No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

heyylooo angel..

seriouslyyy I wonder hw u ll manage to update all d ff's..

and dat too each ff has its own motto or d story, which doesn't match d other ff..!!

and d idea of dis one s totally diff.. kalpi lap dance her carefreeness n all.. was good n raghav's jealousy as usual..

HATS OFF TO U

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

I like it angel..lovely prolough

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sonia

@SONIA6702

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

liked it ?? luved it dear !! awsum !! Rags opinated abt kalpi widout evn knowing her !! But dey had instant connection !!
damn it ws so hot !! 😆..

plzz dnt stop writing !!

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mattieram

@mattieram

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Oh my goodness, please continue soon!!!!!

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Maar Daala!! Alllaaah! Maar Daala!
Yun na likho is tarah aap panne badal badal ke
Ke syahi khatam ho jaayega
Kahaani toh khoob shuru ki hai
kya yeh kabhi poora ho paayega?

LOL! Gosh u remind me of potli baba ki!
How much more do you have in stock! Its like RagNa is dissolved in ur blood!

Lol... Pata nahin kab the stories will complete... Lol

U have to stop writing in Indian or you could translate it too... I did not understand line no3 and also no 2 the second part of the sentence.

Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Omg rAgs was so mean. I hope she knees him and walks away. Am liking this concept. Please continue soon.

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Chin2_n

@Chin2_n

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Beautiful prologue, way to go

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Lol... Pata nahin kab the stories will complete... Lol

U have to stop writing in Indian or you could translate it too... I did not understand line no3 and also no 2 the second part of the sentence.

Translation😉

Panne means book sheet

Syahi means ink

She saying the below in a funny manner:

don't write too many FF that your writing ink will get over,

you have started this FF very well but will you finish it.

You have stories stock like potli baba has in his potli (bag)😆

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: WhiteQueen

Translation😉
Panne means book sheet
Syahi means ink

She saying the below in a funny manner:

don't write too many FF that your writing ink will get over,
you have started this FF very well but will you finish it.

You have stories stock like potli baba has in his potli (bag)😆

Thanks Hun... I just know very basic Indian words and struggle to understand when I have to read them. I know... I have stretched myself. It is just when an idea pops up, it refuses to go away.