16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 89

Originally posted by: meenukansal

Awesome update plz next part soon

Originally posted by: premap

Fab update. Good that Rags has turned into a 'punching bag' for Kalpi.

Originally posted by: anurose

Awesome update...I love dis Marie style of writing plus small tips or statement u write in red...thanks a lot for it...bechara rags kitne punches khaye, do char punches khate he bata deta ki roshish ki tickets cancel ho gaye...par nahi!!! Marie ka style hai yeh!!..it rocks 😉

Finally ragna fights over n New beginning of ragna romance...

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Beautiful update

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Hahaha at least we know I'm on the right path :) Marie told you before you're one hell of a writer n of course I'm gonna read this till the end!! Man I just luv the way u write!! Your characters expressions r so vivid that's y I am able to get all those feelings u want to share! And the way u bring it!! It's like the way it shud be!! Everything just falls into place!! I guess that's why I call u an original writer ;) lol of course I luv rags ;) hahaha when u use the word 'think' makes me feel that u r not sure hahaha teasing :))
Now, I luv the way u allowed rags to just hold her n him dodging those cuffs was too funny!! Allowing Kalpi to let out her feelings of rage especially with rags (as if there is another person to let it out on lol) perfect!!! Give the impression that he is a good listener ;) so who else will she tell her story too;) none other than rags:) all that pain of having her bro alone n being in a state where one has no other to be there for her n vise versa, going through so much at a young age!! Boy, this girl have passed through a lot in her life!!
I'm so excited for next chappy!! Waiting for the moment where she can spill all her feelings only for rags ;) and man he is gonna be there for her wooohooo I'm dancing I can't wait!! Thank you miss original ;)

Originally posted by: mallika90

Awesome update

Finaly raghav realisd n wanna make kalpana life perfct

Lvdd itt

Thnx 4r pm

Continue sooon

Originally posted by: lolor

great update...

raghav made kalpi to take out all frustration ...hes changing...😊

now rags all set to remove kalpis pain...that will be amzing...how will he do it???

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Ahem ahem... Waiting for my comment...

#JustAsking ... Just say... Sejal Ji I await for your wonderful comment.. 😆