Ragna SS-Mukammal Mohabbat Ki Adhoori Daastan [Ch-4-Pg 25] 4/10 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Annies

Hi jiya

Thk you for pm's ,,, let's see what intriguing plot you have this time👍🏼

Hello and no need to say thanks

Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments and feedbacks

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">lovely update</font>😃

Thanks

Beautiful updates Jiya! Sorry I'm extremely late this time. Kalpi is the pampered child. You paired up Sahil - Kamala and Vithal - Neetu. ...lol.

Originally posted by: ariarai

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#ff0099">Beautiful update Jiya😃😃</font>

Thanks aria

Originally posted by: Kiaraah

Beautiful updates Jiya! Sorry I'm extremely late this time. Kalpi is the pampered child. You paired up Sahil - Kamala and Vithal - Neetu. ...lol.

Loving ragna knok -jhok. Like us Sammy and Pakhi seems to be enjoying too... I hope Pakhi is a positive character here. From your banner it looks like you are initially going to pair up Raghav with Pakhi and Sammy with Kalpi. Is it so?

Thanks and no need to say sorry And yes kalpi is a pamperd child And yes is a positive Character in these story And I will pair raghav and pakhi for short time but I will never pair sammy and kalpi

Lik d concept n interesting prologue

Originally posted by: rani214

Lik d concept n interesting prologue

Lik Swapping of all characters...Sahil-kamla n vitthal-neetu 😆

Both parts were awesome

Loved ragna cute nokjhok

Cant see Pakhi n raghav together in centre in banner...Hope to not see ra...khi together even for sumtim in ur update...

Cont soon😃

Thanks rani Glad that you like the updates and yes I will pair raghav and pakhi but just for sometime and after that it will ragna only and will continue soon

Chapter-3 @Home kalpi and pakhi both come back home and kalpi is very angry so she directly goes to her room and locks her room whereas kamla ask to pakhi that what happen and pakhi tells her everything then kamla goes to talk to kalpi but she doesnt open the door so kamla calls sahil and ask him to come fast @After 30 mins. After 30 Mins sahil comes back home and see kamla is walking here and there and is in tension so he ask her what is the matter and kamla tells him everything then he goes near kalpi room and see that pakhi is their and she is banging the door and asking kalpi to open the door and she isnt opening then sahil bang the door and tells her to open and these time kalpi opens the door then sahil goes inside and finds that the room is all messed up then he orders the servants to clean the room whereas he takes kalpi to a park @Park In park both of them sits on a bench and talk for almost one or two hour as kalpi is very close to her dad and always share her every happines and problems with her dad and then both eat ice-cream and even feed each other which makes kalpi relax and after they both come back @Night In night In night after eating dinner raghav goes to his room and sammy to follows him and say to raghav that today you very rude to her I think you should say sorry to her then raghav firstly It is not my mistake and secondly raghav singhania doesnt say sorry to anyone and thirdly she also back answer me so it is over then sammy say but I still think you need to say sorry then left then raghav think for a while and dcides that he will say sorry whereas after pakhi and kamla insits kalpi also decides to say sorry to him @Next Morning Next morning in college both raghav and kalpi finds a way to talk to each other then finally kalpi comes and say sorry to raghav which surprise him but he too say sorry which surprise everyone as they all had never listen sorry from raghav's mouth then kalpi extends her hands towards raghav and ask him can we become friends and raghav accept it @Canteen After attending their lecture four of them comes to canteen and enjoy a lot and then pakhi and sammy goes to order something to eat and when they come they see both raghav and kalpi are argguging with each then sammy and pakhi say that they both cant change ever and goes to stop them and after stoping them they ask a reason for which they are argguging but both raghav and kalpi keep mum as they themselves also dont know for what they are fighting and then four of them eat food and left for their next lecture -------------------------Likes,Dislikes,Comments, Critcism all are welcomed-------------------------