever you do. Just like you did this time too 😃 I will surely reply to it individually too when I will reply to rest. But the sweet words you wrote for me, made me calmer. Because I am not as perfect as you may perceive. I have my lows too when I feel sad to read less comments on my stories; or when I feel maybe this story isn't that much loved. or maybe I should not feel guilty for the delayed updates, because maybe very few people may care. But then, somehow I end up remembering mostly how patience has reaped good benefits always. How readers and friends shower me with so much love at times, making me realise not to force my expectations on readers was a good decision. These words by you reinforced that feeling and gives me strength to try and always be like this only. Thank you so so much Shoonya, 😃 Waise how are you dear? Everything fine? It seemed like you had a rough patch before?

Edited by chahat4u - 9 years ago

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#758

Fabulous updates

Awww rags is so understanding... Lik how he comforted her aftr vidai n make her feel at home 😃

Rags suprise was beautiful... n his confession was romantic n him calling her jaan was sweet 😳😳

Also lik rags dnt pressurise her n gave her space n time was lovely

Hmmm already kalpi feared to adjust rags rich lifestyle n den preeti telling her abt rags past Donna made her more insecure

Loved how rags ignored Donna n answered her back

Poor rags he was hurt by Kalpi's wrds ...but still lik how he explained wat he feel for her ...also it was a turning point in der love story as kalpi realised dat she can't live w/o rags

Gauri is such an understanding mother...loved d bond dey all share...even she understands her dIL so well 😃

Lik how kalpi was carefree around rags in Goa n dey started bonding n rags sweet simple gestures made her realise her love for him n forgetting all her inhinbitations she was ready to take der relationship further

U hav beautifully portrayed ragna feelings ...her shyness his naughtiness den him giving her time everything was brilliantly written...never doubt ur skills wen u write such romantic scenes...d way u potray ragna feelings make us fall in love all over again 😳

Loved DAT ragna relationship has grown stronger wit time

Finally a happy ending or should I say the invetible beginning of der new life😃

Charu thanks for giving such a wonderful story ❤️ 🤗

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#759

Charu, read chapter 21 and 22,

I am in lala land... and before I can read further I need to be out from lala land...!! 😆

I seriously loved loved loved chapters, both of them were wonderful... Goa Trip was successfully planned by Gauri... and Loved how you portrayed Raghav as supportive husband towards Kalpana, making her comfortable at every step...!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I will surely read last past soon, and be back.