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shikha

@shikha-aggarwal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Awesome update
fabulous flashbacks
happy to know raghav wanted to give second chance to their relationship
update soon🤗

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Resss

unresss..😃 this tym I really unres-ed soon!😆😛

heyyllooo vish..

update was super intrestngg..

as far as I know.. first tym I read a romantic part in ur ff.. and u did it really well and lso diffrntlyy I lykd it!

in the ff it seems lyk no one cares abt other lyf.. lyk gauri being busy with parties n pakhi in trips and all.. at least kalpi has her daughter as a company to her.. and d reason u gave fr ria in d previous comment s totally agreeable.. it affects children a lot..

even though its still a 2nd chap I'm very curious to know d past.. lyk wat might be d reason dat raghav has done a drastic mistake..

anyways I'll be waiting patientlyy fr d updates..

Edited by vasishna - 10 years ago

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sweet_aditi

@sweet_aditi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

wow.. what an emotional update!!!.. awesome update yar 👏
i want 2 read more... 😃
plzzz update next part soon 😃

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niranjana

@niru04

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

So lovely update.ragna confession so nice.ragavs inner feelings too emotional.but wat the reason behind their divorce.update soon

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Autumm

@Autumm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

superbb dear...update soon...want to knw more about ragna prob...😉

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sampa79

@sampa79

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Superb, update soon next part

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

interesting, so what has gone wrong with them,

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Shivanie Ramballie

@Shivanie05

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Sweet lord this is excellent writing my dear this FF is getting very very interested please continue soon

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

beautiful dear! its strange how you write so many ff's together yet the scenes or the story are so diff from each other! Aww Raghav was an average? Kalpi as usual was brilliant!

Could so relate to Kalpi's loneliness! But it is the bitter truth of life that after marriage relations are taken for granted and then one of them feels lonely and left out!

She has a house full of people but its no longer a happy home!

Aww Raghav was so romantic! And now he expects her to understand? Money people can make but can it buy back the love you have lost?

hmmm you may buy pleasure but not love!

Pity Raghav who ignored Kalpi for so long!

But as they say its never to late to rekindle the fire! Maybe they just need a break only the two of them together and no one else!

Fool all he had to do was plan a second honeymoon😆 or even a family outing would be great and poor Riya would also have enjoyed!

Lets see what Raghav can do to win his Kalpi back other than just claiming the custody of their daughter to hold her back!

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Aww Vish! I don't know what to say... today words fail me... I'm typing...deleting and then typing again. Loved this update would be an understatement. I bonded with the story so much that I still have tears in my eyes. Maybe it has got to do with the harsh reality in life in stark contrast to the other lovey-dovey stories. Kalpi is a perfect daughter-in-law who cares for her husband's family like her own. She enquires about a sis-in-law whose life starts and ends with partying and friends, concerned about a mom-in-law who is too busy in attending exhibitions and kitty parties, maybe. Still sits and waits for her husband who never have dinner with her. She's the perfect mother who doesn't want her daughter to know about her parent's marital discord. She's a simple person who is happy to have lunch with her colleagues in college and help her students in their personal problems.

The flashback scene was very romantic, realistic like that of a newly married couple who finds romance in every little thing they do. They were very much in love. Till now you had shown Kalpi's pov. Now you have shown Raghav reminiscing their past about how he plucked up courage and proposed her. It was lovely how she patiently wait for him to ask her. He doesn't want them to separate and he thinks child custody is the only thing that ensures she doesn't leave him. But why doesn't he make her understand . Agreed he couldn't express himself and she promised to read his mind. But later on he was very romantic. In order to achieve success in life he sacrificed their lives . Eager to know what went wrong for a much in love couple that today their fate is being decided by the court. Loved it so much that. When will you update next. I know you are busy on weekends. But please... update soon 😳

I'm blabbering too much. Still under the effect, I think.

Edited by ragna_luv - 10 years ago

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