Ragna SS'KNOWN STRANGERS' Part 17~ 138 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: DimpleAggarwal

u started in ths storyy too😆 - Raghav is "Time is money son"
Nothing wrong in Mayas anger..She loves her friend n so thats y she is angry on Raghav.
But Sammy??cant he understand ab8 his friend,Raghav feelings fr kalpi..
Flashback is too good...I love bubbly Kalpi but present Kalpi is xerox of flashback Raghav.
nice update🤗... I feel u r not missing anything...enjoyed d 1st update


😆 Kya karu sbko aati naee meri jaati naee😉🤣
Ahh this is too bad.. anyways thank u dimple..😊 n u r late here b😕
Glad u lyk maya but there is lot more.. n sammy well he is... i dont know😆
Yes I want to hear this n u said it... Present kalpi is actually a xerox of flashback Raghav🤗 thank u agian for this girl it means somewhere u connect with it.. m glad truely u enjoyed it..
Keep reading.. n keep giving ur beautiful comments😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

no no dear..i did not mean that..no need to add my name..

it was just i was guessing this track..nd i m glad that u like my guess..

Na na I too didn't mean dat.. chill ritu.. 🤗 n yes I again need ur help for my dis ss banner.. will pm u wen it will done😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: sugandhii

Na na I too didn't mean dat.. chill ritu.. 🤗 n yes I again need ur help for my dis ss banner.. will pm u wen it will done😊

Always ready to help..nd will love to help u..do pm me anytime.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Hello readers thank u so much for ur support.. look m still in a confused state regarding dis ss... n plzz do comment.. only then m going to give u d nxt part as m still working on it so plss i want u tell me want u want in future updates.. from part 3 onwards as part 2 is almost completed n I will update it by tommorrow but before that I want to know what u want...

1. Flashbacks only: m thinking lyk from part 3 onwards m going to give u only flashbacks what happened between them... n it will of full RagNa.. their story from day 1.. but then I need atleast 9 to 10 updates to end flashbacks.. n then after 5 yrs their first meeting... bcz then only it make sense how they react to each other... Otherwise ech update looks vry confusing no??

2. Or U just want them to come face to face but yes again there will be no confrontation kind of a thing... as they look a sought off stupid without knowing what happened between them.. there is no curiosity that how they react.. what they think about each other n oll...

So r u ok with this if I started d flashback story completely... without a glimpse of present??




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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Hello Sungndhi, you r an amazing writer and i love all of your updates. just write as you think is best.and update as soon as possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
I think go with the flashback, honestly I do not want to miss out what happened in their past, I am truly enjoying this ff, so I am looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Lovely update. Raghav is a Casanova 😆 Kalpana knows it and still loves him so much 😳


Regarding your note: I would prefer that you show a mix of both, past and present. It can be like RagNa confront each other after 5 years and then recollect what happened in the past. Each moment of the present takes them in the past and when they interact with each other, they keep reminding each other as to what happened between them in the past and what has changed between them now. Like you wrote in your chapter that Kalpana does not get sleep nowadays but 5 years back, she used to have a sound sleep and Raghav used to take a lot of trouble to wake her up. It could be just like that 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: erikalui

Lovely update. Raghav is a Casanova 😆 Kalpana knows it and still loves him so much 😳


Regarding your note: I would prefer that you show a mix of both, past and present. It can be like RagNa confront each other after 5 years and then recollect what happened in the past. Each moment of the present takes them in the past and when they interact with each other, they keep reminding each other as to what happened between them in the past and what has changed between them now. Like you wrote in your chapter that Kalpana does not get sleep nowadays but 5 years back, she used to have a sound sleep and Raghav used to take a lot of trouble to wake her up. It could be just like that 😊

For d update: Thank you dear😛
N about d note: I will tell u tommorow😉 but still a big big thanx about a mix of both past n present suggestion👏😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Thank u dear😊
N sorry to I forgot that I have to pm u😭 but from nxt tym pkka👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think you should go with flashbacks as it will be in detail . We will have an idea about what happened between them. Would happily read the updates. But you know the best. You are an amazing writer so don't worry. Whatever you decide it will be the best for the story.

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