His slave - SS - prologue page 1 - 23/09

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Welcome to world where Immortals exist!
Through the beginning of time humans and vampires were mortal enemies. In the era where this enmity was at it peak comes a beautiful love story of a mortal, Kalpana and vampire, Ragav. Will they pay the price for falling in love? Will they succeed in bringing change to their worlds?


Presenting


HIS SLAVE

A paranormal romance.


A short Ragna journey.


Credit: Sweetcherry95


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Posted: 10 years ago
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My darling readers,

Firstly I would like to thank sweetcherry for allowing me write this fan fiction. Then I would like to thank you readers for your encouragement and enthusiasm in reading the story.

My writing style is quite different, I use third person when I write. To do justice to the story I shall rewrite the beginning, but will incorporate what has been written so far by sweetcherry into this story so that it will flow with the plot I have in mind.

Please be advised that the Ragna journey I am going to create will be different as I do not know the journey that sweetcherry had planned. So sweetcherry, once you have some time, you are welcome to continue with your version of a love story between a human and a vampire.

Warning: Ragna will die in the end.




Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago
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Prologue

The island of Athena

Summer 1914

Kapoor manor house


There is excitement in the air, change has come at last. Today is a day of new beginnings. Children run around the garden playing while the adults mingle. Maya Kapoor looks beamingly at the man she just married, Samar Raizaada. Samar known to loved ones as Sammy places his arm around her waist and pulls her closer to him, whispering, "happy?" Resting her head on his shoulder as she entwined her arms around his waist, she whispers, "very." Inhaling his manly scent her fangs elongate. Sammy turns towards her in surprise and says, "hungry already?" Embarrassed by her lack of control she blushes, hiding her face in his chest as she fight to control her desires. Once her fangs retract, she pulls away from his hold and says with a grin, "only you can make a vampire of over three hundred years old behave like a teenager." Laughing she walks away to mingle with the guest both human and vampire.

Morning turns to afternoon then turns to evening, the celebrations continue in full swing, showing no signs of slowing down, let alone stopping. Maya smiles as she thinks, "and so it should. Years of enmity is finally over between the vampires and the humans." Turning towards her human husband she says, "come. I want you to meet my best friend." Sammy places his hand in hers, allowing her to lead, his gaze filled with love and trust.


Maya takes a bottle of champagne and two glasses as they head for the forest and follow a narrow trail. Surprised in the direction they are heading he follows her silently. She stops suddenly causing Sammy to bump into her. She turns and smiles apologetically, "sorry I should have warned you." Placing his arms around her waist, he pulls her towards him, kissing her neck, he whispers, "it is okay." He looks ahead and sees a wide clearing. Straightening he turns to Maya and says, "where are we?" Seeing an unmarked grave at the centre, he whispers, "Maya are we in a cemetery? Why?" Noticing the tidy grave that had flowers everywhere, Sammy realised that Maya came here often to tend to the grave.


Maya walks into the clearing and says, "because I want you to meet my best friend, my confidant and my trainer." Her eyes tearing, she continues, "because I have come to pay my respects... Because we wouldn't be together if it was not for him... For them."


Maya sits by the grave, caressing the earth on it as she stretches out her other hand towards Sammy. She says softly, "hi Ragav." Giving a glass of champagne to Sammy, she raises her glass and toasts to the grave, "I got married today... To the man I love... A human... Sammy."

She rests her head on Sammy's shoulder and whispers, "I kept my promise." Sammy caresses the inside of her palm, saying, "what promise did you fulfil?" Sitting up, Maya leans towards the grave and says, "I promised myself that I would not let Ragav's death be in vain."

Standing up, she stretches her hand towards Sammy and says, "come, I shall tell you about the first love story between our kind."

They sit near a tree with Sammy leaning on its trunk his legs outstretched and Maya sitting between his legs and leaning into his chest. Once comfortable, Maya places rests her hand on her womb, feeling the heartbeat of her fledgling, she begins the tale that brought change in both their worlds.

P.S: I could not sleep until I had this written out.

Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome just truly awesome like always. So maya pregnant huh 😛 continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😉
Unres
A tragedy 😭 oh, the thought of RagNa death is making me choke 😭
Anyways, awesome start 👏 continue soon...

PS - Sorry for unresing late 😳
Edited by _TheBlackRose_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats Fuzz for your new FF. I had always liked this concept and FF by sweetcherry95. I know she is a brilliant writer and I used to look forward to reading more of her work. But since she is busy and if she cannot continue this FF anymore. I am glad this FF shall not be discontinued any more and I can read it. I like both of you as writers; and you can still collaborate with her if you want, as to her ideas and write in your own style.

BTW...you really must be a superhuman to manage so many FFs at once along with managing your own life! I know how much emotions and time is invested in each update and story as a writer. As a writer one undergoes and feels every emotion, pain of his/her story characters. So hats off to you for being able to carry off so much. I am toh unable to do justice to my own three. 😊

Now coming to this update, its awesome as always. Though personally I really don't like sad endings where leads die! but sometimes it makes a story all the more enchanting and true; and I already loved the first part. 😃 Super-awesome.😊

Love you so much. take care, okay? 😃🤗❤️
Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue soon...ragna r dead kya :( plzzz give dem 2nd birth nd continue soon eagerly w8ng 2 read deir love story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Angel! Where is Raghav here is he in grav or in Maya's womb?
Just curios and by the way is Raghav vampire or Hunan?

Anyway good start u got me in ur grip already 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!! So raghav is dead!! Where is Kalpi? Was rags the vampire?! Maya's a vampire and Sammy is human! Raghav being her best friend!! Was he a vampire also?! What i can decipher from this is that raghav was in love and never got close to her or never told her he loved her!! He hid his feelings!! Was he the master?! Was Kalpi his human slave?! Clearly there were against eachother the humans and the vampires! I get the feeling that their love was strong but was hidden because of one being different from the other!! Start with the story! Anxiously awaiting 😉
Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm fascinated by paranormal romance
And I'm happy that one of my favorite writer is telling RagNa lovestory
Superb start
Congrats to Maya and Sammy on their wedding
I can't wait to read more

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