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charvi3

@charvi3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Awesome story marieee...loved it😛

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Marie I praise you for your originality and creativity! hats off

first of all I love the name junaid😛😉 , love how instantly both clicked at their first meeting 😉 was wondering how come a man helped rags😆 well not anymore😛 So kalpi already heard of the RS and now she's having a change of opinion😉😉 thanks to you😉 So you explained already why kalpi disguised herself as a man👏

😆 Raghav himself cannot believe that this is really him interacting with a complete stranger and so to comfortably😆 hmmm love this and now hearing that humming sound now he is gonna question juniad/kalpi 😆 cant wait to see what you have up your sleeve😆 I know I am gonna love it😉😉 Awesome work marie

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Your OS is short but sweet and very entertaining ! Love at first sight or after several 'sights' [ mean after several years of knowing ] should be a true divine love ! Wonder how many are fortunate to get such love in reality ? ? ? Most of us are in love with love not the person [ either a male or female ] Sorry to be unromantic but that is reality ! The Os is beautifully written. At least there are no negative characters !