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Posted: 10 years ago
Doesn't matter. I typed that before I saw you replying on my comments. By the way the first comment was not about the update. It was just excitement after reading it. I love the feeling of being in love ❤️ Mwah!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpureness


need a break... will try to finish it tonight


Yup, I understand. I think I will go out of the house and run some errands... or else I'll just keep refreshing this page, on a Loony Loopy !!

1 Ques. I did not understand this line - "Kalpi lost in the feel of his arms does not notice, happy to be in his arms once again." Did not notice what??



❤️ Aaj Kal Meri Sunta Nahi, ❤️ Aaj Kal Paas Rehta Nahi,
Yeh Tujhse hi milne ko chahe,
Yeh teri hi karta hai Baatein...
Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
You did it!!! I'm crying :) he knew!! Omg!! He knew she was faking!! He loves her sooo much he dont even want her to see him coming towards her to break that innocent smile on her face!! Such innocent beauty he sees in her!! He's so afraid of hurting her!! How can this simple girl take control of his heart? Of his feelings? He is mezmerized by her pure innocent beauty!! He is afraid of hurting her again!! He is afraid of not being able to see her agian for a very long time!! He is willing to accept anything just to see her innocent smile! Just to see her happy!! He is willing to stay away from her just so she can finish her studies!! He loves her so much that he doesn't want to risk his actions towards her! OMG!!! I cannot take this!! Can someone love another so much that he wants to stay away from her just to protect her from himself?! From losing all his control becasue that's what she does to him!! He is helplessly in love with this innocent soul that he knows he has taken advantage of and knows that she is aching inside! This innocent girl that pretends to be so strong in front of him!! He knows how she feels!! He knows she is aching!! All the memories becomes real when they become one for that dance!! This is so touching!! I felt every emotion!! I really dont know how you did this!! You are so amazing Pureness!! Understand every emotion!! Please do something to bring them together plz!! I'm in tears... Amazing you are simply amazing!
I simply didn't comment on priya becasue I know she can handle it! Becasue she also is the one to brought rags and Kalpi together presently! And she supports it!!
Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

You did it!!! I'm crying :) he knew!! Omg!! He knew she was faking!! He loves her sooo much he dont even want her to see him coming towards her to break that innocent smile on her face!! Such innocent beauty he sees in her!! He's so afraid of hurting her!! How can this simple girl take control of his heart? Of his feelings? He is mezmerized by her pure innocent beauty!! He is afraid of hurting her again!! He is afraid of not being able to see her agian for a very long time!! He is willing to accept anything just to see her innocent smile! Just to see her happy!! He is will to stay away from her just so she can finish her studies!! He loves her so much that he doesn't want to risk his actions towards her! OMG!!! I cannot take this!! Can someone love another so much that he wants to stay away from her just to protect her from himself?! From losing all his control becasue that's what she does to him!! He is helplessly in love with this innocent soul that he knows he has taken advantage of and knows that she is aching inside! This innocent girl that pretends to be so setting in front of him!! He knows how she feels!! He knows she is aching!! All the memories becomes real when they become one for that dance!! This is so touching!! I felt every emotion!! I really dont know how you did this!! You are so amazing Pureness!! Understand every emotion!! Please do something to bring them together plz!! I'm in tears... Amazing you are simply amazing!
I simply didn't comment on priya becasue I know she can handle it! Becasue she also is the one to bring rags and Kalpi together presently! And she supports it!!



Di, I love, love, love your analysis just as much... I feel you girl.
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Posted: 10 years ago
just curious what Maya would have asked Raghav about him staring at Kalpi, glad Kalpi could be herself and enjoy, lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update and the idea of BG song... imagined our RagNa dancing on this BG...
complete this chap fast...
BTW they were so lost while dancing that they forgot that Sammy and others were around??? wat they will think???
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

You did it!!! I'm crying :) he knew!! Omg!! He knew she was faking!! He loves her sooo much he dont even want her to see him coming towards her to break that innocent smile on her face!! Such innocent beauty he sees in her!! He's so afraid of hurting her!! How can this simple girl take control of his heart? Of his feelings? He is mezmerized by her pure innocent beauty!! He is afraid of hurting her again!! He is afraid of not being able to see her agian for a very long time!! He is willing to accept anything just to see her innocent smile! Just to see her happy!! He is willing to stay away from her just so she can finish her studies!! He loves her so much that he doesn't want to risk his actions towards her! OMG!!! I cannot take this!! Can someone love another so much that he wants to stay away from her just to protect her from himself?! From losing all his control becasue that's what she does to him!! He is helplessly in love with this innocent soul that he knows he has taken advantage of and knows that she is aching inside! This innocent girl that pretends to be so strong in front of him!! He knows how she feels!! He knows she is aching!! All the memories becomes real when they become one for that dance!! This is so touching!! I felt every emotion!! I really dont know how you did this!! You are so amazing Pureness!! Understand every emotion!! Please do something to bring them together plz!! I'm in tears... Amazing you are simply amazing!
I simply didn't comment on priya becasue I know she can handle it! Becasue she also is the one to brought rags and Kalpi together presently! And she supports it!!


oh bless u r crying... n I am smiling from reading your comment... oh girl what can I say... perfect.

Yea tonight he at last has accepted that he has feelings for her... in fact I think it is his first time acknowledging the depth of feelings he has for her. The time apart and Priya's words of wisdom has made him aware of how Kalpi must be feeling and he can never forget her tears

Tonight will be a new chapter for them... a new begining
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

just curious what Maya would have asked Raghav about him staring at Kalpi, glad Kalpi could be herself and enjoy, lovely update


lol I have no idea... I needed to fill the time with something so that the lyrics and paragraph match😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

nice update and the idea of BG song... imagined our RagNa dancing on this BG...
complete this chap fast...
BTW they were so lost while dancing that they forgot that Sammy and others were around??? wat they will think???


What can I say... they were lost into each other😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini


Yup, I understand. I think I will go out of the house and run some errands... or else I'll just keep refreshing this page, on a Loony Loopy !!

1 Ques. I did not understand this line - "Kalpi lost in the feel of his arms does not notice, happy to be in his arms once again." Did not notice what??



❤️ Aaj Kal Meri Sunta Nahi, ❤️ Aaj Kal Paas Rehta Nahi,
Yeh Tujhse hi milne ko chahe,
Yeh teri hi karta hai Baatein...


she did not realise that he had brought her closer... I might recheck my wording and edit it later... since it is not clear

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