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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: fairylover

Ye lo.. mri frn 3rd pe kundli maar k bethi hai!! 🤗

M glad u liked it. I was scared that u might kill me for RagNa divorce.
About Rihanna... i wanted a name which has R Na both.. I m glad u liked it.

Love story😲 Not sure whether it will stay as love story or I will add mystery or crime to it. But i thought to give a try to love story as CID n crime patrol has spoiled my brain n KK was even doubting me as yesterday I was sharing a full proof plan to kill him with him only. so thought to learn some romance else Shaadi k pehle divorce ho jayega.😆

he he mene bksh diya tuje 4 ragna divorse cz of flashback scene.😳
N warning is lv story ka mystery se satyanash ki tune den i definetly kill u😡.
M going to call/email to sony saying dat stop crime petrol n cid telecast, its afecting on ppl very badly. Wl take help of my jiju 4 dis. 😆

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ragnaareangel
Nice
Divorce but y?
Cntnu soon

Thank u... U have to read more to know the reason for divorce.

Originally posted by: jiya007
Nice 😊

Thank u.😊

Originally posted by: niru04
awesome start.different concept.cntnu:-)

Thank u dear.. Willl update in a while.

Originally posted by: lolor
great start...love flashback...but divorce??? interesting...

Thank u.. m glad u liked it. To know about divorce u have to wait for some more time.

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
Res😉
continue soon

Res ka virus abi tk laga h tujhe.. Ab toh unres maari.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Oh the start itself is tragic!Hate RagNa separation! But love tragedies!
hmmm love the way Kalpi keeps drifting to her happy past!

Raghav does not have time to attend the court? Too bad! Any specific reason or is he just trying to avoid the divorce?

Whatever loved the start and waiting for the rest of the story.

Thnks Priya u r liking it. The story is about the couple who has lost their love in this busy life.. Their mistakes have led them to a position where they are so much in love but can't stay together. As the name says.. the story is about the love which will revisit their life but how.. u have to see that.

Why Rags dint attend the court will be clear in next update.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Awesome Vish! I think it's an intense story. Like u said giving reality or insight into a relationship. It was lovely how Kalpi reminisces her past , her happy life. Now her life seems too bleak, just like how she dressed for the court, no jewellery or makeup. Would love to know what happened to the 'once so much in love' couple that now their fate is being decided by the court. Raghav has become a successful business man in these years. Why is he absent from the court where his future is being decided? Is it really because he's busy or he doesn't want the separation? His lawyer said that he would like to give the relationship another chance. Then why is Kalpana hell bent on divorcing him? Both want the custody of their daughter. Hope they at least give the relationship a chance for their daughter's sake.

Thank u Kiara 🤗

i am just trying to keep this story as realistic as it can be..RagNa were in love but i will try to show the romance that happens in the real life and not the fall-catch type of scenes.To know more about the story u have to wait for more updates.

The story itself is about the couple finding their love once again so they have to give their chance to the relationship.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: vasishna
Resss
unresss😆😃
woww.. a new ff.. dats reallyy awesum..
frstlyy I lykd d sentences u used to express kalpi's pain especially d last para.. I lykd it!
the story seems vry intrestngg as I guess raghav s nt rich frm d strt... and 10yrs has passed n a daughter ria.. and u mentioned dat in few months she has becum matured to undrstnd her mom's pain this one s very undrstndable..
so they r getting divorced.. this makes really interestng to knw d past.. update it wenevr u have tym n continue soon..

Thank u Vaishu.. u r becoming a res queen slowly2.

M glad u liked it. Raghav was just a manager at the time of Kalpi's pregnancy.. He has built Singhania Empire with his hard work and Kalpi's support which i will explain in later chapters. i have seen a boy in my life who was just 8 years old but got too mature coz of the regular fights in his home. He was so disturbed coz of them that it affected his brain and he had some problems. Now he is fine.that is what I trying to show here that the divorce affects the child most.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Nice start
raghna divorce 😲
continue soon

Thank u. Updating in a while

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Nyc start... Looking forward to reading more...

Thank u.

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
What an emotional start😭 But liked the intense 😉

Thank u dear

Originally posted by: sampa79
Nice story update soon next part eagarly waiting to know y divorce

Thank u dear.. updating in a while but u have to wait more to know about the reason for divorce.

Originally posted by: Rubz1234
Too good ya vish... Update soon.

Thank u dear.

Originally posted by: eishe10
Interesting story😊

Thank u.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Shivanie05
Even though I really don't like sad stories I will give this one a shot because it has good flashback scenes great writing my dear.

Thank u dear.. i assure u that this is not a sad story.. Every chapter will have something relaxing in it. In start the characters are sad but they won't remain the same always... as the story will progress, they will start finding the way to happiness.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Oh my...start from divorce! 😲 was it because Rags became too busy to give time to his family? I am sure it'll be union only ahead! Amazing story & concept. loved it. 😃👏

Thank u Charu.. m glad u liked it. Union will be the end of the story.😆 To know about the reason for divorce u have to wait for some more time.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: foram.
nice one...
so they are married
have ten year old child
he is successful now
but she wants divorce...
interesting...

Thank u.. yes this the story of a mature couple whose thoughts for life are different. M happy tht u found it interesting.😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
I like the concept of this ff
Look like Raghav make success come in between him and Kalpi
Kalpi FB of their happy moments was amazing
That Raghav in her FB was a doting husband who love his wife
I wonder where is that Raghav now, who is ready to give up on their relationship and to make it worst he didn't have the simply manners to show up at the hearing
My heart break for Kalpi
I'm looking forward to read more
Superb starting

Thnks Natasha..

@Bold : Bingo!!

Rags has his own reason for not attending the court.. it will be more clear in next update. Happy that u liked the FB. Will update in a while.