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Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats to Mr.Singhania for finding his Ms.Jhadhav easily 😆😆 poor boy was so worried for her ...but as easy it was to find her it was tough time controlling himself 😛😆😉...hope he manages to control till the time he drops her home 😛😆...Glad atleast Raghav confessed his love to himself 😛😆😆...& he didn't take too long to realise 😃😃

Hope Raghav enjoys his midnight coffee date 😛😳
A Lot can happen over a cup of coffee 😉😳






charvi3 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update dear👍🏼
Thanku for pm
cutyneha thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update finally rags realised his love for kalpi. Waiting for confession
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Posted: 10 years ago
fianlly raghav except is feling for kalpi..nice update continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love you so much forcthis! Thank you for giving us something to look forward to! Absolutely brilliant as always! Looking forward to the next update 👏 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
After long time was happy to see your pm but needed a long update. When you are so good in updates then how can I feel satisfied with a short one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow! Raghav Singhania panicking but trying to keep it together
I like that Raghav admit to himself that he love Kalpi ;)
Him seeing Kalpi sitting on the side of the road was awesome lol
It's like the rock was lifted off his chest
Kalpi questioning Raghav was superb
Beautiful update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Like the previous,it is quite rocking.
Kalpi in the drunken state is always the original.I meant to say that in the normal days,she has earned doctorate in controlling her emotions and true feelings.
But in the drunken state,and that too with Raghav,nothing to be taught to her.Automatically pours out her emotions : be it comic,teasing,or being sad.
When she taunted him abt his girlfriend,it showed her jealousy clearly.And Raghav had learnt abt his feelings.But as a true lover,her dignity and safety comes to his mind.
And Ragna,at late night,with Kalpi in the drunken state,in the coffee shop,only GOD knows abt the sequences and the consequences.Let the owner not run away fearing for his mental stability.As drunken Kalpi will not keep quiet and the akdoo will be damn angry,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was not feeling sleepy last night and decided to come to the forum. Read your short novella (first one) again, the whole thing. Once again wanted to appreciate you for the story. Couldn't have been better. It was amazing line by line, scene by scene. Just fab. Thought I will share with you. Girl, you are too good!
Love you lots!
Hugs and kisses! 🤗

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