No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling - Page 54

hurry up... I am anxious... oh you might want to refresh the page, I added a line or too... hope timing was alright, esp at the end

Oh my!!!!! Fuzz, can I kiss you right now? Who are you and what have you turned me into? You are asking if it was good! That was out of this world. Totally worth the wait. I love you. ... Gosh, it was so ... Words are not coming out nice. Let me go back and read it again. Awesome song too. How on earth did I miss such a beautiful song! You are such a sweetheart, you know 🤗

My dear angel mwah 😳 a thousand nehas ! Yaou gave killed it. This was the best idea ever I feel like I m lost in some movie. And after seeing Rachana as ajabde on screen it was so much more easier to picture it. You have given more goosebumps today and my arm hair is sticking up it is that good. Sorry I know u said not to read it but couldn't stop myself. Angel u r truly an angel I tell u. 🤗 still need more though am so greedy. 😆

Originally posted by: sunyy

My dear angel mwah 😳 a thousand nehas ! Yaou gave killed it. This was the best idea ever I feel like I m lost in some movie. And after seeing Rachana as ajabde on screen it was so much more easier to picture it. You have given more goosebumps today and my arm hair is sticking up it is that good. Sorry I know u said not to read it but couldn't stop myself. Angel u r truly an angel I tell u. 🤗 still need more though am so greedy. 😆

@ priya @charu

Originally posted by: priya_remix

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stalker here

I swear I wont read it! 😆But will you tell how you manage to add only the audio to your update??

Part-1 is amazing Fuzz. the song selection is perfect and beautiful. You were right, it describes their emotions, perfectly. Please update Part-2 soon 😃 Loved them dancing away to the sounds of music, oblivious of their surroundings, forgetting about all. Did they actually dance so closely and openly infront of all? 😲 Maya too knows their little secret, well almost! Wonder what's gonna happen next, especially with that "tum hi ho" song. eager to read more. Pleasee update soon. n marvellous update. 😃 👏

Yes angel I read it with music and u couldn't have chosen a more perfect song. 😃 I so loved it.

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Part-1 is amazing Fuzz. the song selection is perfect and beautiful. You were right, it describes their emotions, perfectly. Please update Part-2 soon 😃 Loved them dancing away to the sounds of music, oblivious of their surroundings, forgetting about all. Did they actually dance so closely and openly infront of all? 😲 Maya too knows their little secret, well almost! Wonder what's gonna happen next, especially with that "tum hi ho" song. eager to read more. Pleasee update soon. n marvellous update. 😃 👏

Originally posted by: angelpureness

@ priya @charu

Hun, I noticed that there was no comment. In fact I was so disheartened when I saw you liked some comments and yet your comment didn't appear. I felt that maybe you did not have the time, so I didn't ask for a comment... coz I know that you are one of the first to comment.

I struggle with finding the time to read other ffs and comment, so I assumed that you were busy and would comment when you can.

Here I was, trying to be considerate and curb my disappointment... now I know better. So be prepared, for I shall demand feedback.

Guys you have unleashed a monster😆