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Tum Hi Ho...

this is an awesome update angel. And the idea of adding background music is fantastic. Wow, This time rags isn't at all jealous while he saw kalps and sams so close to each other dancing and enjoying. And I love the concept of bonfire and spending the night at the beach side. And please, Continue soon and once again a very nice update =))

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Tum Hi Ho...

Are you serious!!! Plz. finish it I am shivering, I may just faint!!!

ps- what do you wanna do about them? Looks like they are just about to confess to each other. its almost like Kalpi and Rags are right on the same stage. How will you bring the twist of Prem/ gauri finding out.

Priya, disclosing the truth. Prem's marriage.

pps- Next dont tell me Fuzzz... that this is a dream sequence. the way you are going about it looks like Rags is hallucinating!!!!

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Would I kill your buzz by giving u a dream sequence?

Answer if you want me to continue😆

Pureness is much more creative to give us a dream;)!! Things are to emotional and moody now for it to be a dream!!

Fuzz... Please have pity on me... I'm gonna cry, can't stand this. You have made me all mushy! 'Tum hi ho' is synonymous with ragna. I don't think of anyone else whenever I play the song. From now on I think I'm going to visualise them swaying to music in the moonlight with sound of ocean in the background. Loved how he takes her again in his arms possessively, eager to have his fill on her. Both trying hard to mask the pool of desire in their eyes. He has taken her away from the others wanting to keep her all to himself. Why can't he kiss her already!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm dying here...

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Would I kill your buzz by giving u a dream sequence?

Answer if you want me to continue😆

I think others are also there na it seems they forgot everyone over there, omg raghav kissed her hope so gauri is not there imagine if gauri is also present what would be her reaction? So beach walk Ragna all alone in beach will cool breeze cool their desire or fuel it more😉. Will Raghav tell Kalpi about his feeling? Will Kalpi let out her fear of being other woman coming between him and Priya? Waiting for next update.

Pureness!! I think you heading in the correct direction!! Both on the shore of the beach!! They need to speak to eachother! Tell eachother how they truly feel!! Plz do thisand then add the passion;) well let them be aware of the fact that all is pure and real for both! You know!! True feeling being poured out from both!! From her trying to hold back means she's considering priya's feelings also! I think priya has to talk to her also 😉

All I can say is: OMG!!!! And when is the next update. The emotions are so intense, I'm feeling it too. I love how Raghav is trying to keep things under control, its not working though. You are so eloquent in you description of the feelings between Ragna. You are an amazing writer. I am constantly checking for your updates.

Yess!! You lightened the mood. You did it. I love it.