ragna love stories(single part)(os), note, page 62, 12/03 - Page 33

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Ban...!!
I have JUST read first 3 stories so far..!! I am completely awe struck..!! All of them sooo beautiful and cute..!! <3 Will surely read rest two soon..!!! But... 3rd One is soo far just hovering in my mind..!! and in order to enjoy I need to let it's effect reduce a bit... Lol.. <3

Originally posted by: ssna

Wow dear u r fab writer 😳

d funny part was kamla was raG servant n pakhi married ramu oo god I laughed so much. 😆

Yes i included them to bring some fun 😛

wat a love making so pure so tempting . Awww! You know I think twice before adding love making scenes in any of my story. I don't want them to be overly wet nor too dry.

I loved d way u started d story of d heartbroken kalpi but ended with hearfull of kalpi.

d way u introduced our hero was awesome d way u said der looks der thoughts were just mind blowing. I feel, I've written a short essay on raghav's look and why not after all I'm his big fan.😃

D way our hero fight for his heroine was fab n d little tigress strokr a bear bottle on dat bad guys was awesome.

Oogod lip bite dat famous lip bite u hav even wroye dat. Ooohhh i love his lip bite 😉

car beark down tipical hindi movie but I loved it. Yeah it was quite filmy. Totally filmy indeed! 😃

der first kiss u wrote it so beautifully. Thnk u!

dis story can turn 2 a short movie .omg! Really?

how u write dear such a fab stories every time . I tell you it's not easy for a fun post writer like me😆

I have read your other os also but every time I used 2 say I love it .u r a fab writer .do update soon.

n used 2 think dat on next update I will write a big comment but today I thought I will give a small comment but all d way it turn 2 big. And you have no idea how lovely is this comment of yours. Muaaahh. Thank u so much dear!

Eager ly waiting for your next os

update soon n plz do pm me. I'll but next story will not be coming before feb,15. Jan going to be a busy month for me.

Originally posted by: snacky

wonders..wonder..wonders... thats awesome... fantastic... brilliant... lovely

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome u describes my country so lovely wow

U awesome writer love the story n ragna I die for

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Rishu. ... is that really you? ????? OMG, what a story yaar! It was such a sweet , romantic and fantabulous love story. Ekdum fairy tale wali. ... I loved it...loved it.. loved it. ... ...Simply awesome !!!!!! yes. a laughing gas can also be a little romantic 😆

Kalpi's description of him was enough to make me go weak in the knees... He looks dashing!!! Loved his comment about 'what happens in Vegas ' . You made Kammo his maid. ...lol. finally kammo ko mere fun hi nhi romantic post me space mila. aaj kammo memsaab bn gayi 😆

Add to his good looks , lip bite ...hmm... sexy! ufff! his lip bite looks so delicious.

I was ready to be upset to know that his former gf was Pakhi but the next sentence had me in splits... Ramu married her...lol. Ramu is charismatic and funny than Raghav. ... 🤣 Oh Rishu, you got me there. ...🤣

i was actually confused, i should include her name or not. then ramu came to clear the confusion and said, "not to worry rishu, I'm there to handle pakhi" 😆

I loved the line ' positive effect out of the negative effect of whisky'! me too!!😃

I was blown away by the romance. I think this is romance at its best Rishu! Loved the dance in the restaurant, followed by him carrying her in his arms all the way to the bar to fighting the goons for her. Who wouldn't want such a guy in your life! Not to mention the passionate love making, oh my ! 😳 me first in the line.😳 it was total filmy right? 😃 and passionate love😳 i feel I'm getting bold and naughty with each update😆

The scene at the airport reminded me of the climax of those Hollywood romcom s I'm mad about! Really loved it! Finally a happy ending to a lovely story. I really loved the last line! She's thankful to Prem for ditching her, her mom for making her go to Mauritius instead of Goa and the most important, the drink for acting as a catalyst in the love story. ... Lovely! I'm a big fan of hollywood romance😊 i even don't remember how many times I've watched; the notebook, leap year, letters to juliet, pride and prejudice and many more.😃

Hats off to you Rishu! I stand by what I said earlier. You should write more romantic ones! You are fabulous! 👏 awww!! thank u for motivating me always.

Love you my dearest buddy 🤗 love you too my sweetheart! ❤️