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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee



I wanted to give u a reply fursat se & not a hasty one isliye kept the replies on hold ...

Ohhh that comment ...that delighted me ! Throughout the update...when I was writing it I had thoughts like -Will this seem too kiddish ? Will this be weird ? Will this look real ? Can ppl actually behave in this manner ...& blah blah blah !!!!!
Ur comment was a great big relief ... If u could connect with all of it & so also enjoy the entire update ...then the update was not as bad I felt it was😆😆
All ur questions wud be answered in the next shot...when will it be ..I personally don't know😕
Ty for the comment again😉



U know me and mischief love to be naughty 😉 and how could I not Connect to such a mischievous update. And waiting for tenth shot eagerly but u want to make Me wait 😭 but I will let it go but make sure realization of rags us fast and not slow 😉 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

First things first ... I had forgotten to mention the name of the poet of the shadows wali line in the previous update. Her name is Erin Hanson (e.h.) & she would make u fall for her poems...even if u don't want to. You'll should definitely check out her works on google & instagram.


10th Shot - Silences before the Storm

With the diary yet pressed close to her chest , Kalpana gushed to her temporary room & shut the door close. Her chest was shuddering up & down coz of the mighty run & so also her continuous laughter. A few seconds later she opened the door slightly & peeked through the gap to check if Raghav had followed her. She knew he hadn't when she saw the passage leading to her room empty.

"Hmm ... he probably must have given up !" the mini kalpi in her head exclaimed as she twirled around cherishing her victory. Somewhat immitating that action , Kalpana too turned around. That's when she comes face to face with someone ... Someone she recognized , but yet didn't ...it was her own reflection in the mirror.

It was smiling ,the ear to ear smile which she hardly allowed her face to display. It looked happy as if it were never this happy before. It looked free & chirpy completely out of her sphere of responsibilities & restrictions. She couldn't help but notice the slight bounce she had in her walk as she advanced towards the mirror. There was somethin unusual in her face...something pleasantly different. Who would say that she was tired ? Tired after another miserable day at work coz of prem's client...

She paused.

...the same client who was making her life terrible than the terriblestestestest. Her encounters with the wicked man suddenly whooshed by as she saw the smile on her reflection's face slowly wither away.

She hated him ...yes she did !!

Silently placing her diary on the table in front she headed to bed. A weird feeling of joy & warmth from a minute lil corner of her heart kept pricking her the entire night , but she somehow managed to sleep ... Wishing for her life to be as perfect as before.

Buzzz..buzzz..buzzz...buzzz.

The noise disturbed Kalpana's sleep , but for a change that didn't irritate her. Yet snuggling in her bed she reached out to grab her cellphone from her handbag. Fiddling with the zippers of the bag & then through the locks of her phone she finally reached her inbox which flashed the presence of 2 messages. One was Prem's & the other belonged to Rohish ... quickly sitting upstraight she stared at her brother's name. It was almost a week later that she was hearing from him ...unlike always when she would assure his safety by calling his best buddy with whom he was staying. She had thought of giving him some time to realize that his sister's decision was correct & for his own good. Her fingers impatiently fetched the 'read message' button

"I love u Di ... I love u Di ...I love u Di ! U r the best sister in the world ..." her eyes beamed with joy. Those words were like music for her , especially after the day she had slapped him ...for the 1st time in her life. But she was also confused as to how had Rohish's mind changed this suddenly.

"I'm coming home tonight. I want some yummy parathas straight from my sister's kitchen... I'm hungry already !! ;) " she smiled contentedly.

Then opening the message sent by Prem ...

"Kalpi ...kalpi ...kalpi...where are you ? Have been calling you since morning. I've a good news to give...wait wait wait ... Not so easily. I want u to see the good news with ur own eyes. Be ready. Shall pick u up by 2. Byeee"

What could the good news be , she wondered. But then she was also happy as Prem seemed happy. Finally things were falling into place !! Just the way they should be ... Everything under her control !

These would have been the 1st ever positive words that she heard ever since Raghav Singhaniya was in her life. That name reminded her of his early morning rock music as she turned to check what time it was.

The wall clock displayed a generous 12.

What ? How did she sleep this long ? Err...a major correction. How did she sleep this long in that Singhaniya person's noise pollution ? Or was it that he hadnt played the music at all ... No no no ...why would he do so ? With similar questions revolving around her head she walked outside her room.

Everything was creepily quite. If not for the amplified ticking of the clock , Kalpana would have easily believed that the time had stopped. Her eyes automatically tracing its path to the room at the other end of the house. The door was shut & probably locked as well.

Wasn't that another great news ? Not bearing Raghav Singhaniya's early morning list of tantrums ... What else would she want in life ? No RS & her ppl being happy ...it was the best day ever !

But yet ..

She didn't know what it was... for some reason she felt weird. All that silence felt weird ... were they the silences before the storm ?

MARUSHKAA🤗

& her Quote time


After every storm , the sun will smile ...

William. R Alger


Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
You write with your heart creating a story which breathes and lives leaving an everlasting imprint on the readers senses . More power to you !!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maru again such a small update. Next update should come faster and enjoyed while reading this one. I am really worried for my Kalpi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice but very chhotu update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sshhh...
Dhishum Dhishum

Silence before Storm... 😆

Update par comment karu?

Ruk last 3 updates padh kar aaati... wait kar..

All 3 chapters were awesome. .. still keeping me on my toes.. aakhir aage hoga toh kya hoga...
Woh Gaddha.. I mean Raghav is hell bend to prove to sammy he has no feeling. . I can sense storm.. but u... tu stopped at galat time...🥱 now I will read after u update 5 more updates...
Edited by shahsb_26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally the tenth shot !!!! 😃 so kalpi is smiling from ear to ear a sight that hasn't been visible to her in a long time 😳 so rohish wants to come back and prem is happy but waiting to see what silent rags next move is to bother kalpi. But yaar what is this such a small update and no rags . But rags quietness means something big . I m waiting to see what will be the impact and whether kalpis past will finally come out 😃

Pa: congrats for century 😆 😳
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update dear...finally kalpi had a peaceful sleep... nice...
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Posted: 10 years ago
1st-ly Congrats for the Century marriiieee 😆 (that is how u call my name 😉)
And now i understand what that smile of Raghav meant 😃 after reading about kalpi's smile 😳

uff this is the disadvantage of reading to many romantic stories Every smile and look seams like Love or attraction 😛 wonder if i'm thing same in real 😕

love this update as it made clear what actually is going between these two They are actually living or say behaving as their own self in each other presence after year or should i say they are rediscovering themselves after loosing their own self with all responsibilities and mask they put on for this world is now humm
am i correct atleast now 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
congo for the century marush!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Poor soul is so happy with her temporary freedom.She has a long way to go and need to refer
many encyclopedia to understand the deadly handsome confused soul called Raghav Singhania.
He has already setup a grand stage for the high voltage drama which will be slowly unfolded to her in due course of time.
Waiting for the great news and the reason for the Mr.India Singhania.

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