Tera Mera Saath Rahe-RAGNA Love story...note on pg 53 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter-14

(I tried my best to write a romantic chapter but i guess i failed neverthe less wanted to continue the story as planned by me to a twist and some revelations hence a small chapter😕😕)
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Raghav gathers her and takes her to the bed and gently drops her...the light is dim ,the fragrance is lavender, then it's drizzling outside...He looks at her drinking her beauty through his eyes.He kisses her forehead, then her cheeks and She is closed her eyes...

R:Look at me baby...i want you to enjoy this beautiful moment ...please

She slowly opens her eyes and sees a pair of love filled eyes looking at her with all the longings. She smiles and again closes her eyes...she reaches his lips and kisses him. He takes this as an acceptance from her side and they continue further in a sensual, slow and satisfying love making. On one hand she was showering all her love and on the other hand he was accepting as if a drought stricken field embraces first showers of monsoon rain...it was true for them, he has been deprived of true love since years to come...grown alone without parents and Kalpi grown up away from parents...he was realizing and relishing true love of her and she was enjoying every bit. They both were trying to match up with each other's desire and were conquering all barriers and moved in to a sphere of intimate love, realizing the need for each other...realizing that they are inseparable by any means ... Realizing the purity of their love for each other... Realizing depth of their effort to satisfy each other. He not only touched her body but also touched her soul and heart by all his caring. Being a shy person she tried her best to overcome her shyness and make him hers...he has been controlling his desire all these year only concentrating on his business and revenge plan found these moments spent with each other very satisfying. Life seemed blissful for both of them in each other's embrace, embracing a new positive beginning, embracing a new way of life, embracing each other's unfathomable love for each other...Towards early in the morning ...the rain is now stopped...the pleasant smell of Lavender now fading but now mixed with her intoxicating scent...they clad with each other in a cozy aftermath... he finally decides to speak

R: I love,this day is very special to us...is not it...are you happy.

All she could gather to do is to nod and bury her face in his chest. He hugs her tight and slowly says

R: Hey...it's now apparently morning we need to go,I have called the driver he will drop both of us. Come lets get ready.

He got up and bent down to pick her up his arms smiling and proceeded to washroom to take a shower together...post shower clad in bath robes...he picked her up again in his arms and dropped her on the bed and bent to kiss her again...to her it's like a dream...she was sailing in his love oblivious of the fact what lies ahead for them on their way back.

He kissed her and then got her dress and gave to her and continued dressing up himself, he was about to call his driver, when he saw a message from Sammy stating they also need to go back to city along with him and considering safety suggested all of them to travel together. He calls Sammy

R:Hi Sammy, good morning...we are ready, so should I bring the car out?

S:Hey dude just chill...considering the fact that Maya has been sleeping all night she will drive and we understand your situation...

R: Sammy

S:Ok do not shout...i am just coming outside...lets go else it will be late for Kalpi to reach home.

After few minutes they all start for Mumbai,Maya driving and Sammy in the front sheet and Raghav and Kalpana in the back sheet.Both hold the hands and Kalpi leaned towards Raghav ,he wrapped his hand protectively around her and both were sleeping.

S:Maya..just see them...both are so cute.

M:Ya...god bless them...touch wood they are perfect for each other...oh...woa...what's this,the car brakes are not working...Sammy...what to do

S:Maya do not panic just slow the speed..

M:It's a hilly area ...I cannot reduce speed...rags please help

Raghav gets up hearing Maya's voice.

R:Do not panic just move towards that corner of the mountain it seems to be a flat area with some big trees...

M:I Cant...Sammy please hold the steering wheel ...lets try together...please...ah ah...who...

K: I canot see the tree, we crossed the flat area and the speed is now slow as now the road is flattish...lets all jump out of the car, as I can smell some burning smell.

M,R.S:Ok 1,2,3...lets jump...

All four jumped out of the car with a near miss from the truck to collide with raghav as kalpi quickly dragged him to the side...all were safe...but have some scratches and torn clothes...Raghav sees torn part of Kalpi's dress and wraps her with his coat. Sammy calls the driver for another car...but all were discussing how come the breaks got out of order...as yesterday everything was fine...soon they saw a car approaching towards them...

to be continued...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I will creat the index tonight and publish.I also learnt how to pm people so will do that too...thanks for going through my FF
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Posted: 10 years ago
suprb update dear... Nd dear ragna romance was cute... I luv it.. Omg car breaks fail.. I thnk its prem.. Yes he only did thi.. 😡 plzz update nxt chappy soon waitng...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg who messed with the brakes of the car? Was it the kapoors? So what now will rags tell about his marriage to kalpi? Please update soon. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
plzzz update.. Plzzz update.. Plzzz update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
plez cntinue ur amazing update...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update ragna romance 😳 so someone s behind this you stopped at the right moment pls continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry ,I did not read your story earlier . My fault for thinking that it is in Hindi [mislead by title ] and avoided it. But ,my lucky stars shone and by accident ,opened this page 1 Amazing ! In English ! Real treat for us , non-Hindi readers! You have skilfully created a lovely story by deviating from the main serial, which was .foolish in most of the episodes! Adding an insult to the already 'injured ' viewers they came out face transplant , done n cured within a week! IT WAS DISGUSTING ! Thank God , you have written a more 'digestable' story , with a 'splash' of humour ! You are a gifted writer. Thanks for giving us this story . Hope you will not leave an unfinished story ,like a few!
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Posted: 10 years ago
This story will HV some twists and more of ragna...I plan to have 30chapters ... 😛 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PMOHANTI1774

This story will HV some twists and more of ragna...I plan to have 30chapters ... 😛 😛



Bring it onnn... But ragna always together right ???? 😉

Thanks alot for this beautiful FF dear 👏


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