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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome Vish! I think it's an intense story. Like u said giving reality or insight into a relationship. It was lovely how Kalpi reminisces her past , her happy life. Now her life seems too bleak, just like how she dressed for the court, no jewellery or makeup. Would love to know what happened to the 'once so much in love' couple that now their fate is being decided by the court. Raghav has become a successful business man in these years. Why is he absent from the court where his future is being decided? Is it really because he's busy or he doesn't want the separation? His lawyer said that he would like to give the relationship another chance. Then why is Kalpana hell bent on divorcing him? Both want the custody of their daughter. Hope they at least give the relationship a chance for their daughter's sake.

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Resss

unresss😆😃

woww.. a new ff.. dats reallyy awesum..

frstlyy I lykd d sentences u used to express kalpi's pain especially d last para.. I lykd it!

the story seems vry intrestngg as I guess raghav s nt rich frm d strt... and 10yrs has passed n a daughter ria.. and u mentioned dat in few months she has becum matured to undrstnd her mom's pain this one s very undrstndable..

so they r getting divorced.. this makes really interestng to knw d past.. update it wenevr u have tym n continue soon..

Edited by vasishna - 10 years ago

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

great start...love flashback...but divorce??? interesting...

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shikha

@shikha-aggarwal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice start
raghna divorce 😲
continue soon

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Nyc start... Looking forward to reading more...

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sweet_aditi
res 😃
unres 😃

awesome start dear 👏👏
raghav n kalpi's divorce 😲 but why??? n hw raghav became successful in dese 10 years???
raghav nt giving time 2 kalpi is d only reason 4 divorce?? i kno 2 many questions r in my mind n 4 answers i hav 2 wait 4 next update😉
but veryyy eager 2 read next part 😃 update soon 😳

Thanks Aditi.. M happy u liked the starting.. So many ques... Well I have only one answer... Keep reading to know more.😆

Will try to update as soon as possible.😊

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Autumm
Wow vish...sooo intense...update soon k...eager to read more...

Thank u so much Jan(I hope i dint make another blunder with name). Will try to update soon.

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: shonali164
res
m again 3rd
unres
amazing start.
Its so emotional, loving and touching.
Flashback are awsm n m just drooling over ragnaa
bt present is so saddy. Rihana love dis name.
Awsm vishu lv it.

P.s u r writing love story is ltl shock me 😆 n flashblack of story realy amazd me.
Dnt evr say u cnt write romantic story.

Ye lo.. mri frn 3rd pe kundli maar k bethi hai!! 🤗

M glad u liked it. I was scared that u might kill me for RagNa divorce.

About Rihanna... i wanted a name which has R Na both.. I m glad u liked it.

Love story😲 Not sure whether it will stay as love story or I will add mystery or crime to it. But i thought to give a try to love story as CID n crime patrol has spoiled my brain n KK was even doubting me as yesterday I was sharing a full proof plan to kill him with him only. so thought to learn some romance else Shaadi k pehle divorce ho jayega.😆