New Story: The Devils [DISCONTINUED]

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
Interesting prologue..
plz continue soon..

thanks sharanya!! 😊

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Wow.. a crime story.. its seems intrestng..

Do continue

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Hey I'm changing the name from 'Dhishkyaoon' to 'The Devils' 😛

Sorry for the inconvenience 😔 Just that sometimes my 2am decisions don't work out well 😆

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: vasishna
Wow.. a crime story.. its seems intrestng..
Do continue

Thanks dear 😊 wanted to post the next update today, but couldn't due to some problems but will try to update soon 😳

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Dnair031
Very interesting,pls update👏

Thanks dear 😃

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Thanks dear 😊 wanted to post the next update today, but couldn't due to some problems but will try to update soon 😳

Its okayyy.. take ur tym to update it..

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Erika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Dhishkyaoon was also a good name and I liked it but the new name also is good "The Devils" 😆

RagNa are the devils but for me they are still angels 😛😆

Continue soon 😳

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: erikalui
Dhishkyaoon was also a good name and I liked it but the new name also is good "The Devils" 😆
RagNa are the devils but for me they are still angels 😛😆

Continue soon 😳

Actually Dhishkyaoon focused on the gun n not it's holder😆 n I'm not sure whether Sahil Kapoor will be shot, or killed in some other way 😆 so changed it to The Devils 😉

let's see whether they are devils or angels or partly both 😉