PURE PASSION - New SS Chapt 20 updtd on pg 151 - Page 87

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Posted: 10 years ago
Priya when is next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Priya when is next update.


You choose Sunny ...Pure passion or LRR in this weekend!

And no the answer cannot be 'both'😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love LRR but Pure passion is more addicting. So please update pure passion. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Outstanding update
With Romeo by her Juliet side she is becoming stronger and is able to stand her ground
Aww she doubt on poor romeo 🥱 but I like that he understand where she was coming from...
Kalpi forgiving Prem and pulling his legs was awesome. I like that their friendship is starting to be semi normal again... Omg! Kamla is a nuisance
Vitthal slapping her was superb lol... It's about time he put a stop to her nonsense
Priya darling you is a magnificent writer and I can't get enough of your writing
I love the entire update
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Posted: 10 years ago
As promised ...ur chakuli is back with a comment. I loved this update ...the reasons are many which i wud tell u in this post ...but the chief 1 being KAlpi's portrayal in this update. I dont know bout Raghav's reasons ..but i am definitely falling for her ...Loving her more & more in every update. & lemme telll u priyeee ..its quite a gr8 thing to happen so coz i have always been obsessed with Raghav's character (mayb thats y i focused more on it in my ff as well) ...more than that of Kalpi's coz it felt it had depth & a wider range of emotions to handle with. (I am speaking about the non-majboor Raghav) But this is 1 different ff where i am liking kalpi more than raghav ...kudos for that.
Now the update
i loved the way it started ..uske baad the phone thing was quite apt for th esituation. KAlpi's actions & Raghav's rection were well justified.
& uske baad started the part which got me really really engrossed ...the Kalpi-Prem confrontation...
I simply loved the way Kalpi connected to Prem ..it wud be tough for any girl to do so ..to accept that her husband is not a complete man..to forgive him for hiding that from her...to keep her problems aside & make an attempt to understand his plight & try to lok at thngs frm his perspective...to feel his pain & his reasons to fear the society... BUT SHE DID ...Which shows how brave the woman is !! She said the things to prem straight & clear much to his amusement.
I also loved the part where they actually start behaving like friends again
"Time passed and Kalpi couldn't believe she was being normal with Prem teasing him, making fun of him!!!
Sooo is he really good!///!! Prem took her by surprise! Must be! He's probably an expert!

Kalpi blushed and then laughed... how do you know we went that far she asked!
Are you bluffing me??? I know you since you were a kid okay! Just like you can read my face I can yours! I did think you had someone in your life but did not expect you to be so daring!!! Were you not scared!

Naa I was but I couldn't just resist him! Tried but couldn't! And now if I am talking to you it is because of him. He was the one who made me realise that you need ur friend now!

You ...You trust him? He sure seems to be a nice person as not many can relate to people like me! Does he look good!?

Now I am not telling you that as I dont want you to take him away from me!!!! Kalpiii!!!! yelled Prem and she laughed. Both the friends reconciled and one could hear the peals of laughter which had probably gone lost in the past few years! Now there seemed no pretence nor any tension! They were just friends and life seemed much easier!"

this 1 was greatly written. It did lighten the atmosphere a bit with the story yet remaining on track
This part actually made me feel "How i wish Prem hadnt lied to her all this while !!" Their interaction seemed so true & so real ...
Then was the sattack
Kamla holds Kalpi's arms jerking her and shaking her...its all because of you my son has become like this! You are a Panoti!!!

Sataaackkk!

Kalpi had closed her eyes expecting a slap from Kamla as she had raised her hands but she did not feel anything and Kamla's death grip on her arms too had gone.

She opened her eyes to see Kamla lying on the ground holding her left cheek with eyes wide open. Vitthal had slapped her Aai??!!!!

DONT YOU DARE TOUCH MY PRINCESS! SHE ALREADY HAS BEEN WRONGED ENOUGH!

DONO MAA BETE NE MILKE ZINDAGI BIGAAD DI MERE BACHHI KI!!!

VAise toh i am that female who is against female violence ..I mean "My mentality---> A girl can slap a guy but the vice versa shud never happen ...Heheheh..u see tahts what happens when u r in a guys school where the girls are pampered quite a lot. So we cud do anything & yet escape from eing punished or somethin"...but over here kamla deserved to get that 1. Good that atleast yaha par Vitthal has some brains...
& the part that followed was quite predictable...but nice !!

& then came the line which actually summarized my this entire comment of mine "They never expected her to turn out so strong. Suddenly they felt this is not their Kalpi! She has changed! She has turned into something else!!!!"

Ok !! Abhhi main thak gayi ..i can actually go about decoding every line of the update, but then the comment's length wud exceed tht of ur update's. SO , i shut my mouth over here ...
As always ..it was a gr8 update & i am already waiting for the next 1 !!😃😃
Do continue asap
Ur chakuli is waiting...


Btw ..i wished to ask something. I keep teasing u with that maafia thing & recently ur pc pappi ..its f9 na ?? I mean ...u dont feel irritated na? If u do lemme know ...

MARUSHKAA
Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Aww Pri! What a fabulous update yaar! Loved it would be an understatement!

Cute Romeo -Juliet moments! They are indeed made for each other. Kalpi is not sure of her feelings towards Romeo. She's wondering if it's love or an attraction because he was there in time of need. But she's not in the right frame of mind to think about her future. At the same time she can't stop thinking about him too. But having a hard time trusting anyone. That's why she panicked when she saw the phone in his hand.

How well he read her mind! He doesn't need words to understand her. He's too good to be true! She was about to reveal her name but he stopped her.

Kalpi is right. She should be thankful to Prem. Had he succumbed to her charm that day, she would never have found true love in Romeo.

The high point of the update was the camaraderie between Kalpi and Prem. It's surprising how Romeo 's words had the desired effect on her. He made her understand Prem needs his friend now and she realised their friendship is much more important than the husband -wife relation between them .

The awkwardness between her and Prem disappeared slowly and they even conversed about Ash and how he met him! Prem could see the difference in Kalpi and that it's all because of Romeo.

Loved Prem asking her " does he look good? ". She replied " I'm not telling you that as I don't want you to take him away from me"! ...lol.

Kamala is so disgusting. Her son is at fault and he accepts it, still she taunts Kalpi for it. She's thinking about the society. Doesn't she care about her son's happiness? I know she doesn't care a damn for Kalpi.

Glad to see Vithal in charge. At least he had the good sense to think before he talks. He's asking Kalpi for forgiveness but she's too shocked to even register that.

All hell will break loose when her affair with Romeo will come out. I'm sure Kamala will hold her responsible again .

All in all an amazing update ! 👏 Hats off to you sis for bringing such a sensitive topic into light!


Thank you Kia for loving this chappy though I had my doubts!!! But I guess that is what true friendship is all about! You get angry with them curse them slap them and then later when you vent out all your frustrations you still sit and enjoy a cup of coffee with the as nothing had happened!!!

Friends have the right to get upset over each other and they can fight each other but they would be foolish to break a friendship and not reconcile! It did take time for Kalpi to rekindle that friendship between her and Prem but she somehow managed it maybe because she too needed her friend and she knew how it felt not having a friend around when you need him/her the most!!!!

Though I wont say she will trust Prem or depend on him like she used to but friendship will never die between them they were, are and will be bff!

As far as Kamla getting to know about Romeo n Kalpi's affair well you have to wait for the next few updates to catch that!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 17 was a really an eye-opener for Kalpi.
I was under the assumption,that by supporting and improving the image of Prem,Raghav is
digging a pit for his own love.
But,his words,took a 360 degress turn.And made Kalpi's confused thoughts to crystal clear ones.
And .that wow moment,with a clear state of mind,she walked in ,made a self analysis,and not only
faced Prem but made him to realise to stand by his decision of coming out of this forced marriage under any dire circumstances.
Her action had clearly shown that she had forgiven PREM AS A FRIEND AND NOT AS A WIFE.Like the saying,A friend in deed is a friend in need.And now Prem needs his friend Kalpi most
importantly rather than her as a wife.
AND VITHAL'S SLAP TO DUMBLA IS NO LESS THAN AN EIGHTH WONDER OF THE WORLD.
Inspite of such a powerful slap.she is not willing to understand the root of the problem and is
constantly blaming Kalpi.
After knowing the physical condition of her son and his happiness,how can she readily forgive Prem
and not for a moment willing to think abt the life of Kalpi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????.
And Prem's eagerness to meet Romeo aka Raghav was quite awesome.Will Prem actually meet
Raghav as Kalpi's lover or as a businessman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
I earnestly appreciate, the way, Raghav had handled an emotional Kalpi and advised her to tackle the problem more sensibly and giving her the much needed attention,love,privacy and the care.
KAASH SAB KA LOVERS AND HUSBANDS PASSION KA ROMEO AKA RAGHAV JAISE
HOTHEY SAB SAMAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyyllooo dear..
wow.. update was superr n cool one. !! dint expect dat kalpi n prem ll get along so soon.. and dat too dey were teasing each other.. really did dat dumbla fell down dat too by jus one slap..??? Lol vittal must have used a lot of force to do dat.. jokes apart.. I'm glad dat vittal has supported kalpi n I'm really lykng dis changed kalpi nw.. and next wen dumbla ll meet ash.. she ll jus faint breaking the tiles n all Lol.. I'm eager to know wat ll be vittla reaction..
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I do not know how to react on the update... I am not an emotional person but I really felt something while reading it... I feel for Prem.. i feel for Kalpi as well and whether I like it or not... I feel bad for Kamla... My love n respect for Vitthal increased... He proved to be a gem of person... He is a sweetheart n I wish he supports RagNa.
Kalpi... She will take some time to trust someone fully... In last post I said that she trusts him but the fear the scar of past or I should say present trauma is still there... She is still in pain and she needs to move on completely.. Though she had proved her stronger coz of Romeo's support but she still needs time to come out of the fear. She is glad to find her frn back but her not feelings bad for the family proves that she has not forgiven them completely... I am glad she replied back to Kamla.

Prem.. Ohh Godd!! He was a liar... He lied and went Goa with his frnz.. Well I can forgive him for not telling Kalpi about his sexual preferences but lying for such a small thing shows his real nature... He dint thought about taking her out just as friend.. It's ok if he was not able to satisfy her on bed but they would have gone for outings just as friend...

Kamla... Well she is mean but her outburst was real and natural... It's not easy to accept their son's flaws... The people at my place still feels that being a gay and lesbo is a disease and it's the person's fault.. Once I tried to argue with my relative but got scolded by Granny saying girls shouldn't speak about such dirty things and I had to keep quite.

Romeo.. I do not know what to think about him... M still confuse whether he real feels bad for Prem or just supported him for his selfish reasons... Will he had supported him if his sister would have been in place of his gf.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix


Thank you Kia for loving this chappy though I had my doubts!!! But I guess that is what true friendship is all about! You get angry with them curse them slap them and then later when you vent out all your frustrations you still sit and enjoy a cup of coffee with the as nothing had happened!!!

Friends have the right to get upset over each other and they can fight each other but they would be foolish to break a friendship and not reconcile! It did take time for Kalpi to rekindle that friendship between her and Prem but she somehow managed it maybe because she too needed her friend and she knew how it felt not having a friend around when you need him/her the most!!!!

Though I wont say she will trust Prem or depend on him like she used to but friendship will never die between them they were, are and will be bff!

As far as Kamla getting to know about Romeo n Kalpi's affair well you have to wait for the next few updates to catch that!


Who else knows it better than me? Think how many times we kept bickering over small things and then at the end of the day we are back to our bak - bak. Isn't it what friends/ sisters are for? 🤗

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