16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 88

Awesome update...I love dis Marie style of writing plus small tips or statement u write in red...thanks a lot for it...bechara rags kitne punches khaye, do char punches khate he bata deta ki roshish ki tickets cancel ho gaye...par nahi!!! Marie ka style hai yeh!!..it rocks 😉

Originally posted by: maarushkaa

Oh lol sunyy ...I'm pretty assured by now that I'd atleast have one reader who'd loyally be following shots😃

Yep u betcha 🤗

Originally posted by: maarushkaa

Di Di Didi ...How do you guage shots so perfectly ! You always get the gist of it😃

Hmm..so u r liking this deep feeling wala Raghav ,then you should definitely read this one till the end. He was a moron initially ...but by the time this SS reaches its climax , he's gonna be an absolute sweetheart. You'll love him ...oopss ... i think u already do , dont u ??😛😆

You having questions ...lol ...as expected meri inquisitve Di😆😉

Will answer em slowly & steadily😃😊

Hahaha at least we know I'm on the right path :) Marie told you before you're one hell of a writer n of course I'm gonna read this till the end!! Man I just luv the way u write!! Your characters expressions r so vivid that's y I am able to get all those feelings u want to share! And the way u bring it!! It's like the way it shud be!! Everything just falls into place!! I guess that's why I call u an original writer ;) lol of course I luv rags ;) hahaha when u use the word 'think' makes me feel that u r not sure hahaha teasing :))
Now, I luv the way u allowed rags to just hold her n him dodging those cuffs was too funny!! Allowing Kalpi to let out her feelings of rage especially with rags (as if there is another person to let it out on lol) perfect!!! Give the impression that he is a good listener ;) so who else will she tell her story too;) none other than rags:) all that pain of having her bro alone n being in a state where one has no other to be there for her n vise versa, going through so much at a young age!! Boy, this girl have passed through a lot in her life!!
I'm so excited for next chappy!! Waiting for the moment where she can spill all her feelings only for rags ;) and man he is gonna be there for her wooohooo I'm dancing I can't wait!! Thank you miss original ;)

Awesome update

great update...

Originally posted by: MagicalMadness

Omg explosion or what 😉 Rags in his ego and revenge has created a big mess. Poor Kalpi is dealing with loads of shit. But our Rags let her vent and now will be the hero after being the mean zero. He is fixing what he broke and now will fix Kalpi's pain as well. Loving these shots mwah. Waiting for next update 😛 🤗

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

One More Mariee!!

Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries

Di...This update was quite a surprise for me as it was much earlier than usual. Thanks for that.

Coming to the shot...it was fabulously written. On mention of rrvsmi I went into that time zone so thanks for it...moon light and sea in bg...an update in mariee's style I must say. Loved it thoroughly...hope that the secret of Kashmir will soon unfurl. Thanks for this update again. Love you Di...Tenthie.

Originally posted by: chitra8710

Awesome update loved it.

Originally posted by: sampa79

Wow, awesome update