16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#701

Loved the update Maru. Mystery and silence. Wonder what Raghav has planned this time.

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Jaz

@Jaz_

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#702

Mariee!!! No, such a short update! And the point where you stopped it 🤔. Not fair! Longer one next time and soon! 😃

So Kalpi is discovering these foreign feelings surfacing and all credit to Mr. Singhania. The man she hated is turning to the man that makes her smile internally and reflected externally, which is the best of its kind. The eerie silence is a killer. What does Raghav have up his sleeve? The bull is going to attack for sure! Does his next move have any connection to the good news from Prem and Roshish? Such a predicament you have left us in. Solve the puzzle and fast!!

P.S. Thanks for the poet's name. Will check her out.

Edited by Jaz_ - 10 years ago

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Saumya

@SamBricka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#703

nice update Maru.. But chotu update maru... Waiting for nxt chappy.. Plz update soon...

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riaka

@riaka

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#704

Awesome update dear. Congratulations for the century

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#705

Awesome update

Its really perfect

Kalpi is herself today smiling than the girl lost in responsibility

She is smiling due t rag

Hmm she get her brother text n happy n prem of a good news

She slept till late n found it weird rag silent

She thought she is happy of the silence but it weird for her

Update soon

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#706

I'm so glad that Kalpi smile and laugh wholeheartedly without any care in the world
For a few minutes she was tension free
Kalpi brother and Prem texting her was awesome
Finally her brother is not mad at Kalpi anymore
Hmm... There is the mighty Raghav Singhania???
I'm actually feeling scared for Kalpi
What is RS up to???
Wonderful update Marie 😊 I love it

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abxetz

@abxetz

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#707

Nice update mariee kutty 😊

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Divya Paul

@DIGVIPAUL

Navigator

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Posted: 10 years ago

#708

Read all the parts in one go... Honestly, it is an awesome story... The character of Kdalpana is always my loved one, but the way u portray her here, is fab.. My most loved person is her.. U know, i find it natural about every person's reaction in here, for each situation.. Sometimes, we are so into ourself, that we decide to neglect that what will be the reaction to our actions.

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#709

With a short update, you have left us in suspense. Why is the house in silence, without Rags 'irritating' music ? What news is Prem talking about and finally What caused Roshish's excitement ??? After reading my mind is full of Y Y Y ?????