!Reserved
Yaar ..i take my words back ..tu nahi hai aalsi ...itna lamba update ...omgzzz !!😉😉
par at the moment i am feeling lazy to type in a comment. Shll unres this place soon 😃😃
Unreserved !!
Firstly ...rishu ...that was such a looonnnggg update. No wonder u took so long to update. But lemme compliment u for 1 thing ...even though the length was to much , there was not even a single instance in the story where i felt i was getting bored or thought of skipping a particular part.
Kudos for that ...really !! Kyunki ..bhale i called u aalsi ..but me as a person am the most aalsiest 1 while reading. but girly ...ur os forced mr to read every single line ...ulta i was reading every para twice ..thinking kahi kuch choot na jaaye in the eagerness of knowing what wud happen next !! 👏👏
Now ...speaking abt the os ..it was lovely !! 😳😳
Then may it be the story or the characters portrayed in it.
& to all of it ..ur hilarious 1 liner dialogues or sentences proved to be the cherry on the cake !!
I literally had my eyes wide when i read
She couldn't take another second of it. "So, who are you?" she asked straight forward.
"I am your husband." He replied very calmly.
Uske baad ke kalpana ke what se zyaada bada mera what tha !! Ur Raghav indeed managed to fool us both ...ur kalpi & me !!😆😆
Everything was going fine after that ..with me wondering ...itna time ho gaya ..rishu shaant kaise ??
& then came
Days later before that happened he got the news of her engagement with his best friend Ramu who was more rich, handsome, charismatic and funny than raghav really was. He got betrayed by his girlfriend and his best friend at the same time.
& i was rofling like anything 🤣🤣🤣 That was indeed a good 1. Ramu ..more handsome than Raghav ?? Paakhi ki aankhein phoot gayi hongi ..anyways accha hi hua ...
& then was that blissful evening & that gunda fight . Well portrayed ..I loved every single scene
...ur fun posts are extreme contrasts to what u write in here. ur fun posts limit ur language skills to a particular set of words..but here ...tu saari ki saari kasar puri kar deti hai 😉😉
Uske baad were the super romantic scenes ☺️☺️
I actually liked Raghav's lines
"Kalpana, I want you badly. But if you say I'll try to pull the brakes. But you have to tell me to go away, and leave you alone. If you don't I won't be stopped again. Do you understand sweetheart."
Tells u how respectful he is. He could have easily enforced himself on her ..the fact that she was all alone in the country with he being a rich man ...who cud have dared to speak against him. But ..no ..he respected her & her opinions mattered. That truly impressed me ...
Umm...ek thing i can tell u ...tujhe kapde phaadna accha lagta hai na?? 😆😆 I remember a similar scene in ur 4th os as well ...
& last but not the least ws the dramatic ending ...ekdum filmy style mein !! 😉😉
OK ...so my concluding words to u. When i started reading ur os i thought it wud have resemblance to the movie queen ...but no ...u proved me wrong. The entire story was ORIGINAL !!
Come up with ur next os soon ..plzzz !! Or else i wud have to threaten u with a chatak chatak 😆😆
MARUSHKAA
Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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