The Inevitable Beginning: RagNa SS,EPILOGUE, Pg-132,21/1/17 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ariarai

Kalpi Is feeling super shy,that feeling is in the Air,😳☺️Aww raghav gave food to kalpi 😳Ohh kalpi's looking at her wound😭ok staring ching at kalpi then catching her 😳 awww 😳 she's on his Lap and both are ☺️ Butt😆 butt Charu I'm sorry for laughing at that part 😳😆 forgive me butt😆😆😆 okay serious now😉woah Raghav looks like he isn't going to stop or resit😲😳 he's tottally in love with Kalpi😃Ya! Raghav needs to control himself 😆😆 " To hell with control", "I cannot go against it any longer" Raghav is pretty bold here now😲😉 Kalpi realised Rags is totally flirting with her and the cheesy lines 😆😆 I'm with Kalpi I'm totally shocked He's her boss and he's totally flirting here😲😉woah He's kissing her now,Kalpi isn't resiting at all 😆 she's enjoying it I Know that for sure😉Aww he kissed her and kalpi's happy she got her first kiss😃😳 Woah these two are like making out on the couch,And he's touching her and Kalpi isn't resiting yetAww raghav likes kalpi aww he said she's beauitful😳And Kalpi wants to see him happy thats really really nice she's indeed a great person,😉Ohh he's seeing regret aww,Their both Thankful if that moment 😳 Kalpi admitted her desire for himOmo he's kissing her again😳😳Ohh raghav realsied he went to far,Its nice raghav realised he caanot mess with Kalpi like that and then he goes on Kissing and thanking her again😛Oh he doesn't want to let her go and thinks she's safer with her parent at home Nice choice Rags👍🏼If i too was in Kalpis situation I would've been quiet too,After what their did it most likely will be awkward😆😆Ya! He's kinda demanding right now holding her wrist saying not to call him sir outside😈Ohh kalpi's cheeks is turning red😳😳Raghav is famous for biting his lips aww RagNa at the end,Woah Kamla and Vitthal arragnge someone else for kalpi?? Update Deary😳

Charu!! Lovely update as usual,Beauitful writing and Words,Inspiring as always,Beautifully wriiten,Update soon🤗😃😳


Aria, Aria, Aria!!😲😃🤗 You always make me fall short fo words to reply. You're such a sweetheart darling.😃 You made me laugh also at that "but, butt, butt". 😆☺️ yes they both love each other dearly, but ti was a difficult test for Raghav! 😆 Thanks a lot once again for your awesome reply!! I don't have proper words right now, so would only say: Thank You, Muah. 🤗❤️


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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: abxetz

O charu 😳 😳 thanks for the hot romantic update 👏 👏 😳 bechara raghav control karke raka hua dha apnai emotions ko wounds ko treat karthe waqut.par after dinner kalpi ko chodnai ja raha dha gentilman ki tara dhodi sai late hogaye or kalpi apnai wound ko dekhrahadha bare legs dekhkar hi rags ki ada hosh tho gaya 😆 😆 or kya timing hai kalpi ki taraf athai hi 'THUD' 😆 😆 vo bi gentle man ka lap mai kab tak control ka nattak kartha bechara 😆 😳 😳 or hamari angel ki magic se bachkar kaha jayega rags 😳 ho I like that dialogue "but I have exhausted all my control for tonight". 😳 😳 eagerly waiting for to know iss night ke badh unka relation kaisai agebada or of course after marriage 😳 ahem ahem 😳 😆 😉 by darling 🤗

Wow, long comment! Thanks. 😃 LOL, yes Raghav ke control ka test bahut difficult tha. 😛 especially when two hotties are in the same room and they both have feelings for each other.😳 Thanks for loving that dialogue. 😃 You'll have to wait a bit more for after marriage romance.😳 🤗

Originally posted by: lolor


it was so hot it took hours to unres... 😆
whats ragnalious update...both wr so much into eachother...& turned on... 😉
kissing caressing & massages...ohhh I m on ragnaland...
waiting for post marriage update...

LOL, thanks Lolor. 😆 Hope you enjoyed Ragnaland,😃 You'll have to wait a bit more for post-marriage update. 😳 😛

Originally posted by: Aru18

amazing update.

till now he only show his rs side to kalpi but now kalpi know his other side too..
both understan the attraction between them..but stilll not aware about the real feelings..
kalpi enjoy raghav's touch and he is enjoy kalpi's shyness..😳
now what is store next for them..plz update soon

Thank You Aruhi. Yes and his other side is very dangerous! 😆 Updating soon.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

resh😳
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charu first sorry for late reply It is fine dear, I know you take out time for sure to read. 😃

and 2nd thanks to Di and Angie who motivate you to wrote this amzing TS😃 Aww, yes I am thankful to them also. 😃 Otherwise I had planned to write my new story ideas in OS/SS form after finishing Glass Wall. But somehow couldn't resist this one when they motivated me.😳

As usual you are fabulous dear 👏
starting is just amazing, the way u start "There, I felt my husband's arms around me for the first time." is superb⭐️ THANK YOU!!!! 🤗❤️ Muah. 😳😃

Ragna are married 😳 this is what sumthing great surprise, starting of TS ragna are married 😉 and they are hugging each other without any boundries.
Ragna are ready to reliving their love and arrange marriage journey ofcourse for us, their fan😆😆 ha ha, for a change no separation track. LOL. 😆

and here star the whole journey, which made me speechless. it is amazing beyond imagination. the party night you described is marvelous, love it charu😃.Glad you liked it so much. 😃

m not describing more as it is out of word and m just enjoying it😛
So much excited to knw how raghav kalpi come close and they got married I understand, thanks so much. Love your comments always. 🤗❤️

fabulous update👏👏😳 Thanks sweetheart.😳😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Susheela123


Dear Chahat4u,
Wah !! Superb & Amazing Flashback of RagNa. !!
Dear Chahat4u, ( what is your real name ? Can I ?/ May I know ? )
Please post next part updates soon dear.
Awesome story of RagNa with its uniqueness of its own, as Present RagNa r recalling their romantic past RagNa in flashbacks, !! That is superbly thought & done by you dear.
Good going !! , wonderful updates. those recall moments r cute & nice.
Awesome past RagNa is meet !! Mindb lowing , cute & sweet shyful kalpi with so caring & loving Raghav ;
updates are well written; !! Next part updates post soon, pl.
God Bless & take care dear;


Hello Susheela Ma'am, it feels good always to see your comment on any of my updates. My real name is Charu, you might have seen my comments on facebook. Thank you so much for your encouraging and loving feedback. Glad you liked it. 😃 Updating next part soon. 😳😃Thanks, you too take care. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

Hey why didn't I get a pm? 😲

Commenting after reading (Yes, finally I cannot be driven away by 16+ notices 😛)
Okay sorry I can't comment right now
☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Oh, is it? I am so sorry! 😭 it must be a mistake. 😭 LOL, naughty Ushoshi! 😛 Waise I know you are mature enough mentally to handle hot updates also. That is a compliment because I love your FFs. 😳 Hope you had enjoyed your blushing session. 😆😃❤️

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Don't You think, even you should have added one warning there..!! :P Super Hot update..!! Do Not Read while travelling in Public or sitting in room with family..!! Unless You Know how to control ur BLUSH.! ;) :D

LOL, I will think of it next time Sejal!😆☺️ Thanks for your feedback. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

update charu...
waiting u r update all ff , ss update de do
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Heyylooo dear..
Wow!! A TS frm u.. 😃 I totally loved readng it.. hayeee hayee.. all the ragna scenes which portray, wouldn't make me to cum out of our ragna dreamland 😉😆 all the scenes ll be diffrnt yet too romantic! 😳 and the their character.. which ll be unique frm others.. in dis raghav.. though he is a bit arrogant, we got to see his naughty side of him in dis ts.. nt nlyy dat.. he even gave space to her and respected her, nt to break her trust on him.. so sweet of him and kalpi.. though it seems her char is same, bt its a bit diffrnt in a good way! And aftr wat all happened btw them.. she was happy dat it happened without any regrets😃 nw Im excited to read more.. 😆
Ps- I knw i had res-ed fr frst update, bt nw I made dis comment fr both d updates.. hope u dnt mind 😳

Hellooo Vyshu. 😃 Hayeee...thanks for awesome comment again. 🤗Thanks for the compliment dear. I truly, truly keep them close to my heart and cherish them. 😳 Happy you liked the small differences in Ragna characters good, although that was not a planned thing. 😆 no I didn't mind. 😳

Originally posted by: AlexWaverly

Nice update Charu

Gosh they are so in love.Although they haven't realised it.Yet the physical attraction is too much to bear for both of them.
Loved how Raghav didn't want Kalpi to get hurt,wanted to know how she felt.Loved how Kalpi said she would cherish the moment forever.It made Raghav so happy.He was thankful to Kalpi.Loved that part.Loved everything.
Great followup Charu.

Hey, thanks Gopa. Glad you liked it. 😊😳 ya, intensity of love and physical attraction both!😳 Thanks a lot for your loving feedback dear, you know your comments are special. 😊😃

Originally posted by: appyK

Gosh super awesome !!! Just can't stop saying this.. I love your ffs ke Raghav and this one is the hybrid of other three..
He is caring and loving Raghav like in Glass walls and Marriage story and he's also a flirt like the one in Celebration of fates.. Perfect mixture!!!!
And no need to say anything about romantic scenes which were as usual beautifully written..
Couldn't help but mention this.. On Raghav's dialogue swaying between I love her or I like her I imagined him as the bob of pendulum moving from one side to other..

I'm super greedy so just want this to be a SS .. Can't wait for more RagNa romance..
Continue soon..

Hey Arpita. 🤗 Thank you, thank you, thank you. 😃 Glad you liked it; and Raghav's character. 😃 LOL, me cracking here, with that bob of pendulum thing. 😆😛 Let's see what happens to its length LOL. 😆 Updating soon.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: switymango


update charu...
waiting u r update all ff , ss update de do


Somebody save me now LOL. 😆 Arrey I can write only one update in one day! I do write every day but sometimes plans go haywire and I am unable to complete. LOL. Koi na koi FF ke lie wait karna hi padega. 😳😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Beautifully written chapter
I love RagNa individual pov
They shared their first kiss which was magical...
Raghav stopping at the right time was amazing and I love that he didn't pushed his limit even though Kalpi didn't object. Awww, Kalpi love her sir and of couse Raghav is confused about his feelings
I love the entire chapter

Thank You Natasha, glad you liked it. 😃 yes, their magical first kiss Yes, Raghav didn't want to take advantage of their weak moments. 😳Thanks a lot for liking it.😳

Originally posted by: anjyy

Superb update..

Loved it..
Continue soon..

Thanks dearie. Glad you liked it. Updating soon.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat4u



Somebody save me now LOL. 😆 Arrey I can write only one update in one day! I do write every day but sometimes plans go haywire and I am unable to complete. LOL. Koi na koi FF ke lie wait karna hi padega. 😳😭


switu kitna darati he sbko😆
charu she is spaming to becme goldie dnt wry

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