No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling - Page 41

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Wow, this is amazing. I love how you have made Priya the voice of reason. SHe is like the conscience of Raghav, forcing him to see the emotions and not just the physical desires and body needs.

I kind of sense that Rags is himself struggling within with the emotions he is feeling for Kalpi. Did he ever realize that she is 21? I just hope he understands how experienced he looks infront of her.

He is possessive about her and he cant see her leave London, so does he plan to keep her by offering a job? is that the plan? will Kalpi like the idea of working in such close proximity with Raghav? We still haven't heard much of Kalpi's POV. Are we gonna get one? Make rags fall hard for Kalpi without loosing the Hotness quotient between them Sizzling hot love 😉

ps- I have already got used to Looong update. esp. since you plan to finish in 20chapters.

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Wow fuzzz you really seem to be charged up to finish off this SS giving us back to back updates. Loved Priya and Raghav's serious talks and Priya trying to tug his conscience. Gawd this man is too much!!!

He knows he is wrong yet he is not ready to admit that he wants to call anything between him n Kalpi as a relationship!

He knows that she is too young for all this and he wants to take this further continuing what he was doing! Though somewhere his emotions have got involved too as he felt bad that he did not give a thought about the consequences of his actions, when he saw her crying.

Well according to me one cannot be untouched from emotions when you are involved in a physical relationship with a person no matter how hard u try unless its a one night stand.

Well in this case the love is yet to happen though they have become one physically! The souls are yet to fuse and the minds are yet to merge! And if they continue at this rate it will happen sooner or later.😊

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Read all chapters in one go..

superb story nd awesome job done by u angel.👏

love the story very much like i lov ur ff hate me today..u wrote in a way that everyone would come here on its own nd stick Here like gum..its hard to detach Ourself from this wonderful story nd ur awesome efforts ..

love the character priya..who made seen the right mirror to raghav Which he had imagined from his own misconception...

nd here is kalpi..love this bold kalpi who did not cry to been insulted by those money given by raghav to spent night with him..nd backfired him by given money back for his services..

keep it up dear..

u r awesome.writer..

Originally posted by: angelpureness

True... I think I want to now focus on soul connection... N probably use their sexual tension that get them snapping at each other... Lol

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Ch 10 complete

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Girl it's bakra eid here!! I'm busy!! Will definitely be late on this!! Will comment very late!!

Originally posted by: GUYCAN

Wow!!!

Brilliantly written!! Luv it ...the emotions & thoughts with each characters super 👏👏...I'm just speechless (heheh)👍🏼

Lol not to offend any one BUT this Raghav wants a smack on the face ...all he thinks is about having sex with Kalpi at his demand ...well there's is a famous saying " a man is man at the end of day free pussy 😆"...Glad Priya was able to give him a reality check (Luv this Priya A friend & confidant) & Pakhi is such a good friend to Kalpi (hope she doesn't change)...finally Kalpi is standing up for self respect (Bravo girl )...I'm guessing Kapli doesn't know the 5 F's rule...

Do Continue I Really Want To Know How This Story Unfolds 😃