what should have been ... a short novella + 1 - Page 29

Wow, that was one excellent update. Girl, you have done it again! How do you know to make every update so tantalising and perfect that we can't help fall in love with the story all over again? The Raghav in the story is so irresistible and sexy like hell. Can't help falling for him.

Awesome update dear!! 👏

amazing, let's see how Raghav handles Kalpi in the state she is in, loving this story, please continue soon

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

DAMN WOMAN!! I'm feeling like i just drank the entire contents of that bottle also!! Never a dull moment in your ff!! I love how both are jealous of eachother lol and their actions and expressions are so sensuous towards eachother 😉 girl there is nothing more relaxing after a hard days work than just sprawling of and reading your ff 😛 just loveing it! Both have never behaved like this before, all new emotions being experienced by both! And love how maya figured it out! Love rags expressions!! The way you described his actions and thoughts are so clear! I feel like I'm watching EMA! Thank you lol 😉 DAMN!! I cud just picture when he came out from behind the tree!! DAMN HOT!! His voice so unexpected of her lol and it seems as though he was looking at her devour the champagne lol I wonder if he figured out it's him that caused her to drink LOL... I'm just picturing him walking gracefully towards her and asking the question LOL and the expression on her face LOL mind blowing!! Plz update soon! Don't leave me like this!! LOL ;)
By the way what does UFF means;)

Can u pls index for 1st story

Oh my dear, in love with your writing skills. Sorry for late reply. But such a fabulous full of jealousy and hot update! 😃 👏 Buy why did you have to stop here! Not fair, now its a request please update soon hon! 😃 Loved the dressing of Kalpi. 😃

After reading this chapter I feel like Kalpi lol
I feel like I drank the champagne along with her lol ( even though I hate the taste)
Love the way Sammy semi emotional blackmailing Raghav to attend his wedding function
Damn for someone who portrays to dislike Kalpi so much is thinking about her too much and that too in a romantic way...
Omg! I love the abundance of jealousy in this chapter, it speaks volumes
Raghav was literally making love to Kalpi with his eyes and his anger seeing the "young man" around Kalpi didn't help at all lol
The ways he think of kissing Kalpi got me blushing ;)
I like that Maya saw his distraction and understood Raghav situation without much saying from him...
Shy innocent Kalpi got so angry seeing Maya that closed to Raghav lol
For someone who dislike Raghav is showing her possessiveness over him ;)
Kalpi drunk and alone with Raghav watching her and then walking towards her is damn sexy
I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope they explore each other lol
Love the enter chapter, u wrote sooo beautifully... Well thought out chapter and not a sentence or used of words out of place, Everything was perfect.

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great update...I guess now only raghav will find drunk kalpi & he has to take her to his home...😊