No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling - Page 55

Originally posted by: chahat4u

I am sorry for havign disappointed you dear. Maybe it slipped out of mind to comment for complete chap-12.

Plz Fuzz, go on. Plz finish this chapter and then again keep writing. You have done such a magic over here that, I am spellbound. I will not be able to give you any opinion. I am all mushy over here and like RagNa, who cant get enough of each other, I cant get enough of your stories.

@di... you have disaappeared😭

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

I have edited my comments since you answered. You beat me to it...lol

Mwah

Loved Raghav watching Kalpi from far , mesmerised by her beauty. He isn't feeling jealous of her dancing with Sammy for he knows there's nothing between them. His only regret is its not his arms she's in. He's reminiscing the first time he saw her, he being attracted to her eyes. Her almond eyes bewitching him at the very moment he laid eyes on her. Unable to resist he joins her, rejoicing at the sound of her laughter. She bumps into him and surprised she calls out his name. He just holds her closer and she leans onto him resting her head on his shoulder. They sway to the music, content to be in each other's arms. Gosh, I loved that scene.

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Loved Raghav watching Kalpi from far , mesmerised by her beauty. He isn't feeling jealous of her dancing with Sammy for he knows there's nothing between them. His only regret is its not his arms she's in. He's reminiscing the first time he saw her, he being attracted to her eyes. Her almond eyes bewitching him at the very moment he laid eyes on her. Unable to resist he joins her, rejoicing at the sound of her laughter. She bumps into him and surprised she calls out his name. He just holds her closer and she leans onto him resting her head on his shoulder. They sway to the music, content to be in each other's arms. Gosh, I loved that scene.

The setting was perfect and so was the music. Loved how everything came out. Played the song and read it twice. It can't get any better than that. Oh yeah, missed out on Maya's reaction on seeing Raghav looking at Kalpi. Loved how she told Priya that she's there for her whenever she's ready to talk. Can't wait to read the next part.

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Plz Fuzz, go on. Plz finish this chapter and then again keep writing. You have done such a magic over here that, I am spellbound. I will not be able to give you any opinion. I am all mushy over here and like RagNa, who cant get enough of each other, I cant get enough of your stories.

The song selections are awesome. Now, Dil AajKal goes in my nonstop loop too 😉

Oh! Mushy meee!!!

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Part-1 is amazing Fuzz. the song selection is perfect and beautiful. You were right, it describes their emotions, perfectly. Please update Part-2 soon 😃 Loved them dancing away to the sounds of music, oblivious of their surroundings, forgetting about all. Did they actually dance so closely and openly infront of all? 😲 Maya too knows their little secret, well almost! Wonder what's gonna happen next, especially with that "tum hi ho" song. eager to read more. Pleasee update soon. n marvellous update. 😃 👏

Originally posted by: priya_remix

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stalker here

I swear I wont read it! 😆But will you tell how you manage to add only the audio to your update??

I have a fetish for moonlit beaches and bonfires and KK's voice!!!And add to it the tadka of RagNaaa????😲😳 Fuzzz!!!!!Wat have you done!!??😆😆me going crazy with this update! I am transported to some other world dear! It was me, there on the beach, as if I were watching RagNa live!!! Oh this is so beautiful!😳

It brought back so many memories that u made me cry!!! sniff sniff!!! 😭Will I ever be able to go to a beach in the night again and be that carefree that I got once to be!

Oh that was the best night of my entire life when me and friends had spent a night under the stars and moonlight lsitening to music and dancing around the bonfire cracking jokes and laughing like witches!!! at a beach in Daman and Diu!!

Sigh those were the days! Now gone are those days!!!!! This update will be special for me!!!! And I dont want to comment on it! Just want to enjoy reading it again and again and again!

I dont know if you get time to read my comments but its ok yaar! You dont have to reply each and every comment, I completely understand! As of now cant control myself from commenting!😆😛 I was just kidding trying to be a DQ and pull your leg! Ask Di I almost made her believe that I cried!!!LOL

Thanks for such a beautiful update Fuzzz you are too good at tugging people's hearts!🤗

Originally posted by: riaka

Please update.How long we have to wait😭😭. Song is really beautiful. To be honest i cant cantroll So I did read the d few lines you wrote. SORRY😕. Raghav is singing along with it was awesome.please complete it soon