Originally posted by: Kiaraah
Awesome Charu !!!!! I have no other words to describe your work. You are simply superb sweetheart! Hats off to your writing! 👏 Your talent knew no bounds... Amazing !!!!! OMG!!! Gulping down a bit and thinking how to find words to reply to such an awesome comment and long one too.😃🤗 Muah, loads of love and thanks for flattering me. I do love that you know? 😃
You started the story on a sweet note with ragna married. For Kalpi , Raghav Singhania was first her crush who became her boss and then at last her husband. Raghav was happy that finally his wife has accepted him as hers truly, shedding all her inhibitions. It was lovely to see them reliving their journey from being a boss and an employee to partners in life. Thanks, glad you liked it. 😃
Though they knew there was something between them , both were hesitant to name it due to various reasons. Raghav was not sure it was love though Sammy was very vocal about it and Kalpi didn't even think about it owing to the social and financial differences between them. It had taken Gauri, Raghav's mom to finally go with a proposal to Kalpi's house. Gauri was aware of the love they had between them , though both were not. Yes Sammy and Gauri read their hearts properly before them and took things in their hands. 😳
Loved the way Raghav came to Kalpi's rescue at the party and the way he handled her. It was a life changing moment in their lives with Piyush being a mere catalyst... The moments between them when he tended to her wounds was awesomely romantic ...😳 which made me blush no end. Wow Charu! I never knew cactus wounds can be a boon...Right, Peeyush was only a catalyst. Someone who left them with no option but to be with each other in those moments. That brought out some of their inner feelings, and broke the ice.LOL, blush, sometimes I really don't believe if I have written such scenes!☺️
In the course of the evening, Kalpi was able to see Raghav as a gentleman and a gracious host who made sure that she had dinner . Though he had a glimpse of her long sexy legs when she was inspecting her wounds, he controlled himself in front of her. But when they fell on the couch, the proximity of their faces, mingled with her breathing, and the effect of her body on him was driving him insane and he lost all control. ya, that was too much of a test of poor guy's self-control! 😆 Even though he did try to be a perfect gentleman.😳
Loved the passionate moments they had between them. It was just out of this world. Each kiss, the touch giving me goosebumps. ...Gosh, you made me blush again 😳 It had taken him all his might to stop before he got carried away and do something which he knew she will regret since she's an orthodox girl. He was neither sure of her feelings nor his , though he could see the same desire pooling in her eyes as his. Agree completely. 😃
Loved the way she blushed when he asked her not to call him Sir outside the office since things have definitely changed between them. He was smiling widely on his drive back home after he dropped her.
She was happy too though she didn't have an inkling of what future had in store for them. She thought he was the sky and she earth or the bird who keeps flying towards the sky but not quite reach it. Lovely !!!! Thanks for loving these scenes. Somehow I too love it.😃
I was hoping to keep my comments short and not bore you to death but got carried away as usual . Well, your fabulous writing is to be blamed. ... 😆 Love you dear 🤗
Oh no, I do love long comments. I love reading them and make me happy. They can never bore me, especially coming from you.my only concern is whether I'd be able to give a fitting reply and do justice to that reply. Love you too dearie. Thanks once again for making my day and making me feel special, appreciated.😃🤗❤️
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