BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16 - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shoonya9

Charu, charu, Charu..., kahani puri filmy banadi.

In last chappy itself I was going to mention u too r on the way of Vish, but didn't. Ab samajh me aaya Vish ko apni FF ke liye ideas kyun nahi mil rahe? R u sneaking on her ideas? Just joking.

Wat a contrast in two versions of same story! Original TMS is sweet halka fulkil romantic one n this one full of twists n turns, shud I say tussi versatile ho? Han zaroor ho, par kathor bhi ho kahan par update end ki?

Now we need to wait for u only know how long to know autobiography of that shot bullet which is yet to hit it's target! I hope it misses its target, please listen to my plea nd amend if u hv already made it hit.
chalo too much of kidding try jobe once again, perfect thrilling update.


Hello!!! Thank You! 😃 Ha ha, Vish is a master of twists and suspenses and I am still learning. 😃

To hear that the readers could make out some difference in two versions is a great relief because I wanted them to be different. Though as far as Ragna are concerned, fingers still crossed that tracks ahead in Original MS are not similar or same in any way with this one. Some overlapping maybe there in future. Thanks for the versatile adjective. Means a lot. Muah. 😃🤗❤️

Updating soon, so you'll know all about the biography of that bullet! 😆😃😳 Love. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ban18

Ooohhh my action hero raghav i think I'm in love 😳 with him. gir gayi mai to uske pyaar mein.🤪

Once again nice update dear!! but who got shot?? Now I don't want even pakhi and prem to get hurt.😕


Oh Rishu, Raghav is really a dream hero! 😃 Had the CVs not spoilt his character, he was the dream man! Love to see him this way. Glad to know you fell in love with him in my FF update. 😃

Let's see who got hurt! 😃😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ariarai

First let me do this 👏👏 second let Me apologize,Wonderful Update Charu!! I like how Possessive and Caring Raghav was to Kalpi,Seeing the love of his life in that Trouble,The dude would kill sahil!😆Poor kalpi in tears,Thank god Raghav is there for her😳,Also the scene where Kalpi slaped that Goon,Also Raghav too awesome!!👏 No one could mess with Raghav Singhaina's Wife!!

I felt so so so sad For Prem and Paakhi there father is a awful man yet both love him so much,It was Painful seeing them so sad,My poor Chocopie😭
And Sahil slapping Paakhi!! Loved how Pakhiya came and held his hands saying she is his wife,Nice scene😉
Loved the sister duo Bonding and how Paakhi decided to do the right thing,that was another awesome scene loved both Flashbacks!! also loved how Prem realised to do the right thing as well love my chocopie😳 sahil was so cool and calm thinking that our strong Raghav singhaina won't put him in Jail😆
And the shocking scene Sahil escaped!! arghhh someone kill him how dare he says Raghav will live a love less life.
Hope everything goes alright and Kalpi is safe otherwise Raghav won't spare sahil!!
The most loved thing i like is the Prem and Paakhi are so nice awww 😳 hope prem and paakhi are safe as well I'll die if my chocopie is hurt😭😆
Awesome update charu👏👏,sorry for taking so long to comment,its a busy week and stuff!! as usual love your writing,Always inspires me to write!! continue soon😃


Wow!!!! 😲 this was for your comment! 😃 Oh i so wanted Raghav to punish Sahil & kill him, LOL. But readers may not like it. 😳Thanks for loving Pakhya-Pakhi and Pakhi-Kalpi scenes,and flashbacks.

ha ha, chocopie, Prem was an adorable character, and would have looked fantastic both in negative and positive shades. 😃 Love his character a lot.it is okay, I understand. Thanks for commenting dear. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Aww ...Charu! What a power packed update! Too good! This isn't any less than an action movie's thrilling climax. Awesome sweetheart!

Can sense Raghav's urgency to see that his life, Kalpi is safe. Loved the way you have woven the story around, leaving no stones unturned. Everything was justified, even Prem and Pakhi. I loved the way you have shown Prem's character , his transition. Though I can't say the same about Pakhi. Sorry, but just hate her too much. Liked that she realised her mistakes.

Sahil Kapoor is too evil. He will not stop at anything to take revenge on Raghav. He wants to kill Kalpi! OMG! I'm sure you wouldn't hurt her as you are as much ragnaholic as me !!!!! But don't leave us hanging like this! Please update soon.

Love you darling 🤗


Hey Kiara, 😃🤗 Firstly how is your son now? Hope better. Secondly thanks a ton for liking this update and for being a darling. 😃 Loved your comment a lot. 😃 That's a relief to hear that everything seems justified and logically woven. 😃😳 I understand for Pakhi's character, as most of the readers hate her. 😆

Ha ha, you'll know if Kalpi gets hurt or not in next update. Updating today as may have to go out of station tomorrow. This will be the last part before epilogue. Fingers crossed if you all will like it or not!

Love you too darling. 😃🤗❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchal57

Hiii hwz u..??
I loved this update,it was mind blowing...
Thrill, suspense, love, care, trust, madness, guilt ...
All in 1 package...I loved it muuaahhh
Sryy I couldn't give u proper feedback,actually I m tooo tired now...byeee tc


Hi Aanchal. 😃 🤗 I am fine and better now after seeing you. How are you and how were the exams dear?? Missed you so-so much. 😭 🤗❤️ Muah.

Thanks for loving the update. 😃it is fine, take rest. Bye and thanks. you take also. Muah. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Resss😃
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Whoa!! Awesum update charu.. I loved it!!
So sahil is the one who got shot.. thankgod.. I was thinkng it might be either kalpi or pakhi or prem.. 😆 at last the revenge has cumplted.. 😃
And then ragna.. khulam khulla romance.. 😉 😳 their romance has no end at all 😆 😛 and then next her delivery scene n all.. u wrote veryy well I mean the support which raghav gave and their happiness n all.. superrbbb dear.. the dialogues u choose were good, dat itself depicts the love dey have fr each other.. very well written dear.. 👏 👏 marriage story ka ek version toh almost came to an end.. im waiting fr its real version nw and yess! Fr d epilogue too.. 😃 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome n emotional update too good really love
Epilogue soon plzplz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Soo lovely story...😃

tq 4 giving me a good story...👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update dida... I to luv it... Merry christmas nd happy nw year dida nd Happy jurny dida njoy... Muaaahhh nd i'll be waitng for epi nf orignl part... Cum back soon nd update...

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